Creative Writing Module
Creative Writing Module
To write well, a student has to consider the topic and what needs to be
written about it. Readers don’t have to do either of these things. Writers may need
to perform research. Readers generally don’t. Writers have to figure out how to start
a piece of writing and to end a piece of writing.
Readers have the beginning and ending given to them. Writers have to
formulate ideas, turn those ideas into units of meaning like phrases, sentences, and
paragraphs. Readers have only to interpret these things. The complexity of writing
compared to reading is even greater when we consider the pro-cess of putting
words to thoughts. In order for writers to communicate effectively, they have to take
a thought, often abstract, and render it in concrete form.
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
The success and final outcome of this module required a lot of guidance and
assistance from many people and I am extremely privileged to have got this all
along the completion of my module. All that I have done is only due to such
supervision and assistance and I would not forget to thank them.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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1 What is writing? 2
2 Forms of Writing 6
3 Defining Creative Writing 12
4 Sensory Experiences in Writing 17
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8 What is Poetry? 66
9 Poetry vs. Prose 76
10 Elements of Poetry 84
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CHAPTER V READING AND WRITING FICTION: FINDING THE
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INTRODUCTION
Creative writing is considered to be any writing, fiction, poetry, or non-fiction,
that goes outside the bounds of normal professional, journalistic, academic, and
technical forms of literature. Works which fall into this category include novels,
epics, short stories, and poems. Writing for the screen and stage, screenwriting and
playwriting respectively, typically have their own programs of study, but fit under the
creative writing category as well.
Learn from the best—but don’t copy them. It’s important to read renowned
authors as a demonstration of what great writing and great writers can do.
Depending on your writing style, seek out highlights of the genre. If you’re looking
to write young adult literature, consult some YA touchstones like the Harry
Potter series by J.K. Rowling, the Goosebumps universe of R.L. Stine, or the
poignant coming of age novels by Judy Blume. If you’re looking to write science
fiction, study the work of Isaac Asimov or Neil Gaiman. If you aim to write fantasy
novels, consult The Lord of the Rings trilogy by J.R.R. Tolkien. If horror is your
thing, try H.P. Lovecraft and Stephen King. But don’t confuse the voices of these
authors for your own voice. Use your favorite books as jumping-off points. To be
truly creative, you must hone in on ideas, styles, and a point of view that are all
unique to you. Create a character based on someone you know. Filmmakers Joel
and Ethan Coen have said that they came up with the story idea for The Big
Lebowski by creating a hardboiled detective thriller that featured their real-life friend
as the detective. Many authors have mined the traits of a best friend, family
member, or co-worker as part of a great book idea. Use the snowflake method to
brainstorm. The snowflake method, created by author and writing instructor Randy
Ingermanson, is a technique for crafting a novel from scratch by starting with a
basic story summary, then layering in additional elements. It works well for all sorts
of creative writing. Find an environment that encourages creative flow. When it
comes to creative flow, the real-life existence of a writer often follows a cycle of
boom and bust. Once you’ve hit upon a “boom” period, let the ideas flow and don’t
let up. Writing workshops or even writer’s retreats often engender such creative
bursts. Try free-writing. This creative writing technique is the practice of writing
without a prescribed structure, which means no outlines, cards, notes, or editorial
oversight. In free-writing, the writer follows the impulses of their own mind, allowing
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thoughts and inspiration to appear to them without premeditation. Allow your stream
of consciousness to inspire the words on the page. The first time you attempt to
free-write, you may end up with mostly unusable material. But with writing practice,
you can use your free-writing practice to refine your technique and ultimately
unleash your creativity
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CHAPTER i
What is Writing?
1. Forms of Writing
▪ Persuasive – Writing that states the opinion of the writer and attempts to
influence the reader.
▪ Narrative – Writing in which the author tells a story. The story could be fact or
fiction.
▪ Descriptive – A type of expository writing that uses the five senses to paint a
picture for the reader. This writing incorporates imagery and specific details.
The true definition of creative writing is "writing that expresses ideas and thoughts in
an imaginative way." It's the "art of making things up" or putting a creative splash on
history, as in creative nonfiction.
The word creative is defined in various ways. The following are just some of the
definitions:
“The ability to create”
“Imaginative”
“Productive and imaginative”
“Characterized by expressiveness and originality”
Creative writing is often defined as the writing of fiction, where the author creates
events, scenes and characters, sometimes even a world. In reality, aside from
instinctive utterances like the yelp of an injured child or a delighted ‘Oh!’, all
expressions are creative.
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Learning Exercise 1.1
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Learning Exercise 1.2
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Learning Exercise 1.3
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Input 2 Forms of Writing
“You don't write a novel out of sheer pity any more than you
blow a safe out of a vague longing to be rich. A certain
ruthlessness and a sense of alienation from society is as
essential to creative writing as it is to armed robbery.”
― Nelson Algren
“At one time I thought the most important thing was talent. I
think now that — the young man or the young woman must
possess or teach himself, train himself, in infinite patience,
which is to try and to try and to try until it comes right. He
must train himself in ruthless intolerance. That is, to throw
away anything that is false no matter how much he might
love that page or that paragraph. The most important thing
is insight, that is ... curiosity to wonder, to mull, and to
muse why it is that man does what he does. And if you
have that, then I don't think the talent makes much
difference, whether you've got that or not.
― William Faulkner
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“Destroy your life; then put it back together. You'll get great
material, meet some fascinating characters and – side
benefit – the skills you develop will give you greater
compassion, insight and range with the people you create
on the page – or run into off of it.”
― Jerry Stahl
Technical writing, on the other hand, is not done to entertain its reader. It is wholly
written to inform someone. Some technical articles are sometimes written to trigger
its reader to making an action beneficial to the one of the writer.
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4. Creative Writing vs. Journalism
Journalism- a form of writing that tells people about things that really
happened, but that they might not have known about already. People who
write journalism are called "journalists." They might work at newspapers,
magazines,websites or for TV or radio stations.
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Watch news and observe: Write a new report about what you see
answering the questions what, where, when, how, why. And then write
an essay creatively describing the scenes and events.
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Academic writing is to teach and/or inform. It can be for a targeted readership or
general public knowledge: for example, medical journals, DIY, math, biology,
religions, thesis, investigative reports.
Creative writing is mostly for entertainment. It falls under fictional and non-fictional.
Sometimes authors use this means to promote an agenda or create public
awareness. For example, many good fiction authors will incorporate social issues
and mores into their stories.
1. Songs
You may think of writing a song as a purely musical form of creative expression, but
if your song has lyrics, you'll also be doing some creative writing.
2. Poetry
From haiku to sonnets, there are dozens of different poetic forms to try. In general,
the key to writing poetry is to create evocative images and make every word count.
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3. Vignettes
Vignettes are a short form of fiction or creative non-fiction that sets up a scene for
the reader. There may not be a central conflict to drive the story forward, and there
may not even be characters.
4. Short Fiction
Short fiction offers more of a "story" than a vignette. It includes short stories and
even modern fan fiction. Writing a short story is a great way to learn about how
fiction is structured, including plot, characters, conflict, and setting.
5. Novellas
Longer than a short story but not quite as long as a novel, a novella goes into great
detail about all the elements of the story. It may or may not have chapters.
6. Novels
Novels are perhaps the best known form of fiction, and you'll see them in many
genres, including romance, thrillers, and science fiction. In this long form of fiction,
you have time to explore the plot, characters, and other elements more fully.
7. Scripts
Scripts, for everything from TV commercials to radio programs and even movies,
are another form of creative writing. The length can vary significantly, but the key is
that the words you write will be recited by actors and recorded.
8. Plays
Like a script in that the dialogue you write will be recited by actors, plays are
designed to be performed in front of an audience. They are usually divided into
several acts, although short, one-act plays are also popular.
9. Personal Essays
Not all creative writing is made up. In fact, creative non-fiction comes in several
important forms. One of these is the personal essay in which the writer explores his
or her own life experiences or opinions.
11. Memoirs
A longer form of the personal essay or journal, a memoir is a type of creative
nonfiction that explores a person's life or experiences. You can focus on a single
period or your entire life. This is different from an autobiography in that it includes
feelings and thoughts - not just the facts of what happened.
12. Letters
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Because they contain more than a basic reporting of the facts, letters can also be a
type of creative writing. This is especially true if they discuss emotion or opinion.
Even love letters can be creative.
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Distinguish any other differences between these two types of writing. Use
the spaces provided below to differentiate creative writing and academic
writing.
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Which of these types of creative writing have you tried? Are there any forms
of writing on this list that you’d like to experiment with? Can you think of
any types of creative writing to add to this list?
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Sensory details include sight, sound, touch, smell, and taste. Writers employ
the five senses to engage a reader's interest. If you want your writing to jump
off the page, then bring your reader into the world you are creating.
Sensory details appeal to the five senses: sight, sound, smell , touch,
taste. When writing a personal narrative, your objective is to get the reader to
feel like they are there with you. Adding sensory details will help you achieve
this goal.
Sight (this is used most often, but trying using all of them!)
Sound
● The walls shook and vibrated like the tail of a rattle snake
● Ice crackled and pinged against the family room window like a baseball
striking a bat
● Wind swirled around our beach house whistling loudly to a terrible tune
● The television buzzed as it shut off, and the furnace sighed one last time
before the house fell silent.
● The cracking of wood splitting punctuated each burst of fire like an
exclamation point.
● the sounds of emergency sirens awakened the still roads wailing like a
newborn baby
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Touch
● The heavy quilt felt like an x-ray vest draped across our legs
● The prickly feathers of the boa stuck my neck
● The puppy’s nose was dry like sandpaper
● The sand was hot and grainy like my morning grits.
Taste
Instrumental
It used to express people's needs or to get things done.
Regulatory
This language is used to tell others what to do.
Interactional
Language is used to make contact with others and form relationship.
Personal
The use of language is used to express feelings, opinion, and individual
identity.
Heuristic
This is when language is used to gain knowledge about the environment.
Imaginative
Language is used to tell stories and jokes, and to create an imaginary
environment.
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Representational
The use of language to convey facts and information.
1. The old man took the handful of dust, and sifted it through his fingers.
2. The starry night sky looked so beautiful that it begged him to linger, but he
reluctantly left for home.
3. The fragrance of spring flowers made her joyful.
4. The sound of a drum in the distance attracted him.
5. The people traveled long distances to watch the sunset in the north.
6. The stone fell with a splash in the lake.
7. The sound of bat hitting the ball was pleasing to his ear.
8. The chirping of birds heralded spring.
9. There lay refuse heaps on their path that were so smelly that it maddened
them.
10. The silence in the room was unnerving.
11. The blind man touched the tree to learn if its skin was smooth or rough.
12. When he was on the way to work, he heard the muffled cry of a woman.
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13. The beacons of moonlight bathed the room in ethereal light.
14. The wild gusts of cold wind pierced her body.
15. The burger, aromatic with spices, made his mouth water in anticipation of the
first bite.
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9. Irony: The use of words to convey the opposite of their literal
meaning .Also a statement or situation where the meaning is contradicted by
the appearance or presentation of the idea. Example: "Oh, I love spending
big bucks," said my dad, a notorious penny pincher.
13. Onomatopoeia: The use of words that imitate the sounds associated
with the objects or actions they refer to. Example: The clap of thunder went
bang and scared my poor dog.
17. Pun: A play on words, sometimes on different senses of the same word
and sometimes on the similar sense or sound of different words. Example:
Jessie looked up from her breakfast and said, "A boiled egg every morning is
hard to beat."
18. Simile: A stated comparison (usually formed with "like" or "as") between
two fundamentally dissimilar things that have certain qualities in common.
Example: Roberto was white as a sheet after he walked out of the horror
movie.
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20. Understatement: A figure of speech in which a writer or speaker
deliberately makes a situation seem less important or serious than it is.
Example: "You could say Babe Ruth was a decent ballplayer," the reporter
said with a wink.
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"Today's students can put dope in their veins or hope in their brains. If they can
conceive it and believe it, they can achieve it. They must know it is not their aptitude
but their attitude that will determine their altitude." - Reverend Jesse Jackson
C. Style-language style is defined as the choice of words used by a
specific group of people when they speak.
● Formal diction – formal words are used in formal situations, such as press
conferences and presentations.
● Informal diction – uses informal words and conversation, such as writing or
talking to friends.
● Colloquial diction – uses words common in everyday speech, which may
be different in different regions or communities.
● Slang diction – is the use of words that are newly coined, or even impolite.
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F. Voice-voice (or vocalization) is the sound produced by humans and
other vertebrates using the lungs and the vocal folds in the larynx, or
voice box. Voice is not always produced as speech, however. Infants
babble and coo; animals bark, moo, whinny, growl, and meow; and
adult humans laugh, sing, and cry. Voice is generated by airflow from
the lungs as the vocal folds are brought close together. When air is
pushed past the vocal folds with sufficient pressure, the vocal folds
vibrate. If the vocal folds in the larynx did not vibrate normally, speech
could only be produced as a whisper. Your voice is as unique as your
fingerprint. It helps define your personality, mood, and health.
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Figures of Speech
7. O Solitude! Where are the charms that sages have seen in thy face?
8. Why, man, if the river were dry, I am able to fill it with tears.
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Diction
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Denotation and Connotation
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CHAPTER II
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THE PROCESS OF WRITING: WHATEVER WORKS
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Writing is a process that involves at least four distinct steps: prewriting,
drafting, revising, and editing. It is known as a recursive process. While you are
revising, you might have to return to the prewriting step to develop and expand your
ideas.
A. Prewriting
2. Although prewriting is the first activity you engage in, generating ideas is an
activity that occurs throughout the writing process.
2. To tell what something looks like, sounds like, or feels like, the
author uses descriptive writing
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B. Drafting
1. Drafting occurs when you put your ideas into sentences and paragraphs. Here
you concentrate upon explaining and supporting your ideas fully. Here you also
begin to connect your ideas. Regardless of how much thinking and planning you do,
the process of putting your ideas in words changes them; often the very words you
select evoke additional ideas or implications.
3. This draft tends to be writer-centered: it is you telling yourself what you know and
think about the topic.
C. Revising
1. Revision is the key to effective documents. Here you think more deeply about
your readers’ needs and expectations. The document becomes reader-centered.
How much support will each idea need to convince your readers? Which terms
should be defined for these particular readers? Is your organization effective? Do
readers need to know X before they can understand Y?
2. At this stage you also refine your prose, making each sentence as concise and
accurate as possible. Make connections between ideas explicit and clear.
Revision Checklist
1. Does the essay have a clear and concise main idea? Is this idea
made clear to the reader in a thesis statement early in the essay
(usually in the introduction)?
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7. Are there clear transitions from one paragraph to the next? Have key
words and ideas been given proper emphasis in the sentences and
paragraphs?
8. Are the sentences clear and direct? Can they be understood on the
first reading? Are the sentences varied in length and structure? Could
any sentences be improved by combining or restructuring them?
9. Are the words in the essay clear and precise? Does the essay
maintain a consistent tone?
Once you have finished revising your essay, you can turn your attention to the finer
details of editing and proofreading your work.
D. Editing
1. Check for such things as grammar, mechanics, and spelling. The last thing you
should do before printing your document is to spell check it.
2. Don’t edit your writing until the other steps in the writing process are complete.
E. Publishing
1. Publishing is the last stage where writers submit their work to the publisher. Make
sure your written document should be completed before giving to the publisher.
However, each writer’s goal is to publish his work and reach to the readers.
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Learning Exercise 5.1
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Learning Exercise 5.2
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Learning Exercise 5.3
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1. Prewriting
2. Drafting
3. Revising
4. Editing
Write one sentence for each idea, telling how you will use it to improve your
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Input 6 Applying the Basic Conventions of Writing
We can define conventions as a set of generally accepted standards for written
English. We use conventions to make our writing more readable. In other words, we
do things in a certain way so the reader can figure out what we’re trying to
say.Conventions include punctuation, usage, mechanics, and sentence rules. The
following pages outline the most important conventions of English.
A. Punctuation Rules
There are 14 punctuation marks that are commonly used in English grammar. They
are the period, question mark, exclamation point, comma, semicolon, colon, dash,
hyphen, parentheses, brackets, braces, apostrophe, quotation marks, and ellipsis.
Following their correct usage will make your writing easier to read and more
appealing.
Sentence Endings
Three of the fourteen punctuation marks are appropriate for use as sentence
endings. They are the period, question mark, and exclamation point.
The comma, semicolon, and colon are often misused because they all can indicate
a pause in a series.
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The comma is used to show a separation of ideas or elements within the structure
of a sentence. Additionally, it is used in numbers, dates, and letter writing after the
salutation and closing.
● Direct address: Thanks for all your help, John.
● Separation of two complete sentences: We went to the movies, and then we went
out to lunch.
● Separating lists or elements within sentences: Suzi wanted the black, green, and
blue dress.
Whether to add a final comma before the conjunction in a list is a matter of debate.
This final comma, known as an Oxford or serial comma, is useful in a complex
series of elements or phrases but is often considered unnecessary in a simple
series such as in the example above. It usually comes down to a style choice by the
writer.
The second is between independent clauses when the second explains the first,
similar to a semicolon:
● There was one thing she loved more than any other: her dog.
A colon also has non-grammatical uses in time, ratio, business correspondence and
references.
Two other common punctuation marks are the dash and hyphen. These marks are
often confused with each other due to their appearance but they are very different.
A dash is used to separate words into statements. There are two common types of
dashes: en dash and em dash.
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● En dash: Twice as long as a hyphen, the en dash is a symbol (--) that is used in
writing or printing to indicate a range, connections or differentiations, such as 1880-
1945 or Princeton-New York trains.
● Em dash: Longer than the en dash, the em dash can be used in place of a comma,
parenthesis, or colon to enhance readability or emphasize the conclusion of a
sentence. For example, She gave him her answer --- No!
