Partnerships For Learning: Extending Knowledge A N D Understanding of Creative Writing Processes in
Partnerships For Learning: Extending Knowledge A N D Understanding of Creative Writing Processes in
John Edwards
Lecturer in Secondary English, University of Portsmouth
Abstract
This article explores the idea that in order to improve the ways we teach
children to write creatively it is worth exploring how we, as teachers and
writers, do that ourselves. It describes some of the stages of a curriculum
development project undertaken in the Portsmouth and Southampton
Postgraduate Certificate in Education (PGCE) English teams, begun in
2004. The project was supported by funding from the Esmee Fairbairn
Foundation and was designed to foster a range of learning activities for
trainee teachers in the area of teaching creative writing to pupils in
schools. The project that was developed had multiple aims: subject
knowledge development in trainee English teachers; pedagogic
exploration amongst all teachers involved looking at how the difficult
area of teaching creative writing might be better addressed. This article
evaluates the aims of the project and some of the outcomes and argues
for recognition of the training year as a vital area for exploring issues in
teaching, beyond competence. The article draws on a variety of sources,
including participant observation notes made in writing workshops,
responses to a questionnaire completed by project participants and
excerpts from writing collected across the project produced by teachers
and pupils.
Key Words
Writers,partnership and 177; creative teaching and learning, seEf-esteem,
motivation, teacher training,
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Partnerships for learning: extending knowledge and Understanding
Introduction
This article will describe and evaluate a small-scale project which
developed from a number of concerns felt by tutors working to train
teachers for secondary English classrooms in the UK. Both tutors had
observed the profile of applicants to their respective courses and noted
how much more common it was for prospective teachers to describe
their strengths in terms of reading: a factor noted by Goodwyn (2002),
Ellis (2003). Far less common was the bid for a place on a secondary
English course based on teachers presenting themselves as writers. In the
first instance we were interested in how we could address issues of
subject knowledge development in the teaching of writing through a
project specifically devoted to creative writing. Like Hopper (2005) we
believed that the opportunity for trainees to focus on an area of practice
would deepen their understanding of the extent and range of the
professional role of a teacher. Our purpose was to develop a curriculum
project that could bring together trainee teachers with more experienced
teachers, developing insights into good practice together. We believed
that a curriculum project that had the two groups of teachers working
together might offer a new opportunity to strengthen professional
development and exchange. As moves are afoot to re-write the National
Curriculum for English, we felt it pertinent that our trainees should
experience the wide ranging views held within the English teaching
profession, valuing particular aspects of curriculum and arguing for their
extension. These aims together - to develop subject knowledge and
strengthen partnerships for learning - formed the basis of a funding bid
to explore the ways in which we might extend the range of different
writing activities in the various quarters of our courses: for trainees, for
mentors and pupil groups.
In more recent years the ‘crafting’ of writing has become regulated into
frameworks to produce different kinds of writing for different purposes
and audiences. The National Curriculum in its various incarnations since
1988 has set down the conventions of writing into identifiable ‘triplets’ of
skills, such as the creative response triplet, ‘imagine, explore, entertain’ .
In turn these have been integrated into exam specification assessment
criteria. In most GCSE specifications the purpose of ‘writing to entertain’
may amount to little more than 5% of the overall grade award, a single
piece of coursework in most instances.
the battles over the curriculum in the last ten years . . . . have
forced English teachers to define and redefine their subject
philosophies in the light of the policy demands made on them
(Marshall, 2000:2)
Abbs (1982) located the high point of creative work in English teaching
to the period of ‘child-centred practice’ which flourished during the 1970s
and 1980s. The emphasis on personal response and expression which
characterised this era is captured by Witkin who claimed:
English teachers of the time whom Witkin cites, appeared to share this
pedagogic stance:
Yet Abbs was critical of the unfocused and indulgent view of creative
Whilst creative writing might have lost its privileged position in the
English classroom, the interest and support for creative writing in
classrooms hasn’t been lost entirely. In 2004, in both partnerships there
were many trainees who described themselves as writers, some who had
a degree of success in publishing. According to surveys and observations
undertaken by Dart (2001); Ellis, (2005) many English teachers would
appear to uphold the principle of creative writing as an important means
of exploring personal feelings and of writing as an end in itself.
