Module
Module
I. Learning Outcomes
At the end of the lesson, you will be able to:
1. define communication;
2. explain the importance of communication;
3. explain the process of communication;
4. identify the components and types of communication.
II. Content
Introduction
What is COMMUNICATION?
∙ Derived from the Latin word “communis”, meaning to share
∙ Communication is the exchange thoughts, messages, or information by
speech, visuals, signals, writing or behavior.
∙ It is an transmission of idea or feeling so that sender and receiver share
the same understanding.
Course: Business
Communication to Tourism and Hospitality Faculty: LIEZEL M MACALALAD
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DEFINITION
Communication is a process involving the selection, production and
transmission of signs in such a way as to help a receiver perceive a meaning
similar to that in the mind of communication.
IMPORTANCE
In the professional world, communication and related skills decide a
person’s career curve-better the communication skills, higher are the chances
of touching the zenith of success. The new global and diverse workplace
requires excellent spoken and written communication skills.
PROCESS OF COMMUNICATION
Communication is a process whereby information is encoded,
channeled and sent by a sender to receiver via some medium. All forms of
communication require a sender, a channel, a message, a receiver, and the
feedback. A hindrance in a communication process is called noise.
ELEMENTS OF COMMUNICATION
∙ Receiver- this messages then moves through the channel to receiver who
completes the communication process by interpreting and assigning
meaning to the messages known as decoding
TYPES OF COMMUNICATION
Formal
Communications takes place through the formal channels of the
organization structure along the lines of authority established by the
management. Such communications are generally in writing and may take
any of the form, policy, manual; procedures and rule books, memoranda,
official meeting, reports etc.
Informal
Communication arising out of all those channels of communication that
fall outside the formal channels is known as informal communication. Informal
communication does not follow lines of authority as is the case of formal
communication. Such communication is usually oral and may be covered even
by simple glance, gesture, or smile or silence. e.g. talking with friends.
Grapevine
It is an informal type of communication and is called because it
stretches throughout the organization in all directions irrespective of the
authority levels. It exists more at lower levels of organization. Thus, grapevine
spreads like fire at it is not easy to trace the cause of such communication at
times.
Downward
Communication in the first place, flows downwards. All information in
this medium is usually in form of instructions, directions and orders. The
direction of communication strengthens the authoritarian structure of the
organization.
Upward
The process of information flowing in from the lower levels of a
hierarchy to the upper levels. The function of upward communication is to
send information’s, suggestions, complaints and grievance of the lower level
workers to the managers above.
Lateral/horizontal
This type of communication takes place between persons at the same
level of working under the same executive. The main use of this is to maintain
coordination and review activities assigned in various subordinates.
Interpersonal
an exchange of information between two or more people. It is the
process by which people exchange information, feelings, and meaning
through verbal and non verbal messages.
Intrapersonal
It is the communication which takes place within one’s own self. This
implies individual reflection, contemplation and meditation.
Organizational
a process by which activities of a society are collected and coordinated
to reach the goals of both individuals and the collective group. It is subfield of
general communications studies and is often a component to effective
management in a workplace environment.
Mass Communication
It is a means of conveying to an entire populace. This is generally
identified with tools of modern mass media, which includes books, the press,
cinema, television, radio, internet, etc. it also includes speeches delivered by
leader to a large audience.
BUSINESS COMMUNICATION
You can have all the great ideas in the world and if you can’t
communicate nobody will hear them. Business communication is the giving
and receiving of feedback between individuals and/or groups for the purpose
of exchanging information and altering performance in the workplace. It is the
process of sharing information between people within and outside a company.
Effective business communication is how employees and management
interact to reach organizational goals. Its purpose is to improve organizational
practices and reduce errors.
FACTOID:
Noise
MESSAGE Encode
Decode
Medium:
Sender r Receiver Sender
-Phone
-E-mail
-In person
- Instant message
Decode Encode
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FEEDBACK
Upward to
a
supervisor
Diagonally
to a
different
department
Features of Business Communication:
Business Communication has certain features or characteristics which enable us to
distinguish it from other communication.