Whether you put spaces around the em dash or not is a style choice. Just be
consistent.
A hyphen is used to join two or more words together into a compound term and is
not separated by spaces. For example, part-time, back-to-back, well-known.
Brackets, braces, and parentheses are symbols used to contain words that are a
further explanation or are considered a group.
Brackets are the squared off notations ([]) used for technical explanations or to
clarify meaning. If you remove the information in the brackets, the sentence will still
make sense.
● He [Mr. Jones] was the last person seen at the house.
Braces ({}) are used to contain two or more lines of text or listed items to show that
they are considered as a unit. They are not commonplace in most writing but can be
seen in computer programming to show what should be contained within the same
lines. They can also be used in mathematical expressions. For example, 2{1+[23-
3]}=x.
Parenthesis ( () ) are curved notations used to contain further thoughts or qualifying
remarks. However, parentheses can be replaced by commas without changing the
meaning in most cases.
● John and Jane (who were actually half brother and sister) both have red hair.
The final three punctuation forms in English grammar are the apostrophe, quotation
marks, and ellipsis. Unlike previously mentioned grammatical marks, they are not
related to one another in any form.
An apostrophe (') is used to indicate the omission of a letter or letters from a word,
the possessive case, or the plurals of lowercase letters. Examples of the
apostrophe in use include:
● Omission of letters from a word: I've seen that movie several times. She wasn't the
only one who knew the answer.
● Possessive case: Sara's dog bit the neighbor.
● Plural for lowercase letters: Six people were told to mind their p's and q's.
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It should be noted that, according to Purdue University, some teachers and editors
enlarge the scope of the use of apostrophes, and prefer their use on symbols (&'s),
numbers (7's) and capitalized letters (Q&A's), even though they are not necessary.
Quotations marks (" ") are a pair of punctuation marks used primarily to mark the
beginning and end of a passage attributed to another and repeated word for word.
They are also used to indicate meanings and to indicate the unusual or dubious
status of a word.
● "Don't go outside," she said.
Single quotation marks (' ') are used most frequently for quotes within quotes.
● Marie told the teacher, "I saw Marc at the playground, and he said to me 'Bill started
the fight,' and I believed him."
The ellipsis is most commonly represented by three periods (. . . ) although it is
occasionally demonstrated with three asterisks (***). The ellipsis is used in writing or
printing to indicate an omission, especially of letters or words. Ellipses are
frequently used within quotations to jump from one phrase to another, omitting
unnecessary words that do not interfere with the meaning. Students writing
research papers or newspapers quoting parts of speeches will often employ ellipsis
to avoid copying lengthy text that is not needed.
● Omission of words: She began to count, "One, two, three, four…" until she got to
10, then went to find him.
● Within a quotation: When Newton stated, "An object at rest stays at rest and an
object in motion stays in motion..." he developed the law of motion.
There are a few differences between punctuation in British and American English.
The following charts details some of those differences:
B. Usage Rules
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Accept and except
To accept is to receive, and except is to exclude, usually. Both are busy little
words skipping around to different meanings, but they never run into each other.
Affect and effect
Are easy to mix up. Here's the short version of how to
use affect vs. effect. Affect is usually a verb, and it means to impact or
change. Effect is usually a noun, an effect is the result of a change.
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action can be done well. However, when you’re talking about health, well can be
used as an adjective.
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You’re and your
Your is the second person possessive adjective, used to describe something as
belonging to you. Your is always followed by a noun or gerund. You're is the
contraction of "you are" and is often followed by the present participle (verb form
ending in -ing).
C. Mechanic rules
In all three styles, always capitalize the first and last word of any title. These
examples will help:
You should capitalize nouns and pronouns in titles in all three styles. This
includes proper nouns. You can see this rule in action in these examples:
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● Visiting Beautiful Ruins (noun)
● As She Ran Away (pronoun)
● Little House on the Prairie (nouns)
● For Whom the Bell Tolls (pronoun)
No matter which style you are using, you'll also need to capitalize verbs. This
includes helping verbs and variations on the verb "to be." These examples will help:
You should also capitalize adjectives and adverbs in all three styles. You can see
this rule in action here:
● All Quiet on the Western Front (adjectives)
● The Wind-Up Bird Chronicle (adjective)
● She Quietly Waits (adverb)
● The Poky Little Puppy (adjectives)
In sentence case, only the first word has a capital letter. Consider these examples:
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3. Forms plurals correctly
There are many plural noun rules, and because we use nouns so frequently when
writing, it’s important to know all of them! The correct spelling of plurals usually
depends on what letter the singular noun ends in.
cat – cats
house – houses
If the singular noun ends in -s, -ss, -sh, -ch, -x, or -z, add -es to the end to
make it plural.
truss – trusses
bus – buses
marsh – marshes
lunch – lunches
tax – taxes
blitz – blitzes
In some cases, singular nouns ending in -s or -z, require that you double the -
s or -z prior to adding the -es for pluralization.
fez – fezzes
gas –gasses
If the noun ends with -f or -fe, the f is often changed to -ve before adding the -
s to form the plural version.
wife – wives
wolf – wolves
Exceptions:
roof – roofs
belief – beliefs
chef – chefs
chief – chiefs
If a singular noun ends in -y and the letter before the -y is a consonant,
change the ending to -ies to make the noun plural.
city – cities
puppy – puppies
6If the singular noun ends in -y and the letter before the -y is a vowel, simply
add an -s to make it plural.
ray – rays
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boy – boys
If the singular noun ends in -o, add -es to make it plural.
potato – potatoes
tomato – tomatoes
Exceptions:
photo – photos
piano – pianos
halo – halos
With the unique word volcano, you can apply the standard pluralization for words
that end in -o or not. It’s your choice! Both of the following are correct:
volcanoes
volcanos
If the singular noun ends in -us, the plural ending is frequently -i.
cactus – cacti
focus – foci
If the singular noun ends in -is, the plural ending is -es.
analysis – analyses
ellipsis – ellipses
If the singular noun ends in -on, the plural ending is -a.
phenomenon – phenomena
criterion – criteria
sheep – sheep
series – series
species – species
deer –deer
Irregular nouns follow no specific rules, so it’s best to memorize these or look up the
proper pluralization in the dictionary.
child – children
goose – geese
man – men
woman – women
tooth – teeth
foot – feet
mouse – mice
person – people
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4. Use words for numbers under 10
Use numerals for numbers from zero to nine that are followed by a precise unit
of measurement.
Examples:
Seventy-two thousand ink cartridges are sold every day.
Nineteenth-century novels often feature complicated plot lines.
But: 2008 saw record olive crops throughout the Mediterranean.Use words for
common fractions and set expressions.
Examples:
Example:
According to the report, 45% of the workforce is employed in the service sector.
Only 6% currently work in agriculture.The main exception is if you are using a
percentage to begin a sentence. In this case, use words to express the entire
percentage.
Example:
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D. Agreement Rules
Subjects and verbs must agree with each other in number for a sentence to make
sense. Even though grammar can be a bit quirky from time to time, there are 20
rules of subject-verb agreement that sum up the topic quite concisely. Most of the
concepts of subject-verb agreement are straightforward, but exceptions to the rules
can make it more complicated.
For example, would you say, "They are fun" or "They is fun"? Since "they" is plural,
you'd opt for the plural form of the verb, "are". Ready to dive into a world where
subjects and verbs live in harmony?
Twenty may seem like a lot of rules for one subject, but you'll quickly notice one ties
into the next. In the end, it'll all make sense. (In the following examples, the
agreeing subject is in bold and the verb is in italics.)
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The dog growls when he is angry.
The dogs growl when they are angry.
2. Subordinate clauses that come between the subject and verb don't affect their
agreement.
The dog, who is chewing on my jeans, is usually very good.
4. When sentences start with "there" or "here," the subject will always be placed
after the verb. Some care needs to be taken to identify each part correctly.
5. Subjects don't always come before verbs in questions. Make sure you accurately
identify the subject before deciding on the proper verb form to use.
Where are the pieces of this puzzle?
6. If two subjects are joined by "and," they typically require a plural verb form.
7. The verb is singular if the two subjects separated by "and" refer to the same
person or thing as a whole.
8. If one of the words "each," "every," or "no" comes before the subject, the verb is
singular.
No smoking or drinking is allowed.
Every man and woman is required to check in.
9. If the subjects are both singular and are connected by the words "or," "nor,"
"neither/nor," "either/or," or "not only/but also," the verb is singular.
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All of the chicken is gone.
All of the chickens are gone.
11. The singular verb form is usually reserved for units of measurement or time.
12. If the subjects are both plural and are connected by the words "or," "nor,"
"neither/nor," "either/or," or "not only/but also," the verb is plural.
13. If one subject is singular and the other is plural, and the words are connected by
the words "or," "nor," "neither/nor," "either/or," or "not only/but also," use the verb
form of the subject that is nearest the verb.
15. The exceptions to the above rule include the pronouns "few," "many," "several,"
"both," "all," and "some." These always take the plural form.
Few were left alive after the flood.
16. If two infinitives are separated by "and," they take the plural form of the verb.
To walk and to chew gum require great skill.
17. When gerunds are used as the subject of a sentence, they take the singular
form of the verb. However, when they are linked by "and," they take the plural form.
Standing in the water was a bad idea.
Swimming in the ocean and playing drums are my hobbies.
18. A collective noun, such as "team" or "staff," can be either singular or plural
depending upon the rest of the sentence. Typically, they take the singular form, as
the collective noun is treated as a cohesive single unit.
The herd is stampeding.
19. Titles of books, movies, novels, and other similar works are treated as singular
and take a singular verb.
20. Final rule: Remember, only the subject affects the verb! Nothing else matters.
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Jacob, who owns sixteen houses, is on his way to becoming a billionaire.
E. Sentence Rules
Here are 20 simple rules and tips to help you avoid mistakes in English
grammar.
1. A sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a period/full stop, a
question mark or an exclamation mark.
● The fat cat sat on the mat.
● Where do you live?
● My dog is very clever!
2. The order of a basic positive sentence is Subject-Verb-Object. (Negative
and question sentences may have a different order.)
● John loves Mary.
● They were driving their car to Bangkok.
3. Every sentence must have a subject and a verb. An object is optional. Note
that an imperative sentence may have a verb only, but the subject is
understood.
● John teaches.
● John teaches English.
● Stop! (You stop!)
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● I have a big dog.
● She married a handsome Italian man.
● (Her husband is rich.)
7. When using two or more adjectives together, the usual order is opinion-
adjective + fact-adjective + noun. (There are some additional rules for the
order of fact adjectives.)
● I saw a nice French table.
● That was an interesting Shakespearian play.
8. Treat collective nouns (committee, company, board of directors) as
singular OR plural. In BrE a collective noun is usually treated as plural,
needing a plural verb and pronoun. In AmE a collective noun is often treated
as singular, needing a singular verb and pronoun.
● The committee are having sandwiches for lunch. Then they will go to
London. (typically BrE)
● The BBC have changed their logo. (typically BrE)
● My family likes going to the zoo. (typically AmE)
● CNN has changed its logo. (typically AmE)
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● How much money do you have?
● There are a few cars outside.
● There is little traffic on the roads.
19. To show possession (who is the owner of something) use an apostrophe
+ s for singular owners, and s + apostrophe for plural owners.
● The boy's dog. (one boy)
● The boys' dog. (two or more boys)
20. In general, use the active voice (Cats eat fish) in preference to the passive
voice (Fish are eaten by cats).
● We use active in preference to passive.
● Active is used in preference to passive.
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7. One of my sisters (is, are) going on a trip to France.
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7. The soup tastes good.
8. They are watching a horror film.
9. Every weekend, my wife goes jogging.
10. A rich pretty woman was walking home at night along a dark
road.
Using Transitions
accordingly
as a result
and so
because
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consequently
for that reason
hence
on account of
since
therefore
thus
after
afterwards
always
at length
during
earlier
following
immediately
in the meantime
later
never
next
now
once
simultaneously
so far
sometimes
soon
subsequently
then
this time
until now
when
whenever
while
Combinations
Lists–Connecting numerous events.
Part/Whole–Connecting numerous elements that make up something bigger.
additionally
again
also
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and, or, not
as a result
besides
even more
finally
first, firstly
further
furthermore
in addition
in the first place
in the second place
last, lastly
moreover
next
second, secondly, etc.
too
after all
although
and yet
at the same time
but
despite
however
in contrast
nevertheless
nonetheless
notwithstanding
on the contrary
on the other hand
otherwise
though
yet
as an illustration
e.g., (from a Latin abbreviation for “for example”)
for example
for instance
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specifically
that is
to demonstrate
to illustrate
chiefly
critically
foundationally
most importantly
of less importance
primarily
above
adjacent to
below
beyond
centrally
here
nearby
neighboring on
opposite to
peripherally
there
wherever
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Other kinds of transitional words and phrases
Clarification
Concession
granted
it is true
naturally
of course
to be sure
Conclusion
finally
lastly
in conclusion
in the end
to conclude
Intensification
in fact
indeed
no
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of course
surely
to repeat
undoubtedly
without doubt
yes
Purpose
Summary
in brief
in sum
in summary
in short
to sum up
to summarize
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1. Label the various elements in poetry.
2. Interpret some quotes about poetry.
3. Organize ideas between poetry and prose.
4. Examine the elements of poetry.
5. Discuss the difference between shape and form.
6.Choose figure of speech and apply it in writing.
7. Value the importance of sound-effect device.
8. Name popular literary devices.
9. Formulate cliché expression.
10.Use idiom term or phrase.
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Classically, prose is defined as a form of language based on grammatical
structure and the natural flow of speech. It is normally contrasted with poetry or
verse which is said to depend on a rhythmic structure, using meter or rhyme.
Spoken dialogue, factual discourse, and a whole range of forms of writing normally
use prose: literature, journalism, history, philosophy, encyclopedias, film and law
rely upon it for the bulk of what they have to say.
The word ‘prose’ first appears in English in the 14th century and comes from
the Old French prose. This originates in the Latin expression prosaoratio, which
means literally, 'straightforward or direct speech'. Prose tends to comprise of full
grammatical sentences, building to paragraphs; poetry typically contains a metrical
scheme and often some element of rhyme.
In fact, though, observation reveals that, rather than separate entities, they are part
of a spectrum of communication using words.
At one end of the spectrum, we have a highly precise, usually much shorter
and concentrated focus not only on the choice of particular words, their meanings
and their sounds, but also upon the gaps between them. The gaps, holes, absences
or vacuums both in sound and in meaning create the pulse of attention which we
call rhythm. At the other end, we have an often imprecise, usually much longer and
less concentrated pattern of words in which meanings and sounds are looser, and
the gaps between them less significant. Rhythm plays a less important role.
As Samuel Taylor Coleridge defined the two, prose is ‘words in their best
order; poetry - the best words in their best order.’ If one requires less attention from
a reader to achieve what one has to say, one can safely use prose; if, however, one
is keen to transmit an exact and intense experience, one tends to move towards the
poetic end of the spectrum.
A good example of this is the poem ‘Where I Come From’ by Canadian poet
Elizabeth Brewster. Written in free verse, the poem does not have any rhyme
scheme. In fact, it reads almost like prose:
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with yards where hens and chickens circle about,
clucking aimlessly; battered schoolhouses
behind which violets grow. Spring and winter
are the mind's chief seasons: ice and the breaking of ice.
A door in the mind blows open, and there blows
a frosty wind from fields of snow.
If prose is the better medium for conveying philosophical ideas, then the opening of
‘Where I Come From’ opens with a simple enough proposition: ‘People are made of
places. They carry with them/hints of jungles or mountains, a tropic grace/or the
cool eyes of sea gazers.’ However, there are already clear signs that this is not
simple prose: the juxtaposition of images is not something prose generally uses in
this way: ‘hints of jungles or mountains’, for example, would be said differently were
one to extract any ‘poetry’ from it. The grace is ‘tropic’; the eyes of the sea gazers
are ‘cool’. These aesthetic injections immediately differentiate this from a
commonplace statement.
The next sign that what we are reading is not prose comes in the following lines:
Atmosphere of cities
how different drops from them, like the smell of smog
or the almost-not-smell of tulips in the spring
In which prose syntax has been subtly altered: ‘how different’ doesn’t fit in there
in prose terms; the ‘almost-not-smell of tulips’ shows a more careful playing with
words than a piece of prose writing. It is precisely these differences, these
variations from an expected prose line, which create the tiny vacuums or gaps
which draw in our attention more fully than had the writer said something like ‘the
atmosphere of cities drops from them in a different fashion’ or ‘the very faint smell of
tulips clings to them’. The word ‘drops’ and the sound at the end of ‘tulips’ indicate
scrupuo engineering.
A little further down, the lines
Slip toward prose. Our olfactory sense is engaged, has it has been since
‘Atmosphere’ was mentioned, but otherwise the appeal is to the well-recognized.
Here, Brewster draws on the common experiences of most of her readers, who will
know the scent of ‘chromium-plated offices’, if not of ‘glue factories’. The
universally-experienced (for the city dweller) ‘smell of subways/crowded at rush
hour’ has the effect of evoking that experience while also suggesting that it is
indeed universal.And that is the point. Brewster’s first stanza is aimed at opening up
the familiar hollowness of modern existence; her second stanza, like the sestet of a
sonnet, then fills that hollowness with the vibrancy of a different kind of life:
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Where I come from, people
carry woods in their minds, acres of pine woods;
The repetition of ‘woods’ and the expansion of the image to ‘acres of pine woods’
transforms the emptiness created by the first stanza into a space richly filled. Using
the poetic tools of alliteration and assonance, the poet evokes a visual scene:
‘Blueberry’ and ‘violet’ splash color; the age of the farmhouses, their ‘need of
paint’ and the circling about of chickens ‘clucking aimlessly’, the ‘battered
schoolhouses’ are in subtle opposition to the ‘chromium-plated’ offices and the
tightly-controlled subway.