The project
The project commenced in November 2004 with a first workshop which
was attended by 35 participants - teachers and trainees together. At this
workshop we asked the participants to complete a short questionnaire.
One wrote:
creative writing is crucial tofinding space within the
curriculum for writing for writing k sake ... removing
boundaries and pre-requisites allows pupils to eqlore writing
for pleasure.
Another claimed:
creative writing is one of the only areas that we teach that is
totally subjective and from personal experience.
What these responses indicate is that classrooms are crowded sites which
d o not provide the potential for individual thought and feeling in the
type of private space reported below in pupils’ accounts of their own
writing practices.
One of the ways in which teachers of creative writing might gain greater
confidence with introducing creative work is if they had new ways of
being able to assess the processes and outcomes. Marshall (20041,
drawing on the work of Sadler, argued that there was a need to examine
pupil creative response as evidence of different kinds of attainment, and
that the assessment frames need to be opened up, viewing success as
‘heading towards a horizon rather than a fixed goal’ (2004:25).Craft
(2005) endorses this idea with an inclusive stance that everyone can be
viewed as having creative potential ... ‘(in we accept a spectrum of
knowledge’ (2005:30)as evidence, rather than specific, defined outcomes.
More contemporary debates about creative learning appear still to value
what Witkin described as ‘sensate experience’ but now promote other
models that support craft and skill. Marshall refers to creative practice
being fostered through introduction to ‘guild knowledge’ where reading
and writing processes are interwoven to create a stronger idea of what
might constitute a successful piece of writing.
Schools’ context
The teachers in our regions all worked within the tensions described
above - in a curriculum heavy in content and with the need to comply
with externally imposed policies relating to assessment. However, there
were other professional issues at the forefront of advisory team action in
2004/05. The chief complaint registered in Heads of English meetings
was that it was achievable to teach specific skills to pupils and to help
them to better craft writing if the frames were provided. In the short term
Jim Riordan, a local writer based in Portsmouth and noted for his links
with schools and local writing groups, led the first session. Riordan
talked about writing processes. These included: the need for a regular
space for writing; writing every day; the development of one’s belief in
one’s own stories; the ideas that grow from memories, encounters and
events. Sweet Clarinet, his debut novel for children in 1998, is the story
of a boy growing up in a heavily bombed Portsmouth. Riordan described
to the audience how this had grown from his walking down a particular
street in Southsea on a cool, windy day and the smell of brick dust
hitting his nostrils. This smell recovered a strong memory of being a boy
during the war and from this smell a whole range of other recollections
and ideas emerged, eventually to be shaped into Sweet Clarinet. Whilst
the processes of crafting the story underwent a series of drafts and re-
writes he claimed that the starting process was the idea which was raw,
messy and unshaped initially. Riordan emphasised that a vital process for
writing development was the opportunity to share writing amongst peers,
to receive full, critical feedback.
Writing together
It might be a virtue of the novelty of a new project that we were able to
observe a very collegiate atmosphere in this first writing workshop when
the tempo moved away from listening to an established writer and into a
space where individuals or pairs began to write. Riordan emphasised the
processes he had expounded previously:
Sharing writing
When Riordan convened the sharing of responses, the willing volunteers
were trainee teachers. Mark was an interesting candidate o n the course, a
highly trained musician and an exceptionally well qualified English
candidate. Mark used the workshop to subvert any notion of assessment
of writing currently operating in school. He wrote horizontally across the
page, veered between clear letters, words and symbols. The writing was
a stream of consciousness, without a clear story or obvious characters. It
stood out for the beauty of the language and the sounds given life by
Mark’s performance of it. The audience were complimentary of the
writing - but they were also perplexed. It didn’t have a clear narrative.
