Update jsx-is-not-html.md

petehunt · zpao · commit 9eed65d7dbb9 · 2013-06-17T17:18:48.000-07:00
diff --git a/docs/docs/jsx-is-not-html.md b/docs/docs/jsx-is-not-html.md
@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@ JSX looks like HTML but there are some important differences you may run into.
 
 ## Whitespace removal
 
-JSX doesn't follow the same whitespace elimination rules as HTML. JSX removes all the whitespaces between two curly braces expressions. If you want to have a white space, a work-around is to add `{' '}`.
+JSX doesn't follow the same whitespace elimination rules as HTML. JSX removes all whitespace between two curly braces expressions. If you want to have whitespace, simply add `{' '}`.
 
 ```javascript
 <div>{this.props.name} {' '} {this.props.surname}</div>
 ```
 
-This behavior is still being debated. Follow [Issue #65](https://github.com/facebook/react/issues/65) to be updated on the situation.
+Follow [Issue #65](https://github.com/facebook/react/issues/65) for discussion on this behavior.
 
 ## HTML Entities
 
@@ -26,20 +26,20 @@ You can insert HTML entities within literal text in JSX:
 <div>First &middot; Second</div>
 ```
 
-If you want to display an HTML entity within a dynamic content, you will run into double escaping issues as React escapes all the strings you are displaying in order to prevent a wide range of XSS attacks by default.
+If you want to display an HTML entity within dynamic content, you will run into double escaping issues as React escapes all the strings you are displaying in order to prevent a wide range of XSS attacks by default.
 
 ```javascript
 // Bad: It displays "First &middot; Second"
 <div>{'First &middot; Second'}</div>
 ```
 
-There are various ways to work-around this issue. The easiest one is to write unicode character directly in Javascript. You've got to make sure that the file is saved as UTF-8 and that the propers UTF-8 directives are set so the browser will display it correctly.
+There are various ways to work-around this issue. The easiest one is to write unicode character directly in Javascript. You need to make sure that the file is saved as UTF-8 and that the proper UTF-8 directives are set so the browser will display it correctly.
 
 ```javascript
 <div>{'First · Second'}</div>
 ```
 
-A safer alternative is to find the <a href="http://www.fileformat.info/info/unicode/char/b7/index.htm">unicode number corresponding to the entity</a> and use it inside of a Javascript string.
+A safer alternative is to find the [unicode number corresponding to the entity](http://www.fileformat.info/info/unicode/char/b7/index.htm) and use it inside of a JavaScript string.
 
 ```javascript
 <div>{'First \u00b7 Second'}</div>
@@ -52,29 +52,29 @@ You can use mixed arrays with strings and JSX elements.
 <div>{['First ', <span>&middot;</span>, ' Second']}</div>
 ```
 
-In last resort, you always have the ability to insert raw HTML inside of the div.
+As a last resort, you always have the ability to insert raw HTML.
 
 ```javascript
-<div dangerouslySetInnerHTML={{'{{'}}__html: 'First &middot; Second'}} />
+<div dangerouslySetInnerHTML={{__html: 'First &middot; Second'}} />
 ```
 
 ## Comments
 
-JSX supports both single-line and multi-lines Javascript comments within a tag declaration:
+JSX supports both single-line and multi-line JavaScript comments within a tag declaration:
 
 ```javascript
-<div // This is a single line comment:
+<div // This is a single-line comment:
     /*
-        And a multiline
+        And a multi-line
         comment
     */
 />
 ```
 
-As of React 0.3, there is no good way to insert comments within the children section. [Issue #82](https://github.com/facebook/react/issues/82) is tracking progress to enable the following way to write comments:
+As of React 0.3, there is no good way to insert comments within the children section. [Issue #82](https://github.com/facebook/react/issues/82) is tracking progress to enable the following:
 
 ```javascript
-// Note: The following is not implemented yet!
+// Note: This is not implemented yet!
 <div>
   {/* This is a comment */}
 </div>