A communication to be business communication must be:
1. Practical,
2. Factual,
3. Clear and brief,
4. Target-oriented,
5. Persuasive.
Practical
Effective business communication deals with the practical aspect of the information
explaining why, how, when and the like queries. It avoids impractical, imaginary,
unnecessary or repetitive information to eliminate waste of time. It conveys important
information to the receiver.
Factual
In general a business message contains facts and figures in place of overall idea.
Important date, place, time, etc. should be clearly mentioned in a business communication.
Target-Oriented
A business communication must have a specific objective and must be planned
properly so that the objective can be achieved.
Persuasive
Business communication often plays a persuasive role. It persuades an employee to
perform his/her duties, a customer to buy a product or service etc. The basic characteristics
mentioned above are related to the message or information of the communication.
The process of business communication has certain other characteristics. They are:
2. Two-Way Traffic
Communication does not only mean its downward movement from superior to the
subordinates it implies both the transmission and reception. So, when conveying any
information, a manager should know its reactions and responses. Otherwise, managerial
task of guiding and directing will be ineffective.
A man should, thus, not only speak, inform and order, but should also be able to
listen, answer and interpret. Communication, therefore, involves two-way traffic from the
managers to the employees and from the employees to the managers. It is not complete
unless the message has been correctly understood by the receiver and its response
becomes known to the sender.
3. Mutual Understanding:
4. Pervasive
The subject-matter of business communication covers a wide range and extends
to all functions— purchases, production, sales, finance, recruitment, wages, dividends,
market standing, innovation, productivity, etc. It also moves through all levels of
management— upward, downward and sideways. Business communication is, thus,
said to be a pervasive function.
5. Continuity
Communication is an ever-present activity and without it an organization cannot
exist. Communication is as necessary to an organization as blood circulation in a living
body. Therefore, the managers should ensure that adequate and smooth communication
flows in all directions.
Breakdown of communication results in misunderstanding, creation of unfavorable
attitudes, hostility and conflict. So, communication must be a continuous process and move
up, down and sideways for active participation of all concerned.
6. Specific
A business communication is generally specific in nature. It means that a particular
communication should deal with a single subject at a time. This is necessary for the
effectiveness of communication. Multiplicity of subject in a communication has the
possibility of creating confusion which is dangerous to sound management. It must be
specific with regard to the information intended to be conveyed or received.
9. Different Types
Business communication may be of different types—formal, informal, upward,
downward, sidewise, written, oral, etc.
10. Feedback
A communication cannot be complete unless and until feedback or response of the
recipient is made. Feedback may be written, oral or gestural. Sometimes mere silence may
also constitute a feedback.
1. Giving Information:
The primary object of communication is to make the members of an
organization aware of its goal and acquaint them with all the relevant information.
This helps the business enterprise to achieve success through concerted efforts of
all the people concerned. It is a fact that well-informed people can achieve better.
The managers should know in details the social, political, economic and other
conditions of the place where the business is situated. Information regarding the
employees, consumers and competitors should be at their fingertips. Employees,
likewise, should be well-informed about their positions, powers and responsibilities in
particular, and the aims and objectives of the organization in general.
Information regarding demand for a particular product, the taste, liking, etc. of
the consumers; availability of raw materials, credit facility, advertising media; latest
government rules and regulations, etc. are required for the production and selling of
the product.
Information can be obtained from past records, books, journals, newspapers,
government publications, seminars, conferences, exhibitions, trade fares, etc. The
other sources of information are the chambers of commerce, structured
questionnaires, radio, television, internet, etc. Whatever might be the sources, the
information must be reliable, accurate, complete and latest.
2. Persuasion
To persuade means to make other people decide to do something, especially by
repeatedly asking them or telling them the reasons why they should do it; in other
words, influencing other people to believe or to do what one wants. This is one of
the important objectives of communication.
The seller often influences the buyer through persuasion to buy his/her
products rejecting earlier decision to buy other products. This persuasion should be
so planned that the buyer becomes
least conscious of being persuaded and even if he/she becomes conscious, he/she
should be made to understand that it is for his/her own interest. Actually persuasion
is an art which should be suggestive in nature rather than coercive.