We are further away from prose, despite the lack of rhyme or distinct rhythm: more
care has been chosen in selecting words that have shrewd differences in meaning.
The fertility of these images, the depth of significance plumbed - even the choice of
‘violets’ as the flower often symbolizing death - indicate a move toward a more
meticulous word-choreography than a prose writer would normally utilize.
Of course, the same point that she makes - her longing for a simpler and
more natural life, orientated to the ‘Spring and winter’ of ‘the mind's chief seasons’ -
‘ice and the breaking of ice’ in the rural Canada of her youth - could be made with
prose too. A significance-heavy ‘literary’ prose could capture almost exactly the
same longing that this poem elicits, expressed most succinctly in its last lines, with
its repetition of ‘blows’ and the almost-rhyming ‘snow’:
But poetry is more ‘glue-like’: a prose passage could transmit ideas, even
images, perhaps even the subtle beauty of the poem, but the poet wants to stick
readers to her own experience. And the way to do that is through the vacuums more
evident at the poetic end of the spectrum.
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Birthplace: Stratford-upon-Avon, England
Famous poem: ”Sonnet XVIII” (Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?)
Famous quote: ”All the world’s a stage, and all the men and women merely
players: they have their exits and their entrances; and one man in his time plays
many parts. His acts being seven ages.”
Maya Angelou
Birthplace: St. Louis
Famous poem: ”On the Pulse of Morning”
Famous quote: ”I’ve learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget
what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.”
Emily Dickinson
Birthplace: Amherst, Massachusetts
Famous poem: “‘Hope’ is the thing with feathers”
Famous quote: “Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul — and
sings the tunes without the words — and never stops at all.”
Shel Silverstein
Birthplace: Chicago
Famous poem: “Where the Sidewalk Ends”
Famous quote: ”What I do is good. I wouldn’t let it out if I didn’t think it was.”
Robert Frost
Birthplace: San Francisco
Famous poem: “The Road Not Taken”
Famous quote: “The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to
keep, and miles to go before I sleep.”
Pablo Neruda
Birthplace: Parral, Chile
Famous poem: “I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You”
Famous quote: “To feel the love of people whom we love is a fire that feeds our
life.”
E. E. Cummings
Birthplace: Cambridge, Massachusetts
Famous poem: “i carry your heart with me”
Famous quote: “It takes courage to grow up and become who you really are.”
Langston Hughes
Birthplace: Joplin, Missouri
Famous poem: “I Too Sing America”
Famous quote: “Hold fast to dreams for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird
that cannot fly.”
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Walt Whitman
Birthplace: Long Island, New York
Famous poem: “I Hear America Singing”
Famous quote: “Either define the moment or the moment will define you.”
Thomas Hardy
Birthplace: Dorset, England
Famous poem: “Hap”
Famous quote: “The main object of religion is not to get a man into heaven, but to
get heaven into him.”
Rudyard Kipling
Birthplace: Bombay Presidency, British India
Famous poem: “Gunga Din”
Famous quote: “We have forty million reasons for failure, but not a single excuse.”
Oscar Wilde
Birthplace: Dublin, Ireland
Famous poem: “A Vision”
Famous quote: “I have the simplest tastes. I am always satisfied with the best.”
John Keats
Birthplace: London
Famous poem: “A Thing of Beauty (Endymion)”
Famous quote: “A thing of beauty is a joy forever; its loveliness increases; it will
never pass into nothingness.”
William Blake
Birthplace: London
Famous poem: “The Tyger”
Famous quote: “The glory of Christianity is to conquer by forgiveness.”
Sylvia Plath
Birthplace: Boston
Famous poem: “Daddy”
Famous quote: “Everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to
do it and the imagination to improvise.”
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Famous quote: “Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare
to think.”
William Wordsworth
Birthplace: Cumberland, England
Famous poem: “The Prelude”
Famous quote: “Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.”
Mark Twain
Birthplace: Florida, Missouri
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Famous poem: “Ode to Stephen Dowling Bots, Dec’d.”
Famous quote: “Kindness is the language which the deaf can hear and the blind
can see.”
Lewis Carroll
Birthplace: Cheshire, England
Famous poem: “Jabberwocky”
Famous quote: “It is one of the great secrets of life that those things which are
most worth doing, we do for others.”
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Ideas Ideas can be found in Ideas can be found in
sentences, which are lines, which are
arranged in paragraph. arranged in stanzas.
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The difference between prose and poetry can be drawn clearly on the following
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8. When it comes to paraphrasing or summarizing, both prose and poetry can
be paraphrased, but the paraphrase of the poem is not the poem, because
the essence of the poem lies in the style of writing, i.e. the way in which the
poet has expressed his/her experience in verses and stanzas. So, this writing
pattern and cadence is the beauty of poetry, which cannot be summarized
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And hold secret a bird’s flowering.
It must be slender as a bell,
And it must hold fire as well.
It must have the wisdom of bows
And it must kneel like a rose.
It must be able to hear
The luminance of dove and deer.
It must be able to hide
What it seeks, like a bride.
And over all I would like to hover
God, smiling from the poem’s cover.
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A poem should be palpable and mute
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Dumb
As old medallions to the thumb,
For love
The leaning grasses and two lights above the sea—
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Elements of Poetry
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The basic elements of poetry include the speaker, audience, content, theme,
shape and form, tone, imagery, diction, figures of speech, and sound-effect devices
A. Speaker
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Example #2: Annabel Lee (by Edgar Allan Poe)
The speaker in “Annabel Lee,” by Edgar Allan Poe, is the lover of Annabel Lee.
The speaker seems to be engaging, charming, and someone whom a girl would
meet and fall in love with right away. He is someone who would tell stories. As
readers move on reading the poem, they start realizing that there is something
wrong.
The readers begin to feel the speaker will return to a particular subject, and would
rage about something bad that may have happened to him. They notice a little
sparkle in his eyes that makes readers a bit uncomfortable, because he fascinates
them, and he cannot be ignored. Also, his voice has something powerful in it that
draws the reader in.
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Function
The role of a speaker is one of the most important aspects in a written work. A
speaker allows a more active voice, and plays the role of the mouthpiece in
conveying the ideas of a writer or a poet to the audience. Just like actors, a speaker
tells, or acts out directly, an account of what exactly occurs. It is found in different
forms of writing, but is very common in poetry and novels.
B. Audience
Audience is the person for whom a writer writes, or composer composes. A
writer uses a particular style of language, tone, and content according to what he
knows about his audience. In simple words, audience refers to the spectators,
listeners, and intended readers of a writing, performance, or speech.
Can you identify the audience being addressed in these poem?
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C. Content
Refers to a poem's language. It, too, makes use of numerous elements, including
the poem's topic, subject matter, theme, tone, word choices, word order, figurative
language, and imagery. Poetic form refers to a poem's physical structure; basically,
what the poem looks like and how it sounds.
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D. Theme
Is the lesson about life or statement about human nature that
the poem expresses. To determine theme, start by figuring out the main idea. Then
keep looking around the poem for details such as the structure, sounds, word
choice, and any poetic devices.
Here is an example of theme in poetry.
The main idea of the poem a dream written by Edgar Allan Poe is that life is not a
fairy tale and that it is not what he had expected it be. After being told all the lies
about life, he has discovered that life is tough and not what he had expected at all.
E. Structure
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Poetry is literature written in stanzas and lines that use rhythm to express
feelings and ideas. Lines or whole stanzas can be rearranged in order to create a
specific effect on the reader.
Structural Elements of Poetry
1. Line
is a unit of language into which a poem or play is divided. The use of
a line operates on principles which are distinct from and not necessarily
coincident with grammatical structures, such as the sentence or single clauses
in sentences.
2. Enjambment
Enjambment is the continuation of a sentence or clause across a line break.
You were only waiting for this moment to arise.(“Blackbird” by The Beatles)
Whose broad stripes and bright stars through the perilous fight,
Gave proof through the night that our flag was still there;
O’er the land of the free and the home of the brave?(“Star Spangled Banner” by
Francis Scott Key)
And this little piggy went wee weewee all the way home.(“This Little Piggy,” popular
nursery rhyme)
4. Caesura
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Examples
A caesura will usually occur in the middle of a line of poetry. This caesura is called
a medial caesura. For example, in the children's verse, 'Sing a Song of Sixpence,'
the caesura occurs in the middle of each line:
'Sing a song of sixpence, // a pocket full of rye.
Four and twenty blackbirds, // baked in a pie.
When the pie was opened, // the birds began to sing;
Wasn't that a dainty dish, // to set before the king?'
These medial caesurae indicate where most native speakers of English would
naturally pause, and in this case, occur at the same point as the commas, which
serve to emphasize that natural pause. (Note: you just heard me use the plural for
caesura: caesurae.)
The woods are lovely, || dark and deep
A masculine caesura, on the other hand, is one that follows a stressed syllable, as
in:
My words fly up, || my thoughts remain below
Generally speaking, feminine caesura often are a bit shorter and feel "softer."
Masculine caesura often feel harder and more abrupt.
5. Stanza
Stanza is a grouped set of lines within a poem, usually set off from
other stanzas by a blank line or indentation. Stanzas can have regular rhyme and
metrical schemes, though stanzas are not strictly required to have either.
Examples of Stanzas
Let's start with couplets. A couplet is a two-line stanza that traditionally rhymes.
Gwendolyn Brooks' famous short poem 'We Real Cool' is written entirely in
couplets:
'We real cool. We
Left school. We
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Lurk late. We
Strike straight. We
Sing sin. We
Thin gin. We
Jazz June. We
Die soon.'
As you can see, every line except for the last one ends with the word 'We.' Starting
a sentence or phrase on one line and ending it on the next is called enjambment.
Because Brooks' sentences cross over stanza breaks as well as line breaks, this
poem also uses stanza enjambment.
F. Shape and Form
Form, in poetry, can be understood as the physical structure of the poem: the length
of the lines, their rhythms, their system of rhymes and repetition. In this sense, it is
normally reserved for the type of poem where these features have been shaped into
a pattern, especially a familiar pattern.
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sense, it is normally reserved for the type of poem where these features have been
shaped into a pattern, especially a familiar pattern.
Here are some examples.
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G. Tone
The poet's attitude toward the poem's speaker, reader, and subject matter, as
interpreted by the reader. Often described as a “mood” that pervades the
experience of reading the poem, it is created by the poem's vocabulary, metrical
regularity or irregularity, syntax, use of figurative language, and rhyme.
H. Imagery
Imagery is one of the literary devices that engage the human senses; sight, hearing,
taste, and touch. Imagery is as important as metaphor and simile and can be written
without using any figurative language at all. It represents object, action, and idea
which appeal our senses. Sometimes it becomes more complex than just a picture.
There are five main types of imagery, each related to one of the human senses:
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After Apple picking- Robert Frost
I feel the ladder sway as the boughs bend.
And I keep hearing from the cellar bin
The rumbling sound
Of load on load of apples coming in.These lines have powerful imagery. We can
feel the swaying ladder, see the bending boughs and hear the rumbling sound of
apples going in the cellar bin. These lines are literal. Every word means what it
typically means. The entire poem is imagery that conveys deep feelings of
contemplation and subtle remorse for things left undone to the reader.
Romeo and Juliet –W. Shakespeare
O, she doth teach the torches to burn bright!
Her beauty hangs upon the cheek of night,
Like a rich jewel in an Ethiop’s earHere Romeo is comparing the beauty of Juliet.
He says that she looks more radiant than brightly lit torches in the hall. Further, he
says that her face glows like a precious bright jewel against the dark skin of an
African in the night. Here he uses the contrasting images of light and dark to portray
her beauty. The imagery also involves the use of figurative language; he uses the
simile to enhance the imagery.
I. Diction
Proper diction, or proper choice of words, is important to get the message across.
On the other hand, the wrong choice of words can easily divert listeners or readers,
which results in misinterpretation of the message intended to be conveyed.
Types of Diction
Individuals vary their diction depending on different contexts and settings.
Therefore, we come across various types of diction.
● Formal diction – formal words are used in formal situations, such as press
conferences and presentations.
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● Informal diction – uses informal words and conversation, such as writing or
talking to friends.
● Colloquial diction – uses words common in everyday speech, which may
be different in different regions or communities.
● Slang diction – is the use of words that are newly coined, or even impolite.
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each kid had his or her own little tree to plant and we’ve got these thirty dead trees.
All these kids looking at these little brown sticks, it was depressing.”The use of the
words “died,” “dead,” “brown sticks,” and “depressing” gives a gloomy tone to the
passage.
J. Figures of Speech
A figure of speech is a deviation from the ordinary use of words in order to
increase their effectiveness. Basically, it is a figurative language that may consist of
a single word or phrase. It may be a simile, a metaphor or personification to convey
the meaning other than the literal meaning.
Types of figures of Speech
The figures of speech list is over a hundred but some commonly used types are
given along with examples.
Example: Unfortunately, I was in the wrong place at the wrong time on the wrong
day.
Example: As Abraham Lincoln said, "Folks who have no vices have very few
virtues."
Example: "Oh, you stupid car, you never work when I need you to," Bert sighed.
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6. Chiasmus: A verbal pattern in which the second half of an expression is balanced
against the first but with the parts reversed.
Example: The famous chef said people should live to eat, not eat to live.
9. Irony: The use of words to convey the opposite of their literal meaning. Also,
a statement or situation where the meaning is contradicted by the appearance or
presentation of the idea.
Example: "Oh, I love spending big bucks," said my dad, a notorious penny pincher.
Example: "That stuffed suit with the briefcase is a poor excuse for a salesman," the
manager said angrily.
13. Onomatopoeia: The use of words that imitate the sounds associated with the
objects or actions they refer to.
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Example: "He popped the jumbo shrimp in his mouth."
Example: "This is the beginning of the end," said Eeyore, always the pessimist.
Example: That kitchen knife will take a bite out of your hand if you don't handle it
safely.
17. Pun: A play on words, sometimes on different senses of the same word and
sometimes on the similar sense or sound of different words.
Example: Jessie looked up from her breakfast and said, "A boiled egg every
morning is hard to beat."
18. Simile: A stated comparison (usually formed with "like" or "as") between two
fundamentally dissimilar things that have certain qualities in common.
Example: Roberto was white as a sheet after he walked out of the horror movie.
Example: "You could say Babe Ruth was a decent ballplayer," the reporter said
with a wink.
K. Sound-Effect Devices
Sound devices are special tools the poet can use to create certain effects in the
poem to convey and reinforce meaning through sound. The four most
common sound devices are repetition, rhyme, alliteration, and assonance. Subject
matter for any form of poetry writing is limitless.
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emotional response. The words and their order should evoke images, and the
words themselves have sounds, which can reinforce or otherwise clarify those
images. All in all, the poet is trying to get you, the reader, to sense a particular
thing, and the use of sound devices are some of the poet’s tools.
These definitions, by the way, come by way of the Glossary of Poetic Terms,
which can be found on the Internet at http://shoga.wwa.com/~rgs/glossary.html
ACCENT
The rhythmically significant stress in the articulation of words, giving
some syllables more relative prominence than others. In words of two or more
syllables, one syllable is almost invariably stressed more strongly than the other
syllables. Words of one syllable may be either stressed or unstressed,
depending on the context in which they are used, but connective one-syllable
words like, and, but, or, to, etc., are generally unstressed. The words in a line of
poetry are usually arranged so the accents occur at regular intervals, with
the meter defined by the placement of the accents within the foot. Accent should
not be construed as emphasis.
Sidelight: Two degrees of accent are natural to many multisyllabic
English words, designated as primary and secondary.
Sidelight: When a syllable is accented, it tends to be raised in pitch
and lengthened. Any or a combination of stress/pitch/length can be a
metrical accent.
Sidelight: When the full accent falls on a vowel, as in PO-tion, that
vowel is called a long vowel; when it falls on an articulation or
consonant, as in POR-tion, the preceding vowel is a short vowel.
ALLITERATION
Also called head rhyme or initial rhyme, the repetition of the initial sounds
(usually consonants) of stressed syllables in neighboring words or at short
intervals within a line or passage, usually at word beginnings, as in "wild and
woolly" or the line from the poem, Darkness Lost:
From somewhere far beyond, the flag of fate's caprice unfurled,
Sidelight: The sounds of alliteration produce a gratifying effect to the
ear and can also serve as a subtle connection or emphasis of key
words in the line, but should not "call attention" to themselves by
strained usage.
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ASSONANCE
The relatively close juxtaposition of the same or similar vowel sounds, but with
different end consonants in a line or passage, thus a vowel rhyme, as in the
words, date and fade.
CONSONANCE
A pleasing combination of sounds; sounds in agreement with tone. Also, the
repetition of the same end consonants of words such as boat and night within or
at the end of a line, or the words, cool and soul, as used by Emily Dickinson in
the third stanza of He Fumbles at your Spirit.
CACOPHONY (cack-AH-fun-ee)
Discordant sounds in the jarring juxtaposition of harsh letters or syllables,
sometimes inadvertent, but often deliberately used in poetry for effect, as in the
opening line of Fences:
Crawling, sprawling, breaching spokes of stone,
Sidelight: Sound devices are important to poetic effects; to create
sounds appropriate to the content, the poet may sometimes prefer to
achieve a cacophonous effect instead of the more commonly sought-
for euphony. The use of words with the consonants b, k and p, for
example, produce harsher sounds than the soft f and v or the liquid l,
m and n.
DISSONANCE
A mingling or union of harsh, inharmonious sounds that are grating to the ear.
EUPHONY (YOO-fuh-nee)
Harmony or beauty of sound that provides a pleasing effect to the ear, usually
sought-for in poetry for effect. It is achieved not only by the selection of
individual word-sounds, but also by their relationship in the repetition, proximity,
and flow of sound patterns.
