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@@ -86,13 +86,13 @@ <h2>About Arpee.</h2>
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-                    I am passionate about deconstructing and learning how things work, and optimize and improve from that point, this is how I landed a technical lead DevOps role despite being initially hired as a software developer and having a totally unrelated educational background to begin with.
+                    I am passionate about deconstructing and learning how things work, and optimize and improve from that point, that is how I landed a technical lead DevOps role despite being initially hired as a software developer and having a totally unrelated educational background.
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-                    In all companies that I joined, I integrate the work to my lifestyle and make it a day-to-day responsbility, like a child-project that I own and lookout for - even beyond office hours.
+                    In all companies that I joined, I integrate the work to my lifestyle and make it a day-to-day responsbility, like a child-project that I own and religiously lookout for.
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-                    I love solving problems, to go with that, I am also relentless.
+                    I love solving problems, and I am relentless while at it.
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