3. Conveying Suggestion
Communication helps in conveying suggestions, opinions and ideas. The
workers who are actually engaged in the work know better the loopholes in it and can
suggest to the managers the ways to plug the loopholes. This is an example of
upward communication. In big offices, suggestion boxes are provided and
suggestions are received throughout the year. Sometimes further communication is
made with the suggestions for clarification. Interaction of suggestions and ideas help
the progress of an organization.
Suggestions are not in the nature of order or advice and are, therefore, never
obligatory to follow them. Either acceptance or rejection is possible in the case of a
suggestion. Some executives, supervisors or managers who have a false notion of
self-dignity, self-respect, higher position, etc. may not accept a suggestion, even
though it is good one because it comes from lower level. But dynamic executives
welcome constructive suggestions in the interest of the organization.
4. Advice
One of the objectives of business communication is to advise an individual
or a group of people. The manager advises the subordinates about the ways and
means of better performance. Advice involves personal opinion and it influences
the opinion and action of the other person(s) to whom advice is being given.
Today’s business world is very complex and no one can be an expert in all the
spheres of business. So, a businessman has to take advice from experts regarding
the matters in which he is not well-informed. For example, he may need advice
regarding banking, insurance, stock exchange, tax rules, legal procedures, etc.
Within the business the managers, supervisors and executives may advise each
other (a case of horizontal communication) and the subordinates (downward
communication).
5. Motivation
Communication is made to inspire, to motivate, and to create a sense of
loyalty among the employees. Through communication their morale is boosted up
and it leads to better performance. Regular communication is necessary for
motivating the employees and infusing in them a positive attitude towards work and a
healthy relationship with the managers. This, ultimately, increases managerial
efficiency.
Motivating someone means inspiring but not forcing him/her to do something.
A motivated worker is an asset of any organization. The greater the motivation, the
lesser is the cost of supervision, because a motivated worker never neglects his
duties.
Motivating factors include monetary incentives, security of job, job satisfaction,
good working environment, participation in decision-making, fixation of target, etc.
Money works as a good motivator. A worker works overtime when he/she is allowed
extra wages. Security of job motivates an employee to devote himself/herself
wholeheartedly to the job.
If an employee is satisfied with the job, he/she gets pleasure in doing it. Good
working environment attracts him/her to work in co-operation with other members.
Workers’ participation in decision-making gives them a sense of being part and
parcel of the organization. Fixation of production target, sales target, etc. of an
organization helps the workers to work together to achieve the target. Thus, different
factors of motivation contribute to achieve performance excellence of an
organization.
6. Training
To meet the need of an organization, senior employees may need to be
trained to update them about the new technological developments so as to adjust
themselves to changing work
environment or job demands. The new employees may also require training at the
initial stage to cope up with the methods, techniques and systems of work in the
organization.
Communication is the key to all these kinds of training. Such communication
can be made through classroom teaching, lectures, seminars, short courses,
conferences, educational tours, film shows, etc. Not only the ordinary employees, but
the managerial staffs also need to be trained in the process stated above.
9. Resource Utilization
Communication checks wastage of the resources of the organization and
helps their better utilization. Lack of knowledge or lack of proper direction in time
may cause the waste or misuse. Communication helps to bridge the gap of
knowledge through instruction, advice, etc. and waste or misuse of resource is
minimized. Not only material resources, but also the financial resources, human
resources and other resources are utilized properly through communication.
Course: Business Communication to Tourism and Hospitality Faculty: LIEZEL M MACALALAD
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Steps of Business Communication:
The process or steps of communication involves a series of actions and operations
undertaken for the fulfillment of a certain end or objective.
Charles E. Redfield states that the following elements are involved in the process
of
communication:
(a) A communicator (a speaker, sender, issuer),
(b) Transmits (says, sends, issues),
(c) Stimulus (message, orders, reports) to a
(d) Communicate (addressee, respondent, audience) to influence his behavior
as seen in his (e) response (reply, reaction).