Sidelight: Vowel sounds are generally more pleasing to the ear than
the consonants, so a line with a higher ratio of vowel sounds will
produce a more agreeable effect; also, the long vowels in words
like moon and fate are more melodious than the short vowels
in cat and bed.
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INTERNAL RHYME
Also called middle rhyme, a rhyme occurring within the line, as in the poem, The
Matador:
His childhood fraught with lessons taught by want and misery
METER
A measure of rhythmic quantity, the organized succession of groups
of syllables at basically regular intervals in a line of poetry, according to definite
metrical patterns. In classic Greek and Latin versification, meter depended on
the way long and short syllables were arranged to succeed one another, but in
English the distinction is between accented and unaccented syllables. The unit
of meter is the foot. Metrical lines are named for the constituent foot and for the
number of feet in the line: monometer (1), dimeter (2), trimeter (3), tetrameter
(4), pentameter (5), hexameter (6), heptameter (7) and octameter (8); thus, a
line containing five iambic feet, for example, would be called iambic pentameter.
Rarely does a metrical line exceed six feet.
Sidelight: In the composition of verse, poets sometimes make
deviations from the systematic metrical patterns. This is often
desirable because (1) variations will avoid the mechanical "te-dum, te-
dum" monotony of a too-regular rhythm and (2) changes in the
metrical pattern are an effective way to emphasize or reinforce
meaning in the content. These variations are introduced by
substituting different feet at places within a line. (Poets can also
employ a caesura, use run-on lines and vary the degrees of accent by
skillful word selection to modify the rhythmic pattern, a process
called modulation. Accents heightened by semantic emphasis also
provide diversity.) A proficient writer of poetry, therefore, is not a slave
to the dictates of metrics, but neither should the poet stray so far from
the meter as to lose the musical value or emotional potential of
rhythmical repetition. Of course, in modern free verse, meter has
become either irregular or non-existent.
MODULATION
In poetry, the harmonious use of language relative to the variations of stress and
pitch.
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Sidelight: Modulation is a process by which the stress values
of accents can be increased or decreased within a
fixed metrical pattern.
NEAR RHYME
Also called slant rhyme, off rhyme, imperfect rhyme or half rhyme, a rhyme in
which the sounds are similar, but not exact, as
in home and come or close and lose.
Sidelight: Due to changes in pronunciation, some near rhymes in
modern English were perfect rhymes when they were originally written
in old English.
ONOMATOPOEIA (ahn-uh-mah-tuh-PEE-uh)
Strictly speaking, the formation or use of words which imitate sounds,
like whispering, clang and sizzle, but the term is generally expanded to refer to
any word whose sound is suggestive of its meaning.
Sidelight: Because sound is an important part of poetry, the use of
onomatopoeia is another subtle weapon in the poet's arsenal for the
transfer of sense impressions through imagery.
Sidelight: Though impossible to prove, some philologists (linguistic
scientists) believe that all language originated through the
onomatopoeic formation of words.
PHONETIC SYMBOLISM
Sound suggestiveness; the association of particular word-sounds with common
areas of meaning so that other words of similar sounds come to be associated
with those meanings. It is also called sound symbolism.
Sidelight: An example of word sounds in English with a common area
of meaning is a group beginning with gl, all having reference to light,
which include:gleam, glare, glitter, glimmer, glint, glisten,
glossy and glow.
RESONANCE
The quality of richness or variety of sounds in poetic texture, as in Milton's
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. . . and the thunder . . . ceases now
To bellow through the vast and boundless Deep.
RHYME
In the specific sense, a type of echoing which utilizes a correspondence of
sound in the final accented vowels and all that follows of two or more words, but
the preceding consonant sounds must differ, as in the words, bear and care. In a
poetic sense, however, rhyme refers to a close similarity of sound as well as
an exact correspondence; it includes the agreement of vowel sounds
in assonance and the repetition of consonant sounds
in consonance and alliteration. Differences as well as identity in sound echoes
between words contribute to the euphonic effect, stimulate intellectual
appreciation, provide a powerful mnemonic device, and serve to unify a poem.
Terms like near rhyme, half rhyme, and perfect rhyme function to distinguish
between the types of rhyme without prejudicial intent and should not be
interpreted as expressions of value. Usually, but not always, rhymes occur at the
ends of lines.
Sidelight: Originally rime, the spelling was changed due to the
influence of its popular, but erroneous, association with the Latin
word, rhythmus. Many purists continue to use rime as the proper
spelling of the word.
Sidelight: Early examples of English poetry used alliterative
verse instead of rhyme. The use of rhyme in the end words
of verse originally arose to compensate for the sometimes
unsatisfactory quality of rhythm within the lines; variations in the
patterns of rhyme schemes then became functional in defining
diverse stanza forms, such as, ottava rima, rhyme royal, terzarima,
the Spenserian stanza and others. Rhyme schemes are also
significant factors in the definitions of whole poems, such
as ballade, limerick, rondeau, sonnet, triolet and villanelle.
RHYTHM
An essential of all poetry, the regular or progressive pattern of
recurrent accents in the flow of a poem as determined by
the arses and theses of the metrical feet, i.e., the rise and fall of stress. The
measure of rhythmic quantity is the meter.
Sidelight: A rhythmic pattern in which the stress falls on the
final syllable of each foot, as in the iamb or anapest, is called
a rising or ascending rhythm; a rhythmic pattern with the stress
occurring on the first syllable of each foot, as in the dactyl or trochee,
is a falling or descending rhythm.
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Sidelight: From an easy lilt to the rough cadence of a primitive chant,
rhythm is the organization of sound patterns the poet has created for
pleasurable reading.
Definition
When an author sits to write a story, she doesn't simply write what happened.
Instead, she uses what are called literary devices which are narrative techniques
that add texture, energy, and excitement to the narrative, grip the reader's
imagination, and convey information.
While there are literally hundreds of literary devices at an author's disposal, what
follows are a handful of the most common.
Allusion
An allusion is when an author refers to the events or characters from another
story in her own story with the hopes that those events will add context or depth to
the story she's trying to tell.
While allusions are common, they are also risky because the author has no certain
way of knowing her readers are familiar with the other story. To limit that risk,
allusions are often to very famous works such as the Bible or Shakespearean plays.
So, for example, one of the most alluded to texts in literature is the Bible, and
specifically the New Testament. Here is an allusion that a writer might make to the
Biblical story of Lazarus, who famously rose from the dead. Notice how using the
allusion helps intensify the character's recovery:
Night after night our hero lay in bed with the flu, hacking mucus and blood and
seeing behind his eyelids the angels or devils come to collect him. But one morning,
like Lazarus, he was whole again…
It should also be noted that an allusion doesn't have to specifically name the
character or event it's referring to.
Diction
Diction refers to an author's choice of words. When describing the events of her
story, an author never has just one word at her disposal.
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Rather, she must choose from many words that have similar denotative meanings
(the definition you'd find in a dictionary), but different connotative meanings (the
associations, positive or negative with a given word).
The decisions she makes with those words are what we call her diction.
For example, imagine that a child in a story comes home from school and tells his
parents about his day.
Here are four separate ways he could describe his behavior at recess. Notice how
selecting one italicized word over another, shifting the diction, totally changes the
meaning of the sentence:
Epigraph
Reading literature, you may have come across a work where the author under
the title has included a quotation from some other work; often the quotation is in
italics.
When an author does this, she is using what's called an epigraph. Like an allusion,
an epigraph is a reference to another work that an author hopes will help readers
understand her own work. Unlike an allusion, an epigraph stands apart from the text
itself rather than being included in it.
Let's take a look at an epigraph from T.S. Eliot's famous poem 'The Love Song of J.
Alfred Prufrock.' The epigraph is from Dante's Inferno, and is meant to help Eliot's
reader understand that the poem that follows is a kind of confession.
If I but thought that my response were made
to one perhaps returning to the world,
this tongue of flame would cease to flicker.
But since, up from these depths, no one has yet
returned alive, if what I hear is true,
I answer without fear of being shamed.
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Euphemism
Often in literature, whether for humor or just for taste, a writer wishes to
describe some graphic or offensive event using milder imagery or phrasing. When
an author does this, it's called a euphemism.
While this example isn't from literature, it underscores the meaning of euphemism.
Imagine that a sports broadcaster calling the action in a baseball game has to say
into the microphone that a player has just been struck in the genitalia with a line
drive. Obviously in the interests of taste, he doesn't wish to say 'genitalia' on the air,
and so instead he says:
'…it's a line drive up the middle and, oh my goodness, ladies and gentlemen, he
seems to have taken one below the belt…'
Notice how below the belt communicates where the ball hit the player but avoids
using the more explicit term.
Foreshadowing
In order to create suspense for her readers, an author often wishes to hint
where the story is going. At the same time, she doesn't wish to give away the
ending.
When an author hints at the ending of or at an upcoming event in her story without
fully divulging it, she is using what's called foreshadowing.
At the end of Ernest Hemingway's famous novel A Farewell to Arms, a key
character dies while it's raining.
To hint at that death, Hemingway earlier in the book includes a scene where the
character admits that she is afraid of the rain because sometimes she sees herself
dead in it.
While this is just an irrational vision, it also gives the reader an ominous detail and
hints at an event that might be to come.
Imagery
Just as when an author chooses words for their connotative associations (see
the above discussion of 'diction'), she chooses sensory details for the associations
or tones they evoke. This is the author's selection of imagery.
In Theodore Roethke's famous poem, 'My Papa's Waltz,' we see a young boy
dance with his drunken father. It's a happy memory for the boy, but also the poem
hints at the father's dangerous condition. One of the ways Roethke achieves this is
through his selection of imagery.
Consider the first stanza:
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The whiskey on your breath
Could make a small boy dizzy;
But I hung on like death:
Such waltzing was not easy.
While there are several examples of imagery here, think specifically about
Roethke's choice of 'whiskey' as the alcohol the father is drinking.
Just as choosing one word over another offers different connotations so does
choosing one image over another affect the work's tone.
What if the father had been drinking a wine cooler or a gin fizzy, for instance? How
would that change how we understand the father's character?
Metaphor
When attempting to describe an image or event, an author often will find it
useful to compare what she's describing to another image or event. This is
called metaphor, and it gives the reader a fresh, sometimes startling way of
imagining what's going on.
In Andrew Marvell's famous poem, 'To His Coy Mistress,' the speaker uses the
following metaphor to describe his fear of pending death.
But at my back I always hear
time's winged chariot hurrying near...
By comparing death to a 'winged chariot,' the speaker is able to communicate the
strength and horror with which he imagines his own demise instead of just trying to
describe directly how thinking about death feels.
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Learning Exercise 10.1
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Tone
Tone has a significant place in literature as it manifests writers’ attitudes
toward different subjects. Explain the tone used in each sentences.
1. Holden Caulfield, in J. D. Salinger’s Catcher in the Rye, unfolds his personality
through the tone he adopts throughout the novel. Let us have a look at some of
his remarks:
• “If a girl looks swell when she meets you, who gives a damn if she’s late?
Nobody.”
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Learning Exercise 10.2
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Theme
Find the major theme in poetry from William Ernest Henley.
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Learning Exercise 10.3
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Figures Of Speech
Identify the figure of speech used in the following sentences.
_________________1. Let him be rich and weary.
_________________3. All the perfumes of Arabia will not sweeten this little
hand.
_________________5. The mountains sing together, the hills rejoice and clap
hands.
_________________7. Men may come and men may go, but I go on forever.
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CHAPTER iv
Genres of Poetry
A. Narrative Poetry
B. Lyric Poetry
C. Dramatic Poetry
A. Narrative Poetry
Is a form of poetry that tells a story, often making the voices of a narrator and
characters as well; the entire story is usually written in metered verse.
Narrative poem in literature is a poem which tells a story. It has a full storyline with
all the elements of a traditional story. These elements include
characters, plot, conflict and resolution, setting and action. Although a narrative
poem does not need a rhyming pattern, it is a metered poem with clear objectives to
reach a specific audience.
Examples of narrative poems include:
1. Epic
The word epic is derived from the Ancient Greek adjective, “epikos”, which means a
poetic story. In literature, an epic is a long narrative poem, which is usually related
to heroic deeds of a person of an unusual courage and unparalleled bravery. In
order to depict this bravery and courage, the epic uses grandiose style.
Epic poetry–or heroic poetry, as some of the medieval poets have called it–follows a
certain time-tested formula to portray such grand representations of heroes and
their followers. Here are a few recurring patterns to keep in mind when considering
these texts:
● The invocation of a muse. These poets plea to the gods at the very beginning
to grant them the power to tell these stories with a certain forcefulness,
though some admittedly pretend to do so to claim they are divinely
empowered.
● Many of these begin in medias res, in the middle of the story, and may
digress into the past later on in the poem.
● There are many journeys into the underworld.
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● There are grand battle-scenes punctuated by extended similes, ambitious
analogies that stretch the imagination but strive for literary glory.
● Many will feature the might of armies in long digressions featuring weaponry
and war games.
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It is not surprising that even the oldest known work of literature in the world is an
epic poem written on the grandest of scales. Based on the actual Assyrian king,
Gilgamesh confronts many of the themes that Homer will tackle in his epic poetry:
the human/deity divide, mortality, seduction, legacy. As a young god-king in the
poem, Gilgamesh’s arrogant practices trouble the populace until Enkidu, a wildman
created by a goddess, challenges the monarch’s power. Although it was written
about 4000 years ago, critics have argued that it is a particularly humanistic work,
as the demi-gods’ desire adventure and pleasure over ruthless.
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Few details are known about who Homer actually was, but the poet’s (or poets’)
identity is surely peripheral compared to the impact these two texts have had on
Western Civilization. Sparked by the taking of Helen from Sparta, the Greeks, lead
by Achilles, advance towards Troy to destroy their adversary. While there is some
involvement from the gods, it is again the human factor that is much more
significant, as the leader’s fateful spar with Hector is both a celebration of military
heroism and a mournful ode to the losses of battle. Many common phrases have
their origin in this poem, including the hero’s vulnerable “Achilles’ Heel”, as well as
the famous symbol of deception, “the trojan horse”, the receptacle used to bring the
soldiers into the Trojan stronghold.
2. Metrical Romance
A metrical romance poem is a type of prose poem that was especially popular
during the Renaissance. These poems do not rhyme and deal with themes such as
love, rites of passage, chivalry, adventure and interpersonal relationships. Knights,
fair maidens and epic journeys appear frequently in metrical romance poems.
Metrical romance poems were the dominant poetic form among royalty, nobility and
wealthy landowners during the Renaissance. These poems tell tales and almost
always have a happy ending. Despite their name, metrical romance poems do not
always include a love story. The defining feature of a metrical romance poem is the
hero character, a courageous man with excellent moral character. Most heroes are
knights. Prose poems that lack a hero but have the other characteristics of a
metrical romance are called metrical tales. The most famous example of a metrical
tale is "The Canterbury Tales" by Geoffrey Chaucer. Spenser's "Fairie Queen,"
however, has a hero and is therefore a metrical romance.
3. Metrical Tale
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brave Knights facing hardships and trials in their quests for adventure. A romantic
end would often suffice as a reward for their valiant accomplishments.
Most metrical tales convey the story in the first person.
Note that the majority of hip-hop lyrics adhere to the metrical tale style, also referred
to as "meter."
"The Lady of the Lake" by Sir Walter Scott is an excellent example of a Metrical
Tale.
A metrical tale is a simple and straightforward long story consisting usually of a
single series of connective events, and usually, do not form a plot. Examples of
these are simple idylls or home tales, love tales, tales of the supernatural or tales
written for a strong moral purpose in verse form and can be the length of a short
story or of a complete novel.
4. Ballad
A ballad is a form of verse, often a narrative set to music. Ballads derive
from the medieval French chanson balladée or ballade, which were originally
"dance songs". Ballads were particularly characteristic of the popular poetry and
song of Britain and Ireland from the later medieval period until the 19th century.
They were widely used across Europe, and later in Australia, North Africa, North
America and South America. Ballads are often 13 lines with an ABABBCBC form,
consisting of couplets (two lines) of rhymed verse, each of 14 syllables. Another
common form is ABAB or ABCB repeated, in alternating 8 and 6 syllable lines.
Many ballads were written and sold as single sheet broadsides. The form
was often used by poets and composers from the 18th century onwards to produce
lyrical ballads. In the later 19th century, the term took on the meaning of a slow form
of popular love song and is often used for any love song, particularly
the sentimental ballad of pop or rock music, although the term is also associated
with the concept of a stylized storytelling song or poem, particularly when used as a
title for other media such as a film.
B. Lyric Poetry
A lyric poem or lyrical poem in literature is a poem in which the poet either
expresses his feelings and emotions. The poet also presents a character in the first
person to express his emotions. It is a combination of lyric and poetry where a piece
of poetry is written as a lyric. Lyric has been derived from lyre, a musical stringed
instrument used during the Grecian period to accompany the poetry sung during
different festivities.
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Types of Lyric
There are several types of lyric used in poems such as given below:
Elegy
Ode
Sonnet
Song
Simple Lyric
These Lyric Simple poems are examples of Simple poems about Lyric. These are
the best examples of Simple Lyric poems written by international poets.
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C. Dramatic Poetry
A dramatic monologue has theatrical quality, which means that the poem portrays a
solitary speaker communing with the audience, without any dialogue coming from
other characters. Usually, the speaker talks to a specific person in the poem.
Soliloquy
A soliloquy is a popular literary device often used in drama to reveal the innermost
thoughts of a character. It is a great technique used to convey the progress of
action of the play, by means of expressing a character’s thoughts about a certain
character or past, present, or upcoming event, while talking to himself without
acknowledging the presence of any other person.
