Name : Mutiara Nor Afifah
Class : B/17910039
STOP YOUNG MARRIAGE
Outline Of Argumentative Essay
Introductory Paragraph
1. General Statement:
People get married late are better than some people marry early because they
have more conveniently than after marriage.
2. Thesis Statement:
a) The first reason why some people prefer to wait until when they are older to
marry is that it promotes levels of dependancy and also reduces survival
chances of the girl and her offsprings.
b) The second reason why some people prefer to wait until when they are older
to marry is that many girls in early marriages end up having unplanned
pregancies
c) The third reason why some people prefer to wait until when they are older to
marry is that enjoying the young age.
Body Paragraph I
Thesis 1 :
early marriage should not be promoted as it denies the girl child a chance to be
educated. it promotes levels of dependancy and also reduces survival chances of the girl
and her offsprings.
Statement 1:
According to Hodgkinson (2013), early marriage should not be promoted as it
denies the girl child a chance to be educated. This stems from the fact that in some parts
of the world, girls are married off at a tender age of 13 or 14 years. Notably, physical
development does not also represent mental development because a successfully
marriage requires that the couple assist each other emotionally and financially. This
means that when a girl is married off at a tender age, she cannot be in a position to make
essential decisions on her own. Thus, she will end up being dependent on his husband,
which will deny the family economic freedom. Additionally, education helps girls to
learn life skills, which is essential for them to maintain their hygiene and of their family.
Closing:
that girls should be given a chance to pursue their dreams as education abounds as
one way that they can achieve success in life.
Body Paragraph II
Thesis 2 :
many girls in early marriages end up having unplanned pregancies.
Statement 2.1 :
Unicef (2005) campaigns against early marriage due to the problems associated
with early pregancny. This is not advisbale since the children in such marriage end up
suffering because of the lack of basic needs. Another threat concerns the increased
number of abortions, which leads to death or birth defects. Unicef (2005) has also
recorded a high number of maternal mortality rates that result because of inexpensive
labor, unsafe abortions or obstructed labor. Infertility can also result due to such ealry
pregnancies. Other complications associated with early pregnancies include giving
birth to premature children, retarded fetal growth or complications such as low birth
weight.
Closing :
This point proves that they do not have many experiences to take care of baby.
Body Paragraph III
Thesis 3 :
The last reason why some people prefer to wait until when they are older to marry
is that having a stable job.
Statement 3.1 :
This point shows that people life has three important problems such as having a
stable job, marriage, building the house so having a stable job is one of important
problems to have happiness in the future. When they have a stable job, they can support
themselves and help difficulties from their family.
Closing :
Then they can marry easily that their family do not worry about their life and
family.
Argumentative Essay
STOP YOUNG MARRIAGE!
In our life, each person has a particular situation so that some people prefer to
marry when they are young, while others prefer to wait until they are older to marry.
However, people prefer to marry late have some conveniences about economy, finance,
experience. They also have a stable job to take care their future family firm so that some
people who prefer to wait until when they are older to marry. People get married late
are better than some people marry early because they have more conveniently than after
marriage.
However, proponents have refuted the reasons advanced by proponents citing the
fact that the girl can benefit economically and socially. This is not entirely true since it
has been estalished that it promotes levels of dependancy and also reduces survival
chances of the girl and her offsprings. According to Hodgkinson (2013), early marriage
should not be promoted as it denies the girl child a chance to be educated. This stems
from the fact that in some parts of the world, girls are married off at a tender age of 13
or 14 years. Notably, physical development does not also represent mental development
because a successfully marriage requires that the couple assist each other emotionally
and financially. This means that when a girl is married off at a tender age, she cannot be
in a position to make essential decisions on her own. Thus, she will end up being
dependent on his husband, which will deny the family economic freedom. Additionally,
education helps girls to learn life skills, which is essential for them to maintain their
hygiene and of their family. that girls should be given a chance to pursue their dreams as
education abounds as one way that they can achieve success in life.
Many girls in early marriages end up having unplanned pregancies. Unicef (2005)
campaigns against early marriage due to the problems associated with early pregancny.
This is not advisbale since the children in such marriage end up suffering because of the
lack of basic needs. Another threat concerns the increased number of abortions, which
leads to death or birth defects. Unicef (2005) has also recorded a high number of
maternal mortality rates that result because of inexpensive labor, unsafe abortions or
obstructed labor. Infertility can also result due to such ealry pregnancies. Other
complications associated with early pregnancies include giving birth to premature
children, retarded fetal growth or complications such as low birth weight. This point
proves that they do not have many experiences to take care of baby.
The last reason why some people prefer to wait until when they are older to marry
is that having a stable job. This point shows that people life has three important
problems such as having a stable job, marriage, building the house so having a stable
job is one of important problems to have happiness in the future. When they have a
stable job, they can support themselves and help difficulties from their family. Then
they can marry easily that their family do not worry about their life and family.