It can be used as a device for controlling the business activities to ensure the
achievement of organizational goals. According to Keith Davis, the role of communication in
business is as essential as the blood veins or arteries in human body. In its absence, a
business organization would cease to exist.
Business communication has a significant role to play in management whose
objective is to direct the individual efforts for securing overall co-ordination of organizational
activities. It performs the energizing function in the organization by transmitting information,
facts and ideas and thereby making coordinated efforts possible. Communication can, as
such, be regarded as basic to the functioning of an organization.
With the help of communication there is better understanding of the objectives and
policies which encourage co-ordination. Growing importance of human relations in every
business with customers and workers has made communication the life-line of business.
Producers are required to make sales appeal to their customers.
Course: Business Communication to Tourism and Hospitality Faculty: LIEZEL M MACALALAD
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The subordinates are required to communicate their grievances and complaints to
their superior, otherwise they may lead to conflicts. Proper communication helps in
implementing the decisions effectively and leads to smooth running of the business. It
creates mutual trust and confidence and builds up the morale of the employees and, thus,
provides job satisfaction to them.
1. Movement of Information:
Communication helps to move information from one place to another and from one
person to another. It develops a chain of understanding among the workers of different
levels in a business enterprise.
4. Proper Planning:
Communication is very helpful in planning the activities of business. It provides the
managers information and ideas necessary for sound planning. According to Theo Haimann
“Only through good communication can company policies and practices be formulated and
administered.” Secrecy of information creates suspicion among the workers and separates
them. Understanding of the common problems unites them for showing a better record of
their performance.
5. Basis of Decision-Making:
Communication helps the managers to take essential decisions and conduct vital
operations. The quality of decisions made in an organization entirely depends on the
volume and quality of information available to the management authority. In the absence of
effective communication it may not be possible for top management personnel to come in
closer contact with their subordinates.
Course: Business Communication to Tourism and Hospitality Faculty: LIEZEL M MACALALAD
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6. Basis of Co-Operation:
By promoting mutual understanding and meeting of minds, communication paves the
way for co operation. Communication creates condition for mental acceptance of the work
before its actual performance. This mental acceptance is the will- to-do before actually
doing it. Communication involves understanding and willing acceptance of orders and
instructions and acts as the basis for individual and co-operative efforts.
7. Means of Co-Ordination:
Co-ordination implies orderly group efforts to provide unity of action. This unity of
action is the result of team work which, in turn, depends, to a great extent, upon clear
understanding of the organizational goals, the mode of their achievement and situation of
the work. The function of the business communication is to get the workers fully informed of
everything relating to the work and bring a perfectly tuned harmony in their work.
8. Job Satisfaction:
Proper communication system extends mutual trust and faith. It thus creates
confidence in the ability of their manager, promotes their loyalty to the enterprise and
stimulates their job interest. Proper communication system enables the subordinates to
bring to the notice of the managers their viewpoints, grievances and troubles. This facility
raises the morale of the workers and, ultimately, leads to job satisfaction for high
performance.
12. Loyalty:
The confidence and loyalty of the lower employees on the management personnel
increases as they become aware of the competence of efficiency of their boss through
communication. It helps to strengthen mutual trust.
On the other hand, the upward communication helps the subordinates to convey to
their superiors their demands, grievances, complaints, suggestions, etc. Thus, through
communication of facts and information between the superiors and subordinates, industrial
peace can be established.
III. CONTENT
Introduction
Today businesses are borderless and economies are interlinked more than
before which I why practitioners and researchers argue that people and
organizations will survive by means of effective communication only. The balance
between organizational objectives, profitability and stability is ensured by means of
effective communication.
∙ Effective communication ensures necessary information and having the necessary
skill set to perform the job. Communication has been characterized as the most
important and one of the most used of all skills in every industry and particularly
in tourism & hospitality sector which is one of the fastest growing sectors.
∙ Effective communication is very compelling in the tourism and hospitality sector
which is the reason why companies spend a lot of money in training their staff.
∙ The behavior of the staff indulged in the communication process is very elements
which are responsible to build a good image of a hotel.