Soliloquy vs. Monologue
Soliloquy and monologue cover very similar ground, but there are some important
differences between the two words. Soliloquy (from the Latin solus “alone”
and loqui “to speak”) at its most basic level refers to the act of talking to oneself,
and more specifically denotes the solo utterance of an actor in a drama. It tends to
be used of formal or literary expressions, such as
Hamlet’s soliloquies. Monologue (from Greek monos "alone" and legein "to speak")
may also refer to a dramatic scene in which an actor soliloquizes, but it has other
meanings as well. To a stand-up comedian, monologue denotes a comic routine. To
a bored listener, it signifies a long speech uttered by someone who has too much to
say.
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3.Metrical Tale
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Learning Exercise 11.2
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Input 12 Poetic Forms
Poetic Forms
A. Genetic Forms
B. Complex Whole-Poem Forms
C. Short Whole-Poem Forms
D. Free Verse
A. Genetic Forms
Coupletis a literary device that can be defined as having two successive rhyming
lines in a verse, and has the same meter to form a complete thought. It is marked
by a usual rhythm, rhyme scheme, and incorporation of specific utterances.
Tripletis a rather rare stanza form in poetry and is basically three lines that rhyme.
It is a type of tercet, or three-lined stanza or poem. However, the triplet is more
specifically bound by rhyme scheme and sometimes meter than the tercet.
Quatrain is a stanza in a poem that has exactly four lines. Some quatrains
comprise entire poems, while others are part of a larger structure. Quatrains usually
use some form of rhyme scheme, especially the following forms: AAAA, AABB,
ABAB, and ABBA. Lines in quatrain can be any length and with any meter, but there
is usually a regular rhythm to the lines as well. There are examples of quatrains in
many eras and cultures, from Ancient Greece and China to Renaissance England
and Iran to contemporary literature.
Refrain is a verse or phrase that is repeated at intervals throughout a song
or poem, usually after the chorus or stanza.
Ballad is a narrative poem that originally was set to music. Ballads were first created
in medieval France, and the word ballad comes from the French term chanson
balladée, which means “dancing song.” Ballads then became popular in Great
Britain, and remained so until the nineteenth century. The meaning has changed
somewhat in the present day to refer to any slow love song.
Blank verse is a literary device defined as un-rhyming verse written in
iambic pentameter. In poetry and prose, it has a consistent meter with 10 syllables
in each line (pentameter); where, unstressed syllables are followed by stressed
ones, five of which are stressed but do not rhyme. It is also known as “un-
rhymed iambic pentameter.”
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Dropped line is a line which is broken into two lines, but where the second part
is indented to the horizontal position it would have had an unbroken line. For
example, in the poem "The Other Side of the River" by Charles Wright, the first and
second lines form a dropped line, as do the fourth and fifth lines.
Tetractys or tetractys of the decad is a triangular figure consisting of ten points
arranged in four rows: one, two, three, and four points in each row, which is the
geometrical representation of the fourth triangular number. As a mystical symbol, it
was very important to the secret worship of Pythagoreanism. There were four
seasons, and the number was also associated with planetary motions and music.
Stichomythia is a technique in drama or poetry, in which alternating lines, or half-
lines, are given to alternating characters, voices, or entities. The term originated in
the literature of Ancient Greece, and is often applied to the dramas of Sophocles.
Etymologically it derives from the Greek stichos ("rows") + mythos ("speech").
Spoken word poetry is a poetic performance art that is word-based. It is an oral art
that focuses on the aesthetics of word play such as intonation and voice inflection. It
is a "catchall" term that includes any kind of poetry recited aloud, including poetry
readings, poetry slams, jazz poetry, and hip hop, and can include comedy routines
and prose monologues.[1] Although spoken word can include any kind of poetry read
aloud, it is different from written poetry in that how it sounds is often one of the main
components. Unlike written poetry, it has less to do with physical, on the page
aesthetics and more to do with phonaesthetics, or the aesthetics of sound.
Sonneta poem of fourteen lines using any of a number of formal rhyme schemes, in
English typically having ten syllables per line.
Sestinaa poem with six stanzas of six lines and a final triplet, all stanzas having the
same six words at the line-ends in six different sequences that follow a fixed
pattern, and with all six words appearing in the closing three-line envoi.
Ghazal is a poem that is made up like an odd numbered chain of couplets, where
each couplet is an independent poem. It should be natural to put a comma at the
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end of the first line. The Ghazal has a refrain of one to three words that repeat, and
an inline rhyme that preceedes the refrain.
Pantoum is a form of poetry similar to a villanelle in that there are repeating lines
throughout the poem. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth
lines of each stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next stanza.
Rondeau a thirteen-line poem, divided into three stanzas of 5, 3, and 5 lines, with
only two rhymes throughout and with the opening words of the first line used as a
refrain at the end of the second and third stanzas.
Haikuis traditionally a Japanese poem consisting of three short lines that do not
rhyme. The origins of haiku poems can be traced back as far as the 9th century.
Textula is a blend of the English word "text" and the Filipino word "tula! ' Meaning
text poem, it is a poem written in the form of a text message. Usually consisting of
one or two stanzas, it is sent as a direct communication to a person close to the
sender.
Dalit meaning "broken/scattered" in Sanskrit and Hindi, is a term mostly used for
the lower caste members in India. The term is used for those who have been
subjected to untouchability.
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Limerick is a form of verse, usually humorous and frequently rude, in five-line,
predominantly anapestic meter with a strict rhyme scheme of AABBA, in which the
first, second and fifth line rhyme, while the third and fourth lines are shorter and
share a different rhyme.
D. Free Verse
Free verse is a literary device that can be defined as poetry that is free from
limitations of regular meter or rhythm, and does not rhyme with fixed forms. Such
poems are without rhythm and rhyme schemes, do not follow regular rhyme
scheme rules, yet still provide artistic expression. In this way, the poet can give his
own shape to a poem however he or she desires. However, it still allows poets to
use alliteration, rhyme, cadences, and rhythms to get the effects that they consider
are suitable for the piece. Function of Free Verse
Free verse is commonly used in contemporary poetry. Some poets have taken
this technique as a freedom from rhythm and rhyme, because it changes people’s
minds whimsically. Therefore, free verse is also called verslibre.
The best thing about free verse is that poets can imagine the forms of any
sound through intonations instead of meters. Free verse gives a greater freedom for
choosing words, and conveying their meanings to the audience. Since it depends
upon patterned elements like sounds, phrases, sentences, and words, it is free of
artificiality of a typical poetic expression.
Examples of Free Verse
A Noiseless Patient Spider (By Walt Whitman)
“A noiseless patient spider,
I mark’d where on a little promontory it stood isolated,
Mark’d how to explore the vacant vast surrounding,
It launch’d forth filament, filament, filament, out of itself,
Ever unreeling them, ever tirelessly speeding them.
And you O my soul where you stand,
Surrounded, detached, in measureless oceans of space…
Till the bridge you will need be form’d, till the ductile anchor hold,
Till the gossamer thread you fling catch somewhere, O my soul.”
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Reading and writing drama: Finding the Shakespeare in you
1. Identifyfiction.
2. Explainwhat is novel.
3. Differentiate between detective novel and allegorical novel.
4. Create own dime novel.
5. Compare dystopian novel and mystery novel.
6. Criticizeerotic novel.
7. Value the importance of horror novel.
8. Discover the famous examples of fables.
9. Createown fairy tale story.
10. Use fiction in writing.
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1. What is Fiction?
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“That's what fiction is for. It's for getting at the truth when the truth isn't sufficient for
the truth.”
― Tim O'Brien
“Artists use lies to tell the truth. Yes, I created a lie. But because you believed it,
you found something true about yourself.”
― Alan Moore, V for Vendetta
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“I have claimed that Escape is one of the main functions of fairy-stories, and since I
do not disapprove of them, it is plain that I do not accept the tone of scorn or pity
with which 'Escape' is now so often used. Why should a man be scorned if, finding
himself in prison, he tries to get out and go home? Or if he cannot do so, he thinks
and talks about other topics than jailers and prison-walls?”
― J.R.R. Tolkien
“Fiction is art and art is the triumph over chaos… to celebrate a world that lies
spread out around us like a bewildering and stupendous dream.”
― John Cheever
“Fiction is one of the few experiences where loneliness can be both confronted and
relieved. Drugs, movies where stuff blows up, loud parties -- all these chase away
loneliness by making me forget my name's Dave and I live in a one-by-one box of
bone no other party can penetrate or know. Fiction, poetry, music, really deep
serious sex, and, in various ways, religion -- these are the places (for me) where
loneliness is countenanced, stared down, transfigured, treated.”
― David Foster Wallace
“One always has a better book in one's mind than one can manage to get onto
paper.”
― Michael Cunningham
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“The good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. That is what Fiction means.”
― Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest
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“Life is infinitely stranger than anything which the mind of man could invent. We
would not dare to conceive the things which are really mere commonplaces of
existence. If we could fly out of that window hand in hand, hover over this great city,
gently remove the roofs, and and peep in at the queer things which are going on,
the strange coincidences, the plannings, the cross-purposes, the wonderful chains
of events, working through generations, and leading to the most outre results, it
would make all fiction with its conventionalities and foreseen conclusions most stale
and unprofitable.”
― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes
“You should never read just for "enjoyment." Read to make yourself smarter! Less
judgmental.More apt to understand your friends' insane behavior, or better yet, your
own. Pick "hard books." Ones you have to concentrate on while reading. And for
god's sake, don't let me ever hear you say, "I can't read fiction. I only have time for
the truth." Fiction is the truth, fool! Ever hear of "literature"? That means fiction, too,
stupid.”
― John Waters, Role Models
“Men are more interesting in books than they are in real life.”
― Mary Ann Shaffer, The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society
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The two main types of fiction are literary and commercial.
Commercial fiction attracts a broad audience and may also fall into
any subgenre, like mystery, romance, legal thriller, western, science fiction, and so
on. For example, The Bridges of Madison County by Robert James Waller (Warner,
1992) was a hugely successful commercial novel because the book described the
fulfillment of a romantic fantasy that is dear to the heart of millions of readers.
Written in a short, easy-to-read style, the book was as mesmerizing to 15-year-olds
as it was to 100-year-olds. Other blockbuster commercial fiction authors include
John Grisham, Sidney Sheldon, Danielle Steele, and Jackie Collins.
Literary fiction tends to appeal to a smaller, more intellectually adventurous
audience. A work of literary fiction can fall into any of the subgenres described in
the following sections. What sets literary fiction apart, however, is the notable
qualities it contains — excellent writing, originality of thought, and style — that raise
it above the level of ordinary written works. A recent work of literary fiction that
enjoyed wide popularity was Cold Mountain by Charles Frazier (Atlantic Monthly
Press, 1997). Other popular authors of literary fiction include Toni Morrision,
Barbara Kingsolver, John LeCarre, and Saul Bellow.
What are the major differences between a short story, novelette, novella, and a
novel?
Novellas and novelettes might not be very common, but we often see short stories
and novels. Knowing the differences, however, is still important. Although they are
all works of fiction, each type has its own purpose. In this article, I will try to put light
on some of the major differences between flash fiction, short story, novelette,
novella, novel.
Beginners will find this very helpful in their writing journey. Apart from some of the
basic differences in terms of word count, you will also learn a few technical points
that differentiate these works of fiction.
Flash Fiction: 53 - 1,000 words
Short Stories: 3,500 - 7,500
Novellettes: 7,500 - 17,000
Novellas: 17,000 - 40,000
Novels: 40,000 + words
A. Novel
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● Realistic Novel:
A fictional attempt to give the effect of realism. This sort of
novel is sometimes called a novel of manner. A realistic novel can
be characterized by its complex characters with mixed motives that are rooted in
social class and operate according to highly developed social structure. The
characters in realistic novel interact with other characters and undergo plausible
and everyday experiences.
● Picaresque Novel:
A picaresque novel relates the adventures of an eccentric or
disreputable hero in episodic form. The genre gets its name from the Spanish
word picaro, or "rogue."
● Historical Novel:
A Historical novel is a novel set in a period earlier than that of
the writing.
● Epistolary Novel:
Epistolary fiction is a popular genre where the narrative is told
via a series of documents. The word epistolary comes from Latin where ‘epistola’
means a letter. Letters are the most common basis for epistolary novels but diary
entries are also popular
● Bildungsroman:
German terms that indicates a growth. This fictional
autobiography concerned with the development of the protagonist’s mind, spirit, and
characters from childhood to adulthood.
● Gothic Novel:
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Gothic novel includes terror, mystery, horror, thriller,
supernatural, doom, death, decay, old haunted buildings with ghosts and so on.
● Autobiographical Novel:
An autobiographical novel is a novel based on the life of the
author.
● Satirical Novel:
Satire is loosely defined as art that ridicules a specific topic in
order to provoke readers into changing their opinion of it. By attacking what they
see as human folly, satirists usually imply their own opinions on how the thing being
attacked can be improved.
● Allegorical Novel:
An allegory is a story with two levels of meaning- surface
meaning and symbolic meaning. The symbolic meaning of an allegory can be
political or religious, historical or philosophical.
● Regional Novel:
A religious novel is a novel that is set against the
background of a particular area.
● Novella:
A novella is a short, narrative, prose fiction. As a literary
genre, the novella’s origin lay in the early Renaissance literary work of the Italians
and the French. As the etymology suggests, novellas originally were news of town
and country life worth repeating for amusement and edification.
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Examples: Joseph Conrad’s Heart of Darkness,
● Detective Fiction:
Detective fiction is a subgenre of crime fiction and
mystery fiction in which an investigator or a detective—either professional or
amateur—investigates a crime, often murder.
Examples: Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’ A Study in Scarlet ( Sherlock Holmes), Satyajit
Roy’s Sonar Kella (Feluda), G. K. Chesterton’s The Blue Cross (Father Brown),
Dr. NiharRanjan Gupta’s KaloBhramar (Kiriti)
● Prose Romance:
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This is a novel that is often set in the historical past with a plot
that emphasizes adventure and an atmosphere removed from reality. The
characters in a prose romance are either sharply drawn as villains or heroes,
masters or victims; while the protagonist is isolated from the society.
● Novel of Incident:
In a novel of incident the narrative focuses on what the
protagonist will do next and how the story will turn out.
Examples: The Wizard of Oz, Star Wars etc.
● Novel of Character:
A novel of character focuses on the protagonist’s
motives for what he/she does and how he/she turns out.
● Roman á clef:
French term for a novel with a key, imaginary events with
real people disguised as fictional characters.
Examples: The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath, Animal Farm by George Orwell, On the
Road by Jack Kerouac etc.
● Dime Novel:
Dime novels were short works of fiction, usually focused
on the dramatic exploits of a single heroic character. As evidenced by their name,
dime novels were sold for a dime (sometimes a nickel), and featured colourful cover
illustrations. They were bound in paper, making them light, portable, and somewhat
ephemeral.
Example: Dime novels are, at least in spirit, the antecedent of today's mass market
paperbacks, comic books, and even television shows and movies based on the
dime novel genres. Buffalo Ball.
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● Hypertext Novel:
Hypertext fiction is a genre of electronic literature,
characterized by the use of hypertext links which provide a new context for non-
linearity in literature and reader interaction. The reader typically chooses links to
move from one node of text to the next, and in this fashion arranges a story from a
deeper pool of potential stories. Its spirit can also be seen in interactive fiction.
● Sentimental Novel:
The sentimental novel or the novel of sensibility is an 18th-
century literary genre which celebrates the emotional and intellectual concepts
of sentiment, sentimentalism, and sensibility.
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Examples: Frank Miller’s Batman: The Dark Knight Returns, The Fantastic
Four and X-Men etc.
● Pulp Fiction:
Term originated from the magazines of the first half of the 20th
century which were printed on cheap "pulp" paper and published fantastic, escapist
fiction for the general entertainment of the mass audiences. The pulp fiction era
provided a breeding ground for creative talent which would influence all forms of
entertainment for decades to come. The hardboiled detective and science fiction
genres were created by the freedom that the pulp fiction magazines provided.
Examples: The Spider, Doc Savage, Blood N Thunder etc.
● Erotic Novel:
Erotic romance novels have romance as the main focus of the
plot line, and they are characterized by strong, often explicit, sexual content.[2] The
books can contain elements of any of the other romance subgenres, such as
paranormal elements, chick lit, hen lit, historical fiction, etc. Erotic romance is
classed as pornography .
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● Roman fleuve:
A novel sequence is a set or series of novels which share
common themes, characters, or settings, but where each novel has its own title and
free-standing storyline, and can thus be read independently or out of sequence.
● Anti-Novel:
An antinovel is any experimental work of fiction that avoids the
familiar conventions of the novel, and instead establishes its own conventions.
Examples: Laurence Sterne's TristramShandy.
● Interactive Novel:
The interactive novel is a form of interactive web fiction. In an
interactive novel, the reader chooses where to go next in the novel by clicking on a
piece of hyperlinked text, such as a page number, a character, or a direction.
● Fantasy Novel:
Stories involving paranormal magic and terrible monsters have
existed in spoken forms before the advent of printed literature.
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Examples: The Christmas Mystery, Charlotte's Web by E.B. White, James and
the Giant Peach by Roald Dahl.
● Dystopian Novel:
A dystopia is an unpleasant (typically repressive) society, often
propagandized as being utopian.
● Mystery Novel:
The mystery genre is a type of fiction in which a detective, or
other professional, solves a crime or series of crimes. It can take the form of
a novel or short story. This genre may also be called detective or crime novels.
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importance of the frame was diminished, as was the necessity for maintaining
absolute objectivity.
B. Short Story
Short story, brief fictional prose narrative that is shorter than a novel and that
usually deals with only a few characters.
The short story is usually concerned with a single effect conveyed in only one or a
few significant episodes or scenes. The form encourages economy of setting,
concise narrative, and the omission of a complex plot; character is disclosed in
action and dramatic encounter but is seldom fully developed. Despite its relatively
limited scope, though, a short story is often judged by its ability to provide a
“complete” or satisfying treatment of its characters and subject.
