Incorporate Meghan's feedback for last large NOTES block

Ryan Neufeld · Ryan Neufeld · commit bc0b2e689bf8 · 2013-12-01T16:47:25.000-05:00
diff --git a/databases/korma/korma.asciidoc b/databases/korma/korma.asciidoc
@@ -22,20 +22,25 @@ dependencies or start a REPL using lein-try:
 $ lein try korma org.postgresql/postgresql
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-[NOTE]
-====
-You'll need a running SQL database and existing table to connect to
-for this recipe. We suggest PostgreSQL.
 
-If you're a Mac user and don't have PostgreSQL installed yet, you can
-go here http://postgresapp.com/ for an easy to use DMG.
+To follow along with this recipe, you'll need a running SQL database
+and existing table to connect to. We suggest PostgreSQL footnote:[Mac
+users: visit http://postgresapp.com/ to download an
+easy-to-install DMG. Everyone else: find a guide for your operating
+system on the
+https://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Detailed_installation_guides[PostgreSQL
+Wiki].]
 
 After you have PostgreSQL running (presumably on _localhost:5432_) run the following
 command to create a database for this recipe:
 
 [source,bash]
 ----
+# On Mac
 $ /Applications/Postgres.app/Contents/MacOS/bin/createdb learn_korma
+
+# Everyone else:
+$ createdb learn_korma
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 ====
 