∙ Managers in tourism and hospitality sector spend bulk of their time in either verbal
or written communication with their subordinates and higher ups.
∙ Effective communication is also very important in leadership roles. An old saying
goes, “it’s not important what you say, but how you say it.”
∙ Managers and leaders usually do six major functions like:
o leading,
o planning,
o organizing,
o staffing, and
o controlling
∙ . Effective communication is a key to good leadership.
∙ Effective communication helps to remove misunderstanding between the
employees which will automatically help to maintain a healthy and peaceful
environment which is very crucial in every industry and particularly in tourism and
hospitality sector
∙ Communication is not just transferring information. According to Lane,
(2000)communication also includes “how people use message to generate meanings
within and across various contexts, cultures, channels, and media” Therefore
effective communication is the exchange of information for the intention of creating
denotation that is satisfactorily received and comprehended.
2. Employee Morale: Good remuneration is the concern for many employees but
research has highlighted that it’s not their only concern. Effective communication can
help to improve and boost the overall employee morale. Employees appreciate the
effective and clear communication coming from top management. Effective
communication can help in transforming workplace into a very healthy work
environment which is very crucial in tourism and hospitality sector to provide good
quality services. Ineffective communication in tourism and hospitality sector may
lead to frustration and confusion among the workers which can have negative
consequences on the organizational performance.
3. Helps with Diversity: Hotel and hospitality sectors these days have people from
all cultures, religions, castes and languages. They have become more diversified
that any other business. Therefore, effective communication becomes more crucial
to remove the various cultural and language barriers. It’s very essential to remove all
these barriers in order to provide a good quality customer service. Companies can
avoid all these differences and confusion by providing good quality training to
employees before joining and also on a regular phases post joining.
4. Global Businesses: The businesses in tourism and hospitality sector are more
global and borderless than ever before. Therefore, the need for effective
communication in tourism and hospitality sector has become more crucial. Managers
and employees must know how to communicate with their international counterparts.
The difference in the cultures across different countries in international business
requires managers to understand that similar terms used in one country might be
offensive in other. E.g. In England pants are commonly referred to as underwear
while as in United States it means trousers. Therefore, if businesses want to expand
their businesses beyond their national border effective communication is a very
crucial element.
(a) Conduct Staff Training: The first step to ensure effective communication is to
conduct a training for all of the employees as how to effectively communicate
effectively with guests in handling with complaints, harmonization between
departments, attending to visitors at the front desk and helping in documentation like
menus, bills, reports and other hotel procedures. The training has to be conducted
on a regular basis and the progress needs to be monitored before the training and
after the training.
(c) Train your Staff on Attending Guests: It’s very much important that the
employees working in the hospitality and tourism sector should know as how to
communicate well with the customer. Communication with guest is absolutely crucial
in service industry and particularly tourism and hospitality sector in order to give a
great customer experience. These days with the variety of online tools available for
customer in the form of social media bad customer experience can have a serious
negative impact on the overall image of the company.
Define your
Goals
Scorecards
Focus Groups
Setting
Benchmarks
Surveys
4. Surveys: There is one two things people believe in one is God and the other one
is data. Survey can be very useful to access the effectiveness of communication
channels in an organization. It’s very important that the survey questions are kept
specific to the objectives, are neither too short nor too long that the respondents has
to spare a lot of time to fill the questionnaire. Survey is a great tool to measure the
effectiveness of the internal communication process. Surveys will help the
management to make well informed decisions.
5. Focus Group/ Interviews: Focus groups are one of the most effective techniques
recommended by researchers to explore issues, test concepts and spawn
recommendations. Focus groups will help the companies in hospitality and tourism
sector to make meaningful changes to the overall communication program.
Companies can also conduct one-on-one interviews with the top management and
other managers at leadership roles to gain perspective and generate ideas. Focus
group interviews can be of great help in hospitality and tourism sector to explore as
‘why people hold certain opinions. It can be also helpful to know beliefs and attitudes
by asking more open ended questions.
6. Scorecards: Scorecard provides a blueprint of how effective communication
program is performing. Constantly reporting on the effectiveness of internal
communication channels will help management to know the value of their efforts. The
key is in designing the right scorecard by selecting right metrics.