Before the 19th century the short story was not generally regarded as a
distinct literary form. But although in this sense it may seem to be a uniquely
modern genre, the fact is that short prose fiction is nearly as old as language itself.
Throughout history humankind has enjoyed various types of brief narratives:
jests, anecdotes, studied digressions, short allegorical romances, moralizing fairy
tales, short myths, and abbreviated historical legends. None of these constitutes a
short story as it has been defined since the 19th century, but they do make up a
large part of the milieu from which the modern short story emerged.
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adventures in an episode style. __________
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considered a “short short story” or “flash fiction,” and anything less than 300 words
is rightfully called “microfiction.”
Short stories gained popularity in the second half of the 19th century, with the
growth of print magazines and journals. Newspaper and magazine editors began
publishing stories as commercial entertainment, creating a demand for short, plot-
driven narratives with mass appeal. By the late 1800s and early 1900s, well-known
periodicals, like The Atlantic Monthly, The New Yorker, and Harper’s
Magazine, were paying good money for short stories that showed more literary
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technique and artistry. Higher standards and higher pay meant aspiring writers
could actually earn a living while elevating their craft.
That golden era of publishing gave rise to the short story as we know it today—a
real literary art form. The decades after World War II (post-1945) saw a surge of
literary short stories being written and circulated, but contemporary authors never
saw the same level of profits from publishing individual stories. Today, some literary
magazines pay a small rate, but most short stories are printed without
compensating authors.
Here are some literary styles/movements, with examples of authors and the
years in which they wrote:
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Myth is a folklore genre consisting of narratives or stories that play a fundamental
role in a society, such as foundational tales or origin myths. The main characters in
myths are usually gods, demigods, or supernatural humans. Stories of everyday
human beings, although often of leaders of some type, are usually contained
in legends, as opposed to myths.
Myths are often endorsed by rulers and priests or priestesses and are closely linked
to religion or spirituality. Many societies group their myths, legends, and history
together, considering myths and legends to be true accounts of their remote past. In
particular, creation myths take place in a primordial age when the world had not
achieved its later form. Other myths explain how a society's customs, institutions,
and taboos were established and sanctified. There is a complex relationship
between recital of myths and the enactment of rituals.
Myth of Ares
Ares is the God of War, representing the violence and aggression of battle. He was
hated and feared because of the death and destruction he caused with his sons,
Phobos (Fear) and Deimos (Terror). Not even his own parents, Zeus and Hera,
approved of him.
Myth of Creation
The universe was initially chaos and, from that chaos, Gaia (Earth), Nyx (Night),
and Hemera (Day) were born. Uranus, the sky, was the first god who had 12
powerful children called Titans with Gaia. One of them, Kronos, eventually
overthrew Uranus to become ruler.
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Myth of Jason and the Argonauts
Jason was a hero and a charming man who was handy with a sword. In an effort to
regain his rightful throne he assembled a heroic crew, the Argonauts, and sailed off
on a long, dangerous quest to the far-away land of Colchis to bring back the Golden
Fleece.
Myth of Narcissus
There are several versions of this tale, but all agree that Narcissus was an
exceedingly handsome young man who fell in love with his own image. One version
claims he spurned the nymph, Echo, and as punishment, Narcissus would only ever
love himself. Another says that while hunting he comes across his reflection in a
pool and cannot look away.
Myth of Odysseus
Made famous by Homer's epic poems, Odysseus was the king of Ithaca, a
persuasive and cunning man who helped the Greeks win the Trojan War by coming
up with the idea for the Trojan horse. After the war, it took him 10 years to make his
way back to his homeland. The journey was difficult and included clashes with
monsters like the mighty cyclops Polyphemus and the cyclops' father Poseidon.
Myth of Pan
Pan was the god of the wild, who had the legs and horns of a goat. He was laughed
at by the other gods, so he chose to live alone in the forest where, according to the
myth, he played the flute and sang in a loud, beautiful voice and chased after
nymphs.
The first human woman, Pandora was Zeus's punishment to mankind because
Prometheus stole fire from him to give to man. Pandora was given a box as a gift by
the gods but was told not to open it. When she disobeyed, all the bad things the
gods had put in the box - war, poverty, disease, and more - were released into the
world. Pandora is the reason evil exists in the world.
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Myth of Prometheus
Prometheus, a Titan and powerful deity, was the benefactor of mankind. He wanted
to give humans the gift of fire, and when Zeus refused to let him have it he stole it.
Zeus punished him, creating Pandora to bring misfortune to humans and sentencing
Prometheus to be tortured for the rest of eternity. After many years, he was rescued
by Hercules.
Myth of Theseus
Theseus was said to be the founder of Athens, the capital city of Greece. When
children from Athens were being sacrificed to a beast called a Minotaur, Theseus
offered to go into the beast's lair (known as the Labyrinth) to slay the Minotaur and
rescue the children.
Myth of Zeus
Zeus was saved from being eaten by his father Kronos. When he was older Zeus
rescued his brothers and sisters, fought his father and the other Titans and
banished them. He and his brothers then drew lots to divide rule of the world. Zeus
became the god of the sky, Poseidon, the god of the sea, and Hades, the god of the
underworld. Zeus was also known as the father of the gods on Mount Olympus and
men.
B. Fables
1. The fox and the grapes. This fable is the origin of the phrase “sour grapes.”
A fox spies a bunch of grapes high up on a branch and wants them badly. He
takes a running jump to reach them but misses. He tries several more times,
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but to no avail. Finally, he gives up and walks away scornfully. The moral of
the tale is: “There are many who pretend to despise and belittle that which is
beyond their reach.”
2. The lion and the mouse. A lion catches a mouse, who begs to be let go.
The mouse promises to repay the lion in exchange for his life. The lion
agrees and lets the mouse go. A few days later, the mouse comes upon the
lion trapped in a hunter’s net, and, remembering the lion’s mercy, gnaws on
the rope until the lion is free. The moral of the story is: “A kindness is never
wasted.”
3. The tortoise and the hare. The tortoise and the hare enter a footrace. The
hare jeers at the tortoise, remarking how naturally he is so much faster than
the slow tortoise. During the race, the hare takes several long breaks and
wastes time relaxing between quick sprints. Meanwhile, the tortoise chugs
steadily along. In the end, the tortoise wins. The moral of the story is: “Slow
and steady wins the race.”
4. The fox and the crow. A hungry fox comes upon a crow up in a tree with a
bit of cheese in its mouth. The fox begins to talk to the crow, telling her she is
so beautiful and must have a beautiful voice to match. At first, the crow stays
silent, holding on to her cheese. But at last, after much flattery, she opens
her mouth to crow. The cheese falls into the fox’s mouth. The moral of the
story is: “The flatterer lives at the expense of those who will listen to him.”
C. Parables
Parable is a type of metaphorical analogy. Some scholars of the canonical gospels and
the New Testament apply the term "parable" only to the parables of Jesus, though that
is not a common restriction of the term.
▪ The Prodigal Son: A father has two sons, the younger of which asks for his
inheritance before the father dies and ends up wasting all of his money. He
returns home, and when he returns the father is so glad he holds a large feast
as a celebration. The older brother is upset, but the father explains that what
was lost is now found and should be celebrated, no matter what has happened
in between.
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▪ The Boy Who Cried Wolf: Aesop tells the story of a bored shepherd boy who
calls out “wolf” to get the attention of his fellow villagers. He does so several
times, always annoying them when they realize he is lying. One day he sees a
real wolf which scatters the sheep, but no one comes to help him when he calls
out.
D.Allegories
Allegory Examples
Allegory is one of the oldest literary forms, with writers long relying on allegory's
ability to convey a moral or political message efficiently and discreetly.
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relationships to one another. (For instance, in the Judeo-Christian tradition, death
didn't even exist until Satan tempted the first humans to sin. In that sense, Satan
gave rise to Sin, and together the two gave rise to Death.) In this passage, Milton
describes Sin giving birth to Death:
At last this odious offspring whom thou seest
Thine own begotten, breaking violent way
Tore through my entrails, that with fear and pain
Distorted, all my nether shape thus grew
Transform'd: but he my inbred enemy
Forth issu'd, brandishing his fatal Dart
Made to destroy: I fled, and cry'd out Death;
Hell trembl'd at the hideous Name, and sigh'd
From all her Caves, and back resounded Death.
Folktales
Folktales are stories in the oral tradition, or tales that people tell each other out
loud, rather than stories in written form. They're closely related to many storytelling
traditions, including fables, myths, and fairy tales.
The Monkey and the Turtle is a perfect example of folktale short story written by
Philippine national hero Jose Rizal. The story focuses on the monkey and turtle who
started as friends. They both saw a floating banana plant on the water. They
thought of splitting it so they could plan it. The monkey chose the upper part of the
plant for he thought it was better. Meanwhile, the turtle got the bottom part with the
roots so he grew an abundant plant. Since the turtle couldn’t climb the tree to get
the fruits, he asked the monkey to get it for him. Instead, the monkey betrayed the
turtle and ate every fruit. The turtle planned a revenge to him which ended to the
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monkey’s death. The friends of the monkey also planned a revenge but they did not
win over the turtle.
The Girl Who Turned into a Fish and Other Classic Philippine Water Tales as
narrated by Maria Elena Paterno. This Filipino folktale talks about a beautiful girl
who grew up being vain and spoiled. She was admiring her beauty by the river
when the chief of crabs adored her beauty and spoke to her. She was shocked and
shoved away the crab. In return, the chief scratched her face and cursed her to
become a fish with many scales.
Why the Piña has a Hundred Eyes as narrated by Neni Sta. Romana-Cruz depicts
the folktale about Pinang, an adorable yet lazy girl. The time came when her mother
asked her to cook which she ignored at first. When she finally agreed to do it, she
could not find the ladle. Her frustrated mother hoped that Pinang could grow
hundred eyes for being lazy and so that she could find everything. Later on, Pinang
disappeared and then a yellow fruit with hundred eyes grew in their backyard.
4. Mother Mountain
The Mother Mountain talks about a widow who lived with her two daughters that
want nothing but to play. The mother asked her daughters to prepare their dinner as
soon as she finishes work. By the time the mother came home, the daughters were
not there so she cooked the dinner herself. As soon as the daughters came home,
they saw their mother preparing dinner and yet decided to play again. The mother
got frustrated and left the house. It was late night and the daughters mother
followed her. Little do they know that their mother turned into a shape of mountain
called Mt. Iraya.
F. Fairytales
A fairy tale is a story, often intended for children, that features fanciful and
wondrous characters such as elves, goblins, wizards, and even, but not necessarily,
fairies. The term “fairy” tale seems to refer more to the fantastic and
magical setting or magical influences within a story, rather than the presence of
the character of a fairy within that story. Fairy tales are often traditional; many
were passed down from story-teller to story-teller before being recorded in books.
Fairy tales, in the literary sense, are easy to find. Look at your bookshelf or your
DVD collection. You may see titles likes these:
▪ Snow White
▪ Cinderella
▪ Rip Van Winkle
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▪ The Twelve Dancing Princesses
▪ Rumpelstiltskin
▪ Thumbelina
They are all fairy tales. They belong to no one and have been adapted and
retold countless times.
Fairy tales do not need to be written down to be legitimate. Many tales that your
parents or grandparents may have told you off the top of their heads are also fairy
tales. For example, stories of the tooth fairy, the boogeyman, leprechauns and pots
of gold or even Santa Claus.
If a story takes place in a magical land, with fantastical creatures who perform
wondrous tasks, it is very likely a fairy tale.
Examples of Fairy Tales in Literature
Fairy tales exist in every culture in the world and there are elements of the fairy tale
going back for as long as people have been telling stories. In Western culture, there
are a few authors who were particularly important in the formal recording of fairy
tales.
Example 1
Hans Christian Anderson
Hans Christian Anderson was a Danish author who published his fairy tales in the
late 1800s. Here are a few of his titles:
The Tinder-Box, The Princess and the Pea, Thumbelina, The Little Mermaid, The
Emperor’s New Clothes, The Staunch Tin Soldier, Willie Winkie, The Nightingale,
The Ugly Duckling, The Snow Queen. (Larsen)
Example 2
Brothers Grimm
Jacob Ludwig Carl Grimm and Wilhelm Carl Grimm were German brothers who
published their stories in the early 1800s. Here are a few of their titles:
The Good Bargain, Rapunzel, Hansel and Gretel, Cinderella, Little Red Cap, The
Bremen Town Musicians, The Robber Bridegroom, The Juniper Tree, Little Brier-
Rose, and Little Snow-White. (Ashliman)
G.Legends
Legend means “something which ought to be read.” According to J. A. Cuddon, a
legend is “a story or narrative that lies somewhere between myth and historical fact
and which, as a rule, is about a particular figure or person.” Traditionally, a legend is
a narrative that focuses on a historically or geographically specific figure, and
describes his exploits. Similar to a myth, a legend can provide an etymological
narrative, often filling in historical gaps.
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Difference between a Legend and a Myth
There are marked differences between a legend and a myth. While legends are
made up stories, myths are stories that answer questions about the working of
natural phenomenon. Myths are set in olden times, even in pre-historic times.
However, legends are stories about people and their actions, or deeds they perform
to save their people or nations.
The people mentioned in legends might have lived in recent times, or sometime in
known history. Legends are told to serve a specific purpose, and can be based on
facts – but they are not completely true. People mentioned in a legend might not
have really done what the story of the legend relates. In some cases, legends
change the historical events.
King Arthur, Beowulf, and Queen Boadicea are some popular English legends.
However, it is also important to understand that some of the stories about the
Knights of the Round Table, and Merlin the Magician may not be true. The common
point between a myth and a legend is that they both have been passed down from
generation to generation in oral form.
Examples of Legend from Literature
Example : Faust
Faust is the major character in the classical German legend. According to the
legend, Faust was a dissatisfied scholar. On account of his dissatisfaction, he
makes a deal with the devil in exchange for his soul. The deal promises him a great
deal of knowledge, and limitless pleasures of the world. However, he meets his
tragic end, as the devil takes his soul after his death.
In fact, the legend of Faust presents an over-ambitious man, who surrenders
his moral integrity for the achievement of worldly powers and success for a limited
period of time. This kind of character teaches us the lessons of moral integrity, and
the value of ethical uprightness
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Specific Learning Objectives
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A short story is a piece of brief literature, usually written in narrative prose.
Short stories can be written in a variety of formats, but the most typical features a
small cast of characters with names and focuses on a single, self-contained
incident. Short stories make use of a plot and other normal literary components,
just to a lesser and shorter degree than a novel. They also vary in length.
Now that we know generally what a short story is, we can discuss the different types
of short stories. This is by no means a comprehensive list, since short stories come
in a wide variety of lengths and styles. But this is a list of the most common.
Anecdote
An anecdote is a short account of something interesting and amusing, which usually
tells a story about a real person and/or incident. Often, anecdotes are used to
illustrate or support a point in an essay, article, or chapter. They are very short, but
have no specific limits.
From grammar.about.com’s entry for the anecdote, an example anecdote about
Ralph Waldo Emerson:
“In [Ralph Waldo] Emerson’s later years his memory began increasingly to fail. He
used to refer to it as his ‘naughty memory’ when it let him down. He would forget
the names of things, and have to refer to them in a circumlocutory way, saying, for
instance, ‘the implement that cultivates the soil’ for plow. Worse, he could not
remember people’s names. At Longfellow’s funeral, he remarked to a friend, ‘That
gentleman has a sweet, beautiful soul, but I have entirely forgotten his name.’
Perhaps most touching was his term for umbrella–‘the thing that strangers take
away.'”
Drabble
A drabble is an exceptionally short piece of fiction, usually of exactly 100 words in
length – not including the title. The purpose of a drabble is extreme brevity and to
test an author’s skill at expressing himself/herself meaningfully and interestingly in a
very confined space.
A drabble example, by the lovely Matty, is available over at Sugar and Blood: Light
as a Feather. In fact, Matty has many drabble stories!
Fable
A fable is a succinct story featuring anthropomorphic creatures (usually animals, but
also mythical creatures, plants, inanimate objects, or forces of nature) to tell a story
with a moral. Often the moral is explicitly told at the end. A fable is similar to a
parable, but differs most in the fact that fables use animals to tell a story but
parables do not.
The most well-known example of a fable would be any of the many told in Aesop’s
Fables. The one I always remember the best is The Ant and the Grasshopper.
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Feghoot
A feghoot is an interesting short story type also known as a story pun or a poetic
story joke. It is a humorous piece ending in an atrocious pun. It can be very short,
only long enough to sufficiently illustrate the context of the piece enough to lead up
to the pun.
I found an interesting blog of all Feghoots. This one is a good example and totally
groan-worthy as the format requires: The Buck of the Draw.
Flash Fiction
Flash fiction refers to an extremely short piece of literature. It has no widely
accepted length, but has a debated cap of between 300 and 1000 words.
I found a whole webpage of flash fiction, called Flash Fiction Online. It has a small
section of fantasy and I thought this one a good example to share: One Last Night
at the Carnival Before the Stars Go Out.
Frame Story
A frame story is also known as a frame tale or a nested narrative. It is a literary
technique of placing a story within a story, for the purpose of introducing or setting
the stage for a main narrative or a series of short stories.
A few good example of a frame story would be a flashback within a larger piece or a
quest within a larger game environment.
Mini-saga
A mini-saga is a short story told in exactly 50 words. It is a test in brevity – about
saying a lot with a little.
I found a fascinating “guide” to writing a mini-saga. It has a few examples and the
bottom is for filling in with your exact 50 words. There was another page with good
advice and a progressive piece as an example.
Story Sequence
A story sequence, also called a short story cycle or a composite novel, is a group of
short stories that work together to form a longer piece, while still functioning as
complete short stories on their own.
