Merge pull request #438 from BitcoinDesign/feature/design-crit-info-update

Stephen DeLorme · web-flow · commit 48a0d110b33f · 2022-12-15T16:53:42.000-05:00
Design crit info update
diff --git a/Bitcoin-Design-Crits.md b/Bitcoin-Design-Crits.md
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 # Bitcoin Design Crits
 
-## What are Bitcoin Design Crits?
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-Bitcoin Design Crits are opportunities for bitcoin products to get design critiques (crits) on a particular page or section in their product. Actionable suggestions for improving usability, user interface, interaction, and visual aesthetics are given by members in the Bitcoin Design Community.
+Bitcoin Design Crits are opportunities for bitcoin products to get design critiques (crits) on a particular feature, page or aspect of their product. Actionable suggestions for improving usability, user interface, interaction, and visual aesthetics are given by members in the Bitcoin Design Community.
 
 ## How does it work?
 
-1. A bitcoin product submits a page or section they want reviewed on Bitcoin Design Crits in the [#design-review](https://bitcoindesign.slack.com/archives/C019MTNFKL7) channel in our Slack.
+1. A bitcoin product submits a page or section they want reviewed on Bitcoin Design Crits in the [#bitcoin-design-crits](https://bitcoindesign.slack.com/archives/C019MTNFKL7) channel in our Slack.
 
-We will only focus on a particular page or section of your product so we can give the highest amount of value. Reviewing a whole product is an extensive and involved process that is better suited to be dealt with by a dedicated Product Designer. If you need a Product Designer for your bitcoin product, reach out in the opportunities channel in our Slack.
+We will only focus on a specific part of your product, so we can give the highest amount of value. Reviewing a whole product is an extensive and involved process that is better suited to be dealt with by a dedicated Product Designer. If you need a Product Designer for your bitcoin product, reach out in the [#opportunities](https://bitcoindesign.slack.com/archives/C016D659EU9) channel in our Slack.
 
-2. A product is selected for the next upcoming Bitcoin Design Crit call by members of the community.
+2. The proposal is discussed by members of the community and a call is scheduled as appropriate.
 
 3. Product designers interested in reviewing jump into a collaborative Figma file **PRIOR** to call, where they crit the product page or section submitted. This will all be public and open for anyone to view, in classic open-source fashion.
 
-4. Product designers who crit the product present their feedback to the product team in the scheduled Bitcoin Design Crit calls, which happen Thursdays at 2:00PM UTC.
+4. Product designers who crit the product present their feedback to the product team in the scheduled calls.
 
 Follow up help and suggestions on the feedback given is always available.
 
 ## Who can take part?
 
-Anyone who is working on a bitcoin product. Whether its a new page you want reviewed before release, or an old page that needs polishing, Bitcoin Design Crits can help. Open-source products get priority over closed-source products.
+Anyone who is working on a bitcoin product. Whether its a new page or user flow you want reviewed before release, or an old one that needs polishing, Bitcoin Design Crits can help. Open-source products get priority over closed-source products.
 
-Calls are recorded and open for anyone to join in and view the crit take place. We greatly appreciate the pseudonymous and private nature of bitcoin and are more than happy to accommodate those who would prefer not to reveal their identity.
+Calls are recorded and published on the [BitcoinTV](https://bitcointv.com/a/bitcoin_design/videos) and [YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/@BitcoinDesign) channels, and open for anyone to join in. We greatly appreciate the pseudonymous and private nature of bitcoin and are more than happy to accommodate those who would prefer not to reveal their identity.
 
 ## What information do I need to provide for a crit?
 
 - The section or page you want reviewed. We can help you identify an area that needs work if you're not sure
-- Links to any design files you use in your product if you have them: Figma file, design system, icon set, brand assets
+- Links to any design files you use in your product if you have them: Figma/Penpot file, design system, icon set, brand assets
 - Access information, if your app has a testnet or beta version that requires authentication to use 
 
 ## What we won't do
@@ -39,10 +37,8 @@ Calls are recorded and open for anyone to join in and view the crit take place.
 
 ## When do these happen?
 
-Once a week on Thursday 2:00PM UTC in the [bitcoin design jitsi](https://meet.jit.si/bitcoindesign). Calls are recorded and open for anyone to join in and view the crit take place. If you do not wish for the call to be recorded, we can accommodate.
-
-Cut-off for submissions is Tuesdays for that weeks crit. This is so we have adequate time to review your product.
+The calls are organized to best fit the availability (and time zones) of interested participants.
 
-Upcoming Bitcoin Design Crit calls can be found [here](https://github.com/BitcoinDesign/Meta/issues?q=is%3Aissue+is%3Aopen+Bitcoin+Design+Crits). 
+Upcoming and previous Bitcoin Design Crit can be found [here](https://github.com/BitcoinDesign/Meta/issues?q=is%3Aissue+%22Bitcoin+Design+Crits%22). 
 
-You can also subscribe to our auto-updating calendar. [More info here](https://bitcoin.design/calendar/).
+You can also subscribe to our auto-updating calendar. More info [here](https://bitcoin.design/calendar/).