BASIC PRINCIPLES OF WRITING
These are three basic principles of writing, namely: unity, coherence, and emphasis. These
will serve as our basic guides as we go through the writing process.
1. UNITY. It means consistency or oneness. A sentence has unity if it expresses only one
main idea.
Example:
The goods will be shipped tonight, and they will reach Zamboanga City at early
dawn.
In the above example, the verb in the adverbial clause agrees with the tense of the
verb in the main clause.
b. Consistency of Voice. Voice is that aspect of the verb which indicates whether
the subject performs the action (active) or receives it (passive). Use the same voice
throughout the sentence.
Example:
If you have already remitted your payment, please disregard this reminder.
Note that in the above example, the first clause and second clause have verbs, which
are both in the active voice. Therefore there is unity of voice.
c. Consistency of Mood. Mood is an aspect of the verb which indicates whether the
action or the condition is factual (indicative), or contrary to fact (subjunctive). Maintain
the same mood throughout the sentence.
Example:
i. The secretary hopes she can finish her work before the deadline comes.
(indicative)
ii. Albert wishes that he were the boss. (subjunctive)
Example:
The janitors worked fast, and soon they were done with their duties ahead of
time.
In the example above, note that the subject in the main clause is in agreement with
the subject in the second clause. There is therefore consistency of subject.
e. Consistency of Number and Person. The pronoun will have to agree in number
and person with its antecedent.
Example:
Everyone in the department played his part well.
Example:
As the department head, I report to office on time because I would like to set
an example to my subordinates.
Example:
The AA Club held a shindig in honor of the new members.
In the above example, the word shindig is not formal in tone. To preserve the
consistency of tone in the sentence, it must be replaced with either dance or ball.
Example:
The “mamaya na” attitude is common among our government employees.
Note that the Filipino words injected into the sentence are enclosed in quotation
marks.
2. COHERENCE. It means the quality of putting ideas together (how the ideas get together
within the sentence). Make sure that modifiers are placed closely to the words they modify.
Misplaced modifiers will result in an incoherent sentence.
Examples:
i. We have just opened our scenic hotel in Pagudpod, Ilocos Norte.
ii. The young business executive brings with him fresh perspectives.
In both examples, the modifiers ( scenic, young, fresh) are paced before the nouns
they modify.
3. EMPHASIS. To secure emphasis within the sentence, there are several strategies or
techniques. One can emphasize the positive aspects of the situation in a variety of ways:
a. State the information positively. Emphasize what you will do rather than what you will not
do.
b. Justify the negative information by giving a reason or linking it to the reader’s benefits (be
careful to use a benefit which your reader will see as valid)
e. put negative information in the middle of the paragraph rather in the first of last sentence;
in the middle of the memo rather than in the first or last paragraph.
f. Use the passive voice and impersonal words in sentence construction to avoid assigning
blame.
g. Highlight the most important idea by using italics, by underlining it, or by writing the same
in bold print.
h. Repeat the most important idea in the paragraph.
Letter writing, according to Baugh (1994) involves a three-step process. Make sure that
business letters are recipient-based rather than writer-based. Aside from the writer’s own interests
and purposes, needs, concerns, and aspirations of the readers must also be considered.
A simple three-step process: prewriting, writing, and revising, help in creating reader-based
letters that communicate effectively and produce better results.
Step 1: Prewriting – involves answering the four key questions of letter writing: What is my
purpose? Who is my audience? What should the letter cover be? What desired action or response
do I want?
Step 2: Writing -involves writing the rough copy all the way through to the end. The first
draft is just a working draft. Just write until the letter is finished.
Step 3: Revising – means reading the draft and organizing the letter so that it flows logically
from point to point. Check for grammatical lapses, double-check the accuracy of facts and figures,
eliminate unnecessary words and irrelevant ideas, and proofread or edit the final copy.
Facing a blank piece of paper is intimidating for all writers, both novice and experienced.
Experienced writers, however, have strategies for getting the first draft down on paper and for
revising the draft effectively. The following are the various work styles of different writers.