It would be hard to link to an example, but the best I can think of are several of the
works of Isaac Asimov – the Foundation books and I, Robot (the original book, NOT
the story portrayed in the Will Smith movie) in particular. They are not a novel in the
traditional sense, but instead a collection of short stories in chronological order that
both tell small stories and one larger one.
Sketch Story
A sketch story is a shorter than average piece containing little or no plot. It can be
merely a description of a character or a location. Character sketches are common,
and a good way to build a character that will eventually be part of a longer piece.
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I found this good handout about character sketches, including an example. I wrote
a piece a while back about writing character sketches. I think Regrets, my original
blog post and the start of my Shaman-Effy/DK-Effy stories, and the character sketch
piece I wrote for creative writing last semester are both good examples as well.
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Characters are the people, animals, or aliens in the story. Readers come to
know the characters through what they say, what they think, and how they act.
Setting
Setting is where and when the story takes place. It includes the following:
● The immediate surroundings of the characters such as props in a scene:
trees, furniture, food, inside of a house or car, etc.
● The time of day such as morning, afternoon, or night.
● The weather such as cloudy, sunny, windy, snow, or rain, etc.
● The time of year, particularly the seasons: fall, winter, summer, spring.
● The historical period such as what century or decade the story takes place.
● The geographical location including the city, state, country, and possibly even
the universe, if the writer is writing science fiction.
Plot
Plot is the order of events in the story. The plot usually follows a particular
structure called Freytag’s Pyramid. Gustav Freytag, a German playwright who lived
during the 1800s, identified this structure.
Point of View
Stories are generally told in one of two points of views:
● First-person point of view
● Third-person point of view
Theme
Is not the plot of the story. It is the underlying truth that is being conveyed in the
story. Themes can be universal, meaning they are understood by readers no matter
what culture or country the readers are in. Common themes include coming of age,
circle of life, prejudice, greed, good vs. evil, beating the odds, etc.
Tone
Is the attitude of the narrator or viewpoint character toward story events and
other characters.In a story with first-person POV, tone can also be the narrator's
attitude toward the reader. In non-fiction, tone is the writer's attitude toward subject
matter and reader
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Style
Dialogue
Is the speech of fiction, the talk between two or more characters.It is speech
appropriate for the story, verbal communication that works with and for, not against,
the fiction
A.Character
Picking up a book is a great way to meet new people. Although there's always a
main character, whom we learn the most about, he or she plays off other
characters. This makes the other characters important too because, through each
interaction, we learn more and more about the main character. This is otherwise
known as characterization.
There are nine types of characters generally found in fiction (and movies too). All of
them have a role to play in driving the story, regardless of how large or small that
role is.
Character Types
Let's take a look at the types of characters in fiction. Once you're aware of the
different character types, you'll find yourself noticing them more and more. The next
time you pick up a novel, see how many you can spot.
Protagonist
We must begin our study with the protagonist, or main character. The protagonist is
the central figure around whom the story revolves, like Katniss Everdean in The
Hunger Games. Throughout the story, we will watch him or her (or them) face
conflict that must be resolved and make key decisions that move the story forward.
Protagonists are often heroic, like Katniss, but they don't have to be.
If you're writing in the first person and choosing to tell your story through a narrator,
that will typically become your protagonist. However, that's not a hard and fast rule.
Consider The Great Gatsby. In this novel, F. Scott Fitzgerald made Nick the
narrator, even though Gatsby was the protagonist.
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The anti-hero can also be the main character in a story. Typically, we imagine our
main characters to be admirable. Perhaps they're people we'd love to know in the
"real world." But, have you ever read a book where the main character was lacking
in sound moral judgment?
Take Jack Sparrow from the Pirates of the Caribbean movies. He's hard not to like,
even though he wouldn't be considered a first-rate citizen. Or how about Lestat de
Lioncourt from The Vampire Chronicles? That's one vain man (vampire). Yet, he
has moments of altruism, making him difficult to hate too.
Characters like Jack and Lestat are anti-heroes. Given their ability to dip in and out
of deviant behavior, they can be exciting characters. There's a lot of depth to them.
And as they color outside the lines, they, too, will have to face some type of conflict.
Antagonist
Good, bad, or otherwise, most main characters will be faced with an antagonist, or
villain. Often, this is the person that stands in the way of - antagonizes - whatever
the main character is trying to achieve. Antagonists will set out all kinds of
roadblocks and be the source of several drama-filled scenes.
Can you name Gatsby's antagonist? Well, all Gatsby wanted was Daisy. But, he
couldn't have her because she was married to Tom Buchanan. This makes him the
guy Gatsby had to face off against. Beyond that, Tom was particularly unlikeable
because he was cheating on Daisy, but wouldn't let her be with the love of her life -
Gatsby.
Foil
What would a story be without several juicy bits of drama? A foil is a character
(often the antagonist) whose qualities stand in stark contrast to another character
(often the protagonist). This contrast provides the reader with a better
understanding of each character.
For example, if the protagonist is loyal, brave, and morally sound, each of those
qualities will be augmented every time we read more about the foil who's disloyal,
cowardly, and selfish.
In The Great Gatsby, there's no doubt Tom Buchanan was a foil to Gatsby. They
stand in opposition to one another. Tom came from money, Gatsby came from
poverty. Tom is a "rough and gruff" kind of guy while Gatsby is more sensitive and
quiet. However, you could argue the Nick Carraway is also a foil to Gatsby. Nick
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began as realistic, practical, and ethical against Gatsby's flashy, flighty, and
dishonest ways.
For a deeper dive into human idiosyncrasies, check out our Character Trait
Examples.
Dynamic
A dynamic character is one who evolves or changes significantly over time. This
label is often reserved for the main character, given the conflict they're trying to
overcome. If they come out the other side, they've typically grown or evolved in
some way.
Let's remain with The Great Gatsby. As mentioned, F. Scott Fitzgerald did
something interesting with his creation of the narrator, Nick Carraway. Nick's
evolution throughout the novel was extreme. He was a nice, hard-working boy who
just wanted to secure a role on Wall Street. Then, he met Gatsby and everything
changed. By the end of the novel, Nick was totally disillusioned, sick of everything
Wall Street stood for, and disgusted by his rich friends.
Static
In contrast to a dynamic character, a static character does not change over time.
Perhaps this is someone like the main character's father or mentor. They might be
consistently wise, or abrasive, or enlightening. This label is often reserved for
peripheral characters.
Daisy's friend Jordan Baker in The Great Gatsby could be considered a static
character. She didn't change much throughout the course of the novel. She had her
own career as a pro golfer and sort of stood on the periphery of the novel. Sure, she
was there for all the dramatic moments, a foil to Daisy, but she remained
unchanged.
Round
Have you ever encountered a character with a difficult mother or spouse? You can't
tell whether they love or hate them. If so, you could consider that "difficult person" a
round character.
This is someone with a complex personality. They're neither overtly kind nor
innately cruel. They may act inconsistently, rather than follow a smooth arc.
Somewhere deep down, they're most likely conflicted and, to the main character
and the readers, perhaps even a little contradictory.
In The Goldfinch by Donna Tartt, you'll meet a round character in Boris. It would be
easy to label him a bad person, given his propensity for stealing. However, he's
more than that. He's also loyal to the main character, Theodore. So, while he may
be self-serving, he's also capable of friendship and kind acts. All these facets make
him a very round character.
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To help you develop your own round characters, check out our Examples of
Personality Traits.
Flat
A flat character is the opposite of the round character. These characters may be
overtly kind or inanely cruel - and it shows. When you think of a flat character, you'll
immediately perceive one characteristic and that will, essentially, define who they
are. In contrast to the complex nuance of a round character, a flat character is
simple and obvious.
Stock
Stock characters, also known as archetypes, are the ones that get repeated time
and time again. They're clichéd or stereotypical. For example, how many times
have we met the kindly gray-haired grandmother, the nerdy kid with glasses, the
less-attractive best friend, or the absent-minded professor?
Other instances include the seductive femme fatale such as Poison Ivy, or the
buttoned-up school teacher like Professor McGonagall. These expected traits make
them more of a flat character than a round character as these characters are often
one-dimensional and don't develop.
B.Setting
Setting is the time and place (or when and where) of the story. It’s a literary element
of literature used in novels, short stories, plays, films, etc., and usually introduced
during the exposition (beginning) of the story, along with the characters. The setting
may also include the environment of the story, which can be made up of the
physical location, climate, weather, or social and cultural surroundings.
C.Plot
Plot is a literary term used to describe the events that make up a story, or the main
part of a story. These events relate to each other in a pattern or a sequence. The
structure of a novel depends on the organization of events in the plot of the story.
1. Exposition
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Exposition is an introduction to the characters, time, and the problem. At the point
where exposition moves into rising action a problem, sometimes called an inciting
incident, occurs for the main character to handle or solve. This creates the
beginning of the story.
Rising action includes the events that the main character encounters. Each event,
developed in separate scenes, makes the problem more complex.
Climax is the turning point in the story. Usually, it is a single event with the greatest
intensity and uncertainty. The main character must contend with the problem at this
point.
Falling action includes the events that unfold after the climax. This usually creates
an emotional response from the reader.
D. Point of View
Point of view is the angle of considering things, which shows us the opinion or
feelings of the individuals involved in a situation. In literature, point of view is the
mode of narration that an author employs to let the readers “hear” and “see” what
takes place in a story, poem, or essay.
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The 4 Types of Point of View
● First person point of view. First person is when “I” am telling the story. The
character is in the story, relating his or her experiences directly.
● Second person point of view. The story is told to “you.” This POV is not common
in fiction, but it’s still good to know (it is common in nonfiction).
● Third person point of view, limited. The story is about “he” or “she.” This is
the most common point of view in commercial fiction. The narrator is outside of the
story and relating the experiences of a character.
● Third person point of view, omniscient. The story is still about “he” or “she,” but
the narrator has full access to the thoughts and experiences of all characters in the
story.
E.Tone
In literature, the tone of a literary work expresses the writer's attitude toward or
feelings about ... in himself. The "smug smirk" provides a facial imagery of Charlie's
pride. In addition, using imagery in a poem is helpful to develop a poem's tone.
F. Diction
Can be defined as style of speaking or writing, determined by the choice of words
by a speaker or a writer. Diction, or choice of words, often separates good writing
from bad writing. It depends on a number of factors. Firstly, the word has to be right
and accurate.
G. Style
Style in fiction is a writer's verbal identity, which he or she constructs by choosing
various words, putting those words together in particular ways, and employing
specifically selected figures of speech. A writer's style is personal and unique and
distinguishes his or her work from that of all other writers.
H.Dialogue
A dialogue is a literary technique in which writers employ two or more characters to
be engaged in conversation with one another. In literature, it is a conversational
passage, or a spoken or written exchange of conversation in a group, or between
two persons directed towards a particular subject.
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● Giving out important background information - Dialogue exchanged between
characters can be a really interesting way of providing background
information that is relevant to the plot and also helps to move it along.
I. Theme
A theme is a universal idea, lesson, or message explored throughout a work of
literature. One key characteristic of literary themes is their universality, which is to
say that themes are ideas that not only apply to the specific characters and events
of a book or play, but also express broader truths about human experience that
readers can apply to their own lives.
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CHARACTER WORKSHEET
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structure. Answer each of these questions to structure your story.
Who? Characters
What? Conflict
When? Time
Where? Place
Why? Character’s motivation
How? Resolve the conflict
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Modernism vs. post modernism: Post-modernism is modernism with the
optimism taken out
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In the fine arts, a break with the past and the concurrent search for new forms of
expression. Modernism fostered a period of experimentation in the arts from the late
19th to the mid-20th century, particularly in the years following World War I.
A. Modernism
Is a period in literary history which started around the early 1900s and continued
until the early 1940s. Modernist writers in general rebelled against clear-cut
storytelling and formulaic verse from the 19th century. Instead, many of them told
fragmented stories which reflected the fragmented state of society during and after
World War I.
Many Modernists wrote in free verse and they included many countries and
cultures in their poems. Some wrote using numerous points-of-view or even
used a “stream-of-consciousness” style. These writing styles further demonstrate
the way the scattered state of society affected the work of writes at that time.
B. Postmodernism
Is indefinable is a truism. However, it can be described as a set of critical, strategic
and rhetorical practices employing concepts such as difference, repetition, the
trace, the simulacrum, and hyperreality to destabilize other concepts such as
presence, identity, historical progress, epistemic certainty, and the univocity of
meaning.
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D. Pastiche
E. Brigole
A. Fabulation
In literary criticism, the term fabulation was popularized by Robert Scholes, in his
work The Fabulators, to describe the large and growing class of mostly 20th century
novels that are in a style similar to magical realism, and do not fit into the traditional
categories of realism or romance. They violate, in a variety of ways, standard
novelistic expectations by drastic—and sometimes highly successful—experiments
with subject matter, form, style, temporal sequence, and fusions of the everyday,
fantastic, mythical, and nightmarish, in renderings that blur traditional distinctions
between what is serious or trivial, horrible or ludicrous, tragic or comic. To a large
extent, fabulism and postmodernism coincide; John Barth, for example, was labeled
a fabulist until the term "postmodernism" was coined.
B. Magic Realism
Os an approach to literature that weaves fantasy and myth into everyday life.
What’s real? What’s imaginary? In the world of magical realism, the ordinary
becomes extraordinary and the magical becomes commonplace.
Also known as “marvelous realism,” or “fantastic realism,” magical realism is not
a style or a genre so much as a way of questioning the nature of reality. In books,
stories, poetry, plays, and film, factual narrative and far-flung fantasies combine to
reveal insights about society and human nature. The term "magic realism" is also
associated with realistic and figurative artworks — paintings, drawings, and
sculpture — that suggest hidden meanings. Lifelike images, such as the Frida Kahlo
portrait shown above, take on an air of mystery and enchantment.
C. Metafiction
Is a form of fiction that emphasizes its own construction in a way that continually
reminds the reader to be aware that they are reading or viewing a fictional work.
Metafiction is self-conscious about language, literary form, and storytelling, and
works of metafiction directly or indirectly draw attention to their status as
artifacts.Metafiction is frequently used as a form of parody or a tool to undermine
literary conventions and explore the relationship between literature and reality, life,
and art.
D. Pastiche
Is a work of visual art, literature, theatre, or music that imitates the style or
character of the work of one or more other artists. Unlike parody, pastiche
celebrates, rather than mocks, the work it imitates.
The word pastiche is a French cognate of the Italian noun pasticcio, which is
a pâté or pie-filling mixed from diverse
ingredients.Metaphorically, pastiche and pasticcio describe works that are either
composed by several authors, or that incorporate stylistic elements of other artists'
work. Pastiche is an example of eclecticism in art.
E. Bricolage
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Bricolage (French for "DIY" or "do-it-yourself projects") is the construction or
creation of a work from a diverse range of things that happen to be available, or a
work constructed using mixed media.
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Specific Learning Objectives
1. What is Drama?
Is the specific mode of fiction represented in performance:a play, opera, mime,
ballet, etc., performed in a theatre, or on radio or television. Considered as a genre
of poetry in general, the dramatic mode has been contrasted with the epic and
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the lyrical modes ever since Aristotle's Poetics (c. 335 BC)—the earliest work
of dramatic theory.
“I never travel without my diary. One should always have something sensational to
read in the train.”
― Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest
“It was only a smile, nothing more. It didn't make everything all right. It didn't make
ANYTHING all right. Only a smile.A tiny thing. A leaf in the woods, shaking in the
wake of a startled bird's flight. But I'll take it. With open arms.Because when spring
comes, it melts the snow one flake at a time, and maybe I just witnessed the first
flake melting. - Amir”
― Khaled Hosseini, The Kite Runner
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“No amount of fire or freshness can challenge what a man will store up in his
ghostly heart.”
― F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Great Gatsby
“I just wanted to tell you that I understand if you go. It’s okay if you have to leave us.
It’s okay if you want to stop fighting.”
― Gayle Forman, If I Stay
“People don't want their lives fixed. Nobody wants their problems solved. Their
dramas.their distractions. Their stories resolved. Their messes cleaned up.
Because what would they have left? Just the big scary unknown.”
― Chuck Palahniuk, Survivor
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“All the world's a stage and most of us are desperately unrehearsed.”
― Seán O'Casey
“Free yourself from the complexities and drama of your life. Simplify. Look within.
Within ourselves we all have the gifts and talents we need to fulfill the purpose
we've been blessed with.”
― Steve Maraboli, Life, the Truth, and Being Free
“The whole world can become the enemy when you lose what you love.”
― Kristina McMorris, Bridge of Scarlet Leaves
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“Your complaints, your drama, your victim mentality, your whining, your blaming,
and all of your excuses have NEVER gotten you even a single step closer to your
goals or dreams. Let go of your nonsense. Let go of the delusion that you
DESERVE better and go EARN it! Today is a new day!”
― Steve Maraboli, Unapologetically You: Reflections on Life and the Human
Experience
“What is drama but life with the dull bits cut out.”
― Alfred Hitchcock
“She had no tolerance for scenes which were not of her own making.”
― Edith Wharton, The House of Mirth
“The other girl, Iko, cupped her chin with both hands. "This is so much better than a
net drama.”
― Marissa Meyer, Cress
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“If there really is such a thing as turning in one's grave, Shakespeare must get a lot
of exercise.”
― George Orwell, All Art is Propaganda: Critical Essays
“I'd heard of Evergreen Care Center before. Cass and I had always made fun of the
stupid ads they ran on TV, featuring some dragged-out woman with a limp perm
and big, painted-on circles under her eyes, downing vodka and sobbing
uncontrollably. "We can't heal you at Evergreen", the very somber voiceover said.
"But we can help you to heal yourself." It had become our own running joke,
applicable to almost anything.
"Hey Cass, "I'd say, "hand me that toothpaste."
"Caitlin," she'd say, her voice dark and serious. "I can't hand you the toothpaste.
