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Doc: proofreading for v12 release notes.
Mostly markup improvements, with a couple of grammar fixes. Liudmila Mantrova Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/CAEkD-mDxVV1Hrxzo3-hPaS5b1s-+Gin+9Cbu2eMBqRovRVjC0w@mail.gmail.com
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<para>
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Treat object-name columns in
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the <link linkend="information-schema"><structname>information_schema</structname></link>
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views as being of type <type>name</type> not <type>varchar</type>
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views as being of type <type>name</type>, not <type>varchar</type>
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</para>
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Reduce the <acronym>WAL</acronym> write overhead
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of <acronym>GiST</acronym>, <acronym>GIN</acronym> and
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of <acronym>GiST</acronym>, <acronym>GIN</acronym>, and
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<acronym>SP-GiST</acronym> index creation (Anastasia Lubennikova,
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Andrey V. Lepikhov)
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Allow <link linkend="storage-toast"><literal>TOASTed</literal></link>
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Allow <link linkend="storage-toast">toasted</link>
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values to be minimally decompressed (Paul Ramsey)
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</para>
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Allow <link linkend="sql-altertable"><command>ALTER TABLE .. SET
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Allow <link linkend="sql-altertable"><command>ALTER TABLE ... SET
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NOT NULL</command></link> to avoid unnecessary table scans (Sergei
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Kornilov)
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Allow <command>ALTER TABLE .. SET DATA TYPE</command> changing between
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Allow <command>ALTER TABLE ... SET DATA TYPE</command> changing between
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<type>timestamp</type> and <type>timestamptz</type> to avoid a
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table rewrite when the session time zone is <acronym>UTC</acronym>
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Progress is reported in the <link
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system view
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system view.
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</para>
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</para>
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This output can also be obtained in <xref linkend="auto-explain"/>
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This output can also be obtained when using <xref linkend="auto-explain"/>
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by setting <varname>auto_explain.log_settings</varname>.
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Add connection parameter <xref linkend="libpq-tcp-user-timeout"/>
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to control libpq's <acronym>TCP</acronym> timeout (Ryohei Nagaura)
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to control <application>libpq</application>'s <acronym>TCP</acronym>
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timeout (Ryohei Nagaura)
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</para>
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Allow libpq (and thus psql) to report only
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the <literal>SQLSTATE</literal> value in error messages (Didier
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Allow <application>libpq</application> (and thus
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<application>psql</application>) to report only the
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<literal>SQLSTATE</literal> value in error messages (Didier Gautheron)
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Add libpq
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Add <application>libpq</application>
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function <link linkend="libpq-pqresultmemorysize"><function>PQresultMemorySize()</function></link>
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Remove the no-display/debug flag from libpq's
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Remove the no-display/debug flag from <application>libpq</application>'s
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Allow vacuumdb to disable waiting for locks or skipping all-visible
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Allow <application>vacuumdb</application> to disable waiting for locks
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or skipping all-visible pages (Nathan Bossart)
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Improve tab completion of <command>CREATE TABLE, CREATE TRIGGER,
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CREATE EVENT TRIGGER, ANALYZE, EXPLAIN, VACUUM, ALTER TABLE,
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ALTER INDEX, ALTER DATABASE, ALTER INDEX ALTER COLUMN</command>
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Improve tab completion of <command>CREATE TABLE</command>,
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<command>CREATE TRIGGER</command>,
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<command>CREATE EVENT TRIGGER</command>,
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<command>ANALYZE</command>, <command>EXPLAIN</command>,
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<command>VACUUM</command>, <command>ALTER TABLE</command>,
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<command>ALTER INDEX</command>, <command>ALTER DATABASE</command>,
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and <command>ALTER INDEX ALTER COLUMN</command>
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option (Tom Lane)
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Improve precision of <application>pgbench</application>'s
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Improve pgbench's error reporting with clearer messages and return
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