When writing the first draft, you must get the ideas down on paper. Polishing,
rethinking, and reshaping can come later.
1. Jot down ideas or phrases you want to include in your letter or memo.
2. If you have a lot of material, as in a report or if tight logic is crucial, as in a problem solving or
negative message, write a formal outline.
3. Brainstorm – list as many ideas as you can. Then, go back and decide which reader-benefit or
attention-getter is best. Brainstorming helps writers get over the tendency to develop a mental
block after they have thought of one idea or approach. The first idea one has may not be the best.
Revision means one has to revisit his draft several times. Revision is not a matter of
checking the spelling and punctuation. This comes later at the editing stage, and is discussed on
that section. Instead, revision means making changes in content, organization, emphasis, word
choice, and style in order to make the meaning clear, achieve the writers purposes, build goodwill,
and save the reader’s time.
To revise effectively, you must be able to step out from your work mentally and to look at it
as an outsider would. Revision is literally “re-seeing” what you have written.
What should you do first when you revise, check words, sentences, paragraphs, content,
organization, emphasis, logic, and the probable effect on the reader? You do not necessarily need
to look at the aspects in this order, and you may be able to cover them all without going through a
checklist, but you do need to cover them all.
1. Content
a. have I organized my material in a way that fits the situation and the reader?
b. have I used the beginning and end of my letter or memo to highlight important points?
c. should I use additional techniques of emphasis, such as repetition, underlining, lists,
headings, etc?
d. are all the information I have included correct?
3. You-attitude
Did I use the You-Attitude? The you-attitude is achieved differently in positive than negative
situations. When the situation is positive or neutral, the you-attitude can be achieved by following
these guidelines:
4. Positive Emphasis
Did I use positive emphasis? Emphasize the positive aspects of the situation in these ways:
5. Words
Check the denotation, a word’s literal or dictionary meaning; and connotation the emotional
associations that accompany words. Accurate denotations are important to avoid the situations,
which occur when the sender and receiver use the same words but have different meanings for it.
6. Sentence
Ask these questions:
7. Paragraph
Ask these questions:
When you are confident that your draft says what you want to say, edit your draft to make
sure that it is free from error in format, spelling, punctuations, and grammar. As you check, ask
yourself the following questions
1. Format
a. Is the format appropriate for the message and the reader? Are all the necessary
elements included?
b. Is the visual impact good?
2. Spelling
Is there any doubtful words?
Steps in Writing Sales and Promotional Letters
By and large, sales and promotional letters are written by specialized and highly skilled
professionals. These letters come in letter-size or larger envelops with attached brochures in some
instances. Both share one common denominator- their attempt to motivate people to spend money
or patronize an organization.
In reality, all letters in businesses, industries, and the corporate world are essentially sales
and promotional letters.
There are three basic steps in planning sales or promotional letters. These are:
1. Determine the Main Idea. Sales and promotional letters revolve around a selling point and
related benefit. Know the products’ selling points and their benefit to the customers, both of
which are attractions on the part of customers.
2. Define the audience. The most persuasive sale letters are written to appeal to a specific
target audience. Marketers seek to define customers Iin terms of demographics such as
age, gender or sex, occupation, income and education, and psychographics which include
personality, attitudes and lifestyle/s.
3. Plan the approach and format. Basically, expensive items/ products and hard-to-accept
propositions call for a more elaborate campaign than low-cost products and simple actions.
Another tried and tested formula in writing/ planning effective sales and promotional letters
revolves around the AIDA plan. That is, start with an attention- getting advise. A case in point is to
appeal to the reader’s emotions and values. After which, move to escalate the readers interest and
desire and end with a specific call to a desired action.
The Prentice Hall Model Letter Desk Book (1988) identifies other types of sales and
promotional letters below:
1. Letters Calling Attention to Missing Enclosures
When you receive a letter in which someone has neglected to include an enclosure, notify
the writer immediately with the following important details:
a) Identify the incoming letter and enclosure;
b) State that the enclosure was omitted; and
c) Ask that the enclosure, or a copy of it, be sent to you.