Benjamin Zephaniah’s Young and Dyslexic
Structure
Key Example(s) How does the
term/technique/feature technique/feature
contribute to the
meaning/atmosphere of the
passage?
Negative positive Young and dyslexic? Main title sticks with the
statement You’ve got it going on reader. Flips the original
slightly negative statement to
something positive.
Colloquial, sets up a caring
and fun atmosphere for the
reader
First person narrative Use if “I” and “Me.” First person makes it very
(including chronological personal like a friend telling
order: narrating events “I was 10 or eleven” you and the chronological
in the order in which Then: “last one at 13” (age) order makes it easier to
they happened) Then at “21” understand
Direct speech “Shut up, stupid boy” Makes it more spontaneous
and makes it more energetic.
Other examples
Addresses dyslexic “you’ve got it going on” Means that it is more
people directly personal and as though you
can have a connection with
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Benjamin Zephaniah’s Young and Dyslexic
Language
Key term/technique Example(s) How does the technique
contribute to the
meaning/atmosphere of
the passage?
Positive and negative “On an intellectual boy Sets up something that is
adjectives and partly for being a rude good, then flips it in a
boy” humorous way to be bad,
creates humour but also a
link between the two sides.
Extensive use of personal N/A Makes it more personal,
pronoun, “I”, but also connects with the reader.
sometimes “we” and “us” Makes things seem
possible
Colloquialisms “Ask a mate” Creates an atmosphere of
“Who do they think they friendship, normality, and
are?” that he is the same as us
which is more inspiring
Self-reflection: challenges “you are dyslexic” He uses his dyslexic
faced “ having dyslexia can problem to his advantage to
make you creative” use it to be more creative
Self-reflection: confidence “I don’t want to be like Self-reflection is important
developing that” and he does it a lot. He is
creating what type of
person he wants to be
which builds confidence
Humour “The Nazis weren’t that Other funny things to create
bad” an engaging atmosphere