Most of the audience weren’t sure what he was trying to say. But they
were enamoured of his control of sound in the language and his sense of
producing a thought-provoking piece. If assessed via one set of criteria
he might easily have been judged to have shown that he can ‘imagine,
explore and entertain’ but the writing did not conform to other elements
of craft and skill. His handwriting was difficult to read and he refused
constraints of sentences and paragraphs. If assessed by competency
standards, Mark’s writing might well have been judged as in need of
further work. Essentially, Mark’s success as a writer was being received
intuitively and holistically on the basis of the sound of quality rather than
the look of polished finish. As Marshall has argued, when we assess
writing as good it isn’t always easy to define why. It is the reader or
audience who make a holistic judgment about quality. She wrote:
The plenary of the workshop debated what value such processes held.
Generally the mood was positive about being told to write and insisting
on putting anxieties to one side in favour of ‘having a go’. Though ‘free
writing’ was thought to be quite difficult to do on demand, it was also
seen as potentially liberating. Clearly, some writers had found the open
forum very productive and had produced high quality pieces in a short
amount of time. Most believed in the peer review process but felt that it
was in need of development. The criteria for judging needed to be
debated and the manners for feedback explored further. Interestingly, the
experienced teachers told how peer review of pupil work is a well-
established process in many schools and pupils are increasingly well-
trained in giving positive and constructive feedback.
workshops, the pupils, working together with the teacher and a trainee,
explored ideas (risk-took) and discovered different preferences and
abilities with working in a variety of modes. The abandonment of the
unit frame and the assessment outcomes liberated some of the pupils
from the school-based approaches to writing which are always framed by
clear assessment outcomes. In one Southampton group the teacher noted
that one girl, who was in set three (below average attainment) was
beginning to explore a whole different critical vocabulary as she emerged
as one of the stronger voices in peer evaluation of work. Another girl in
a different context, who had a history as a ‘looked after’ child, used the
workshops to develop a way of expressing painful memories as well as
current joys. Her behaviour issues were what marked her out for
comment in class time but here the fresh atmosphere of the ‘writing club’
gave her a new space to explore her own ideas more safely. By far the
most outstanding achievement was the contributions made by a girl on
the Special Needs Register, who arrived at secondary school without a
recorded National Curriculum level of attainment in reading or writing
and who, after much evasion and stalling, produced a coherent poem for
admission to the anthology. That she attended every session was itself an
achievement but that she eventually found something to say and
represent her was extraordinary, Her work was appraised alongside her
peers and for the first time in her school life she found herself included
in a community of learners.
Conclusions
At the end of a year long project it is possible to view some identifiable
outcomes. Trainee teachers and experienced teachers wrote together and
produced anthologies of writing. All teachers had the opportunity to
explore both their own processes of writing and how to develop some
new opportunities for pupil writing in schools. None of the processes
explored in this project are particularly groundbreaking. However, the
current vogue for professional development is goal-oriented and
assessment driven and we wanted to explore ‘possibility spaces’ and
‘learning horizons’ as discussed by Craft and Marshall above.
Trainees were able to explore both their own creative practice and how
One initiative which was planned in the original design of the project
was the establishment of a website on which pupils and trainees from
both partnerships could post work at regular intervals and exchange
commentaries. There are national website such as Kids on the Net
(http://kotn.ntu.ac.uk/)that d o this already but the establishment of a
website would d o more to puhlicise the work of pupils at a local level -
again an issue that would work towards improving self-esteem. Our
ongoing work to complete the project is to devote the remaining funding
to achieving this outcome.
We hope that the increased attention paid to creative writing beyond the
curriculum has encouraged trainees, experienced teachers and pupils to
view themselves as creators of texts as well as consumers. In a content-
laden curriculum, opportunities for open-ended work are few. This work
was developed in broad educational terms: supporting teacher and
trainee knowledge and exploring alternative ways of working with pupils
in schools. The work hasn’t claimed a new means of encouraging natural
creativity in pupils. Instead it has argued for preserved space and
exploratory learning, for teachers as well as pupils. We believe the
capacity to explore and experiment with the curriculum is a worthwhile
and a positive feature of any partnership programme. We are grateful that
this opportunity was made possible through the generous funding of the
Esmee Fairbairn Foundation.
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