Rephrase the news entry

johnslavik · johnslavik · commit 8a8323755c47 · 2025-10-15T17:27:43.000+02:00
diff --git a/Misc/NEWS.d/next/Library/2025-10-15-17-23-51.gh-issue-140141.j2mUDB.rst b/Misc/NEWS.d/next/Library/2025-10-15-17-23-51.gh-issue-140141.j2mUDB.rst
@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
-When a distribution cannot be discovered with
-``importlib.metadata.Distribution.from_name``, the
-:py:class:`importlib.metadata.PackageNotFoundError` traceback no longer
-includes a transient :exc:`StopIteration` exception.
+The :py:class:`importlib.metadata.PackageNotFoundError` traceback raised when
+``importlib.metadata.Distribution.from_name`` cannot discover a
+distribution no longer includes a transient :exc:`StopIteration` exception trace.
 
 Contributed by Bartosz Sławecki in :gh:`140142`.