But I CAN help you hand the toothpaste to yourself.”
― Sarah Dessen, Dreamland
3.Types of Drama
Drama is a mode of fictional representation through dialogue and performance. It is
one of the literary genres, which is an imitation of some action. Drama is also a type
of a play written for theater, television, radio, and film.
Types of Drama
Let us consider a few popular types of drama:
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⮚ Farce – Generally, a farce is a nonsensical genre of drama, which often
overacts or engages slapstick humor.
⮚ Melodrama – Melodrama is an exaggerated drama, which is sensational and
appeals directly to the senses of the audience. Just like the farce, the
characters are of a single dimension and simple, or may be stereotyped.
⮚ Musical Drama – In musical dramas, dramatists not only tell their stories
through acting and dialogue, but through dance as well as music. Often the
story may be comedic, though it may also involve serious subjects.
⮚ Tragicomedy is a literary device used in fictional works. It contains
both tragedy and comedy. Mostly, the characters in tragicomedy are
exaggerated, and sometimes there might be a happy ending after a series of
unfortunate events. It is incorporated with jokes throughout the story, just to
lighten the tone.
⮚ Fantasy is a genre of speculative fiction set in a fictional universe, often
inspired by real world myth and folklore. Its roots are in oral traditions, which
then became fantasy literature and drama. From the twentieth century it has
expanded further into various media, including film, television, graphic
novels, manga, animated movies and video games.
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CLOWN: It is like a barber’s chair that fits all buttocks,
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DROMIO OF SYRACUSE: I looked for the chalky cliffs, but I could find no
whiteness in them; but I guess it stood in her chin,
by the salt rheum that ran between France and it.
DROMIO OF SYRACUSE: Faith, I saw it not; but I felt it hot in her breath.
DROMIO OF SYRACUSE: Oh, sir, upon her nose all o’er embellished with
rubies, carbuncles, sapphires, declining their rich
aspect to the hot breath of Spain; who sent whole
armadoes of caracks to be ballast at her nose.
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Of one not easily jealous but, being wrought,
Perplexed in the extreme; of one whose hand,
Like the base Indian, threw a pearl away
Richer than all his tribe; of one whose subdued eyes,
Albeit unused to the melting mood,
Drop tears as fast as the Arabian trees
Their medicinable gum. Set you down this,
And say besides that in Aleppo once,
Where a malignant and a turbaned Turk
Beat a Venetian and traduced the state,
I took by th’ throat the circumcised dog
And smote him thus.
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Elements of Drama
At its most basic, content marketing is about narrative building. At its extra-most basic,
content marketing follows an incredibly simple 2-part narrative structure: Problem →
Solution. While that simplified structure might work in some situations (you need food? I
sell food! Problem solved.) you’re missing a huge opportunity to really connect with your
audience.
Instead of this simplified model, consider building a more highly narrative story,
taking into account the buyer’s journey and beyond. There is a lot of great advice
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about storytelling, but I always like to return to a foundational expert of writing,
philosophy, and drama: Aristotle.
Plot
Aristotle says: “The plot, then, is the first principle, and, as it were, the soul of a
tragedy”
Character
Aristotle says: “Character is that which reveals moral purpose, showing what kind of
things a man chooses or avoids”.
Thought
Aristotle says: “Thought is the faculty of saying what is possible and pertinent in
given circumstances”
Diction
Aristotle says: “Diction; by which I mean, as has been already said, the expression
of the meaning in words; and its essence is the same both in verse and prose.”
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Music
Aristotle says: “Song holds the chief place among the embellishments”.
Spectacle
Aristotle says: “The Spectacle has, indeed, an emotional attraction of its own, but, of
all the parts, it is the least artistic”
Conflict is a necessary element in any story. Before we dive deeper into the
purpose of conflict, here’s the standard definition of conflict, regardless of the
medium you choose to express it.
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1. Freytag’s Pyramid
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1. EXPOSITION: the background, setting, characters, setting the scene
2. INCITING INCIDENT: something happens to begin the action
3. RISING ACTION: the story builds
4. CLIMAX: the point of greatest tension
5. FALLING ACTION: events that happen as a result of the climax
6. RESOLUTION: the character solves the problem/conflict
7. DENOUEMENT: French term meaning “the ending”
2. The Unities
Classical Greek and Latin dramas were strict in form. The concept of the three
unities, in relation to classical drama, derives from Aristotle's Poetics but is not
directly formulated by the Greek philosopher. He merely states that a tragedy
should have unity of action.
1. Unity of Time: The action of the play should take place in a short internal
chronology, ideally, no more than 24 hours. The neo-classicists believe that the
spectators would not believe in the reality of an action that compressed several
days or years into a three-hour drama. If the spectators did not believe in the reality
of an action, the tragedy would not have its proper effect.
2. Unity of Place: It was said that in drama there should be no change of place,
and even if the scene changes it must not be too great a distance. A public square
or palace courtyard would usually serve this purpose well. But the plays of the
Elizabethans incorporate scenes of various places and action and their plays moves
from one city to another city, from one country to another.
3. Unity of Action: It is the unity of action which makes the plot intelligible,
coherent, and individual. The events and incidents are connected with each other
logically and inevitably on the principle of probability; they move towards a common
goal, the Catastrophe, aimed at by the dramatist. The plot must have “a beginning,
a middle and an end”
B. Characters/Dramatis Personae
Dramatis personae (Latin: "the masks of the drama") are the main characters in a
dramatic work written in a list. Such lists are commonly employed in various forms
of theatre, and also on screen. Typically, off-stage characters are not considered
part of the dramatis personae.
1. Types of Characters
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1. Confidante Character
A confidante is someone or something the main character confides in. Readers can
learn a lot about the main character’s personality and thoughts through this. The
confidante can be another character or it can be the inside pages of the main
character’s diary.
4. Foil Character
A foil character is someone who is the opposite of another character. They reflect
the opposite traits, hence a foil character. Your main character can be sweet and
caring and the foil character will bring out that side by being nasty. It contrasts two
characters.
5. Round Character
A round character is similar to a dynamic character. They change throughout the
story gaining new traits, some traits opposite to who they used to be.
6. Stock Character
A stock character is just stock photos you can get off the internet. They are not a big
deal to the story, they don’t change at all, they’re pretty much cliche characters such
as the “dumb jock” or “popular cheerleader.”
8. Antagonist
An antagonist is the opposite of your protagonist. They will oppose your main
character. They will, along with the main character, be the driving force behind the
plot.
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9. Villain
A villain is similar to the antagonist, but they are evil. As described in Sacha
Black’s 13 Steps To Evil: How To Craft Superbad Villains, they have evil actions
and motives that drive the plot.
C. Thought/Subject/Time
In Aristotle’s poetics, thought refers to the theme or the main idea of the drama or
play.
Aristotle is committed to the view that there is time when the mind (I should say the
soul) is aware that the instants of time are two. Moreover, he claims that between
two instants of time there can always be another instant of time. In other
words, Aristotle believes that time is continuous.
D.Diction/Dialogue/Language/Point-of-View
Dialogue is typically a conversation between two or more people in a narrative work.
As aliterary technique, dialogue serves several purposes. It can advance the plot,
reveal a character's thoughts or feelings, or show how characters react in the
moment.
Dialogue is written using quotation marks around the speaker's exact words. These
quotation marks are meant to set the dialogue apart from the narration, which is
written as standard text. Together, let's explore some dialogue examples.
1. Functions of Dialogue
Dialogue, he informs us, performs four functions: It provides information, reveals
emotion, advances the plot and exposes character.
Information: This seems straight forward enough. Tell the audience what they
need to know to follow the story. The catch is that the writer should do so without
being obvious or slowing down the forward thrust of the tale.
Emotion: Whenever possible, dialogue should also reveal emotion. Failure to do so
makes for boring lines. In the above mentioned example, each line uttered by the
Nazi officer in the scene serves to heighten the stakes for the farmer and his family
since discovering the Jews under the floorboards will surely lead to everyone’s
execution.
Plot: Additionally dialogue should advance the plot, but it should do so
surreptitiously so that it does not expose its purpose. Initially, it seems that the Nazi
officer is merely questioning the French farmer and will leave at the end of the
interview. But as the questioning continues it becomes clear that the Nazi already
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has the answers and is merely prolonging the process to the torment of the farmer
and his family.
Character: Lastly, dialogue should characterize the speaker and the person to
whom it is directed. The Nazi officer, seems, at first, to be cultured and polite. The
interview initially seems more of a conversation between friends than an
interrogation. The farmer, although reticent, is encouraged to participate in the
exchanges. But the niceties are only superficial – part of the cat-and-mouse game
that the German is playing with the farmer. This characterizes him as a sadistic
tormentor and the farmer and his family as helpless, passive victims.
2.Point of View and Perspective
TONE
“Tone” is the writer’s attitude that is expressed in the writing.
For example, the tone of a novel could be suspenseful, because the author holds
back certain information to create this feeling.
Tone is also generally thought of as describing the work as a whole, rather than a
particular section.
ATMOSPHERE
The definition of “atmosphere” is debatable. Some say that it is the overall feeling
created from the tone and mood, but others argue that it is the emotions and feeling
created from the character. I prefer the character definition as how a character’s is
feeling will reflect on the reader, making it important for the writer to think about.
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Atmosphere is about understanding character feelings and getting in their head. It is
often most effective for 1st person and 3rd person limited POVs, but as long as your
reader can have a relationship with the characters, and feel their pain and joy, then
atmosphere can be created. For the most part, atmosphere is about choosing the
correct emotions that go with a certain character and the situation they are in. It is
be best to concentrate on one characters feelings per scene, rather than trying to
cover everyone, because otherwise the atmosphere becomes diluted and is harder
to relate to.
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A young man referred to simply as the Bridegroom enters his home and tells
his mother that he’s going out to their vineyard to cut grapes. This makes his mother
anxious, as she curses the invention of knives and anything that “can cut a man’s
body.” Going on in this manner, she reminisces about the death of the Bridegroom’s
father and brother, both of whom were murdered by members of the Felix family.
She complains about the fact that the murderers have only been imprisoned and
thus are still alive, a punishment she finds unsatisfactory. “Are you going to stop?”
the Bridegroom asks, wanting to change the subject, though she continues to talk
about violence and death, saying she doesn’t like it when he leaves the house
because she fears something will happen to him.
Eventually, the Bridegroom succeeds in distracting her by talking about his plans to
get married. When he brings this up, his mother expresses her happiness for him,
though she points out that she doesn’t know the young woman and that the entire
ordeal is moving quite fast. Still, she says she knows the Bride is “good,” and she
agrees to meet her and her father that Sunday to make the wedding plans official.
When the Bridegroom leaves, a neighbor enters and speaks to his mother, who
asks if she knows anything about the girl her son is about to marry. The neighbor
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father. The girl’s mother is dead, the neighbor says, adding that the Bride’s mother
never loved her husband.
Lastly, she informs the Bridegroom’s mother that the Bride was in a serious
relationship with Leonardo Felix. In fact, they almost got married, but then Leonardo
ended up marrying the girl’s cousin. Hearing this, the old woman is distraught,
bemoaning the fact that her son’s Bride has been associated with the Felix family,
but the neighbor tells her to be reasonable, pointing out that Leonardo was only
eight years old when the violence between their families took place.
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Read the story below and make a plot using Freytag pyramid.
Many years ago there was an Emperor so exceedingly fond of new clothes that he
spent all his money on being well dressed. He cared nothing about reviewing his
soldiers, going to the theatre, or going for a ride in his carriage, except to show off
his new clothes. He had a coat for every hour of the day, and instead of saying, as
one might, about any other ruler, "The King's in council," here they always said.
"The Emperor's in his dressing room."
In the great city where he lived, life was always gay. Every day many strangers
came to town, and among them one day came two swindlers. They let it be known
they were weavers, and they said they could weave the most magnificent fabrics
imaginable. Not only were their colors and patterns uncommonly fine, but clothes
made of this cloth had a wonderful way of becoming invisible to anyone who was
unfit for his office, or who was unusually stupid.
"Those would be just the clothes for me," thought the Emperor. "If I wore them I
would be able to discover which men in my empire are unfit for their posts. And I
could tell the wise men from the fools. Yes, I certainly must get some of the stuff
woven for me right away." He paid the two swindlers a large sum of money to start
work at once.
They set up two looms and pretended to weave, though there was nothing on the
looms. All the finest silk and the purest old thread which they demanded went into
their traveling bags, while they worked the empty looms far into the night.
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"I'd like to know how those weavers are getting on with the cloth," the Emperor
thought, but he felt slightly uncomfortable when he remembered that those who
were unfit for their position would not be able to see the fabric. It couldn't have been
that he doubted himself, yet he thought he'd rather send someone else to see how
things were going. The whole town knew about the cloth's peculiar power, and all
were impatient to find out how stupid their neighbors were.
"I'll send my honest old minister to the weavers," the Emperor decided. "He'll be the
best one to tell me how the material looks, for he's a sensible man and no one does
his duty better."
So the honest old minister went to the room where the two swindlers sat working
away at their empty looms.
"Heaven help me," he thought as his eyes flew wide open, "I can't see anything at
all". But he did not say so.
Both the swindlers begged him to be so kind as to come near to approve the
excellent pattern, the beautiful colors. They pointed to the empty looms, and the
poor old minister stared as hard as he dared. He couldn't see anything, because
there was nothing to see. "Heaven have mercy," he thought. "Can it be that I'm a
fool? I'd have never guessed it, and not a soul must know. Am I unfit to be the
minister? It would never do to let on that I can't see the cloth."
"Don't hesitate to tell us what you think of it," said one of the weavers.
"Oh, it's beautiful -it's enchanting." The old minister peered through his spectacles.
"Such a pattern, what colors!" I'll be sure to tell the Emperor how delighted I am with
it."
"We're pleased to hear that," the swindlers said. They proceeded to name all the
colors and to explain the intricate pattern. The old minister paid the closest
attention, so that he could tell it all to the Emperor. And so he did.
The swindlers at once asked for more money, more silk and gold thread, to get on
with the weaving. But it all went into their pockets. Not a thread went into the looms,
though they worked at their weaving as hard as ever.
The Emperor presently sent another trustworthy official to see how the work
progressed and how soon it would be ready. The same thing happened to him that
had happened to the minister. He looked and he looked, but as there was nothing to
see in the looms he couldn't see anything.
"Isn't it a beautiful piece of goods?" the swindlers asked him, as they displayed and
described their imaginary pattern.
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"I know I'm not stupid," the man thought, "so it must be that I'm unworthy of my
good office. That's strange. I mustn't let anyone find it out, though." So he praised
the material he did not see. He declared he was delighted with the beautiful colors
and the exquisite pattern. To the Emperor he said, "It held me spellbound."
All the town was talking of this splendid cloth, and the Emperor wanted to see it for
himself while it was still in the looms. Attended by a band of chosen men, among
whom were his two old trusted officials-the ones who had been to the weavers-he
set out to see the two swindlers. He found them weaving with might and main, but
without a thread in their looms.
"Magnificent," said the two officials already duped. "Just look, Your Majesty, what
colors! What a design!" They pointed to the empty looms, each supposing that the
others could see the stuff.
"What's this?" thought the Emperor. "I can't see anything. This is terrible!
His whole retinue stared and stared. One saw no more than another, but they all
joined the Emperor in exclaiming, "Oh! It's very pretty," and they advised him to
wear clothes made of this wonderful cloth especially for the great procession he
was soon to lead. "Magnificent! Excellent! Unsurpassed!" were bandied from mouth
to mouth, and everyone did his best to seem well pleased. The Emperor gave each
of the swindlers a cross to wear in his buttonhole, and the title of "Sir Weaver."
Before the procession the swindlers sat up all night and burned more than six
candles, to show how busy they were finishing the Emperor's new clothes. They
pretended to take the cloth off the loom. They made cuts in the air with huge
scissors. And at last they said, "Now the Emperor's new clothes are ready for him."
Then the Emperor himself came with his noblest noblemen, and the swindlers each
raised an arm as if they were holding something. They said, "These are the
trousers, here's the coat, and this is the mantle," naming each garment. "All of them
are as light as a spider web. One would almost think he had nothing on, but that's
what makes them so fine."
"Exactly," all the noblemen agreed, though they could see nothing, for there was
nothing to see.
"If Your Imperial Majesty will condescend to take your clothes off," said the
swindlers, "we will help you on with your new ones here in front of the long mirror."
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The Emperor undressed, and the swindlers pretended to put his new clothes on
him, one garment after another. They took him around the waist and seemed to be
fastening something - that was his train-as the Emperor turned round and round
before the looking glass.
"How well Your Majesty's new clothes look. Aren't they becoming!" He heard on all
sides, "That pattern, so perfect! Those colors, so suitable! It is a magnificent outfit."
"Well, I'm supposed to be ready," the Emperor said, and turned again for one last
look in the mirror. "It is a remarkable fit, isn't it?" He seemed to regard his costume
with the greatest interest.
The noblemen who were to carry his train stooped low and reached for the floor as
if they were picking up his mantle. Then they pretended to lift and hold it high. They
didn't dare admit they had nothing to hold.
So off went the Emperor in procession under his splendid canopy. Everyone in the
streets and the windows said, "Oh, how fine are the Emperor's new clothes! Don't
they fit him to perfection? And see his long train!" Nobody would confess that he
couldn't see anything, for that would prove him either unfit for his position, or a fool.
No costume the Emperor had worn before was ever such a complete success.
"Did you ever hear such innocent prattle?" said its father. And one person
whispered to another what the child had said, "He hasn't anything on. A child says
he hasn't anything on."
"But he hasn't got anything on!" the whole town cried out at last.
The Emperor shivered, for he suspected they were right. But he thought, "This
procession has got to go on." So he walked more proudly than ever, as his
noblemen held high the train that wasn't there at all.
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