WRITING
TASK 1
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SAGUN SAMRAT
SANGRAULA 5
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The graph gives the information about an outcome of a voting conducted among people
going to the theatre on the reasons for disturbances during performances. Units are
measured in percentages.
Overall, while rustling sweet papers appear as a major cause of irritants, armrest hogging
makes up the least part in the chart.
People who ger irritated by rustling sweet papers comprise of above 90%. Likewise, more
than 70% of them are disturbed by the people who arrive late and who cough during the
performances. While reasons such as flash photographs, big hairdos, and armrest hogging
make up a small portion of well below 30%., those getting disturbed whispers consist of
60%.
There is an equal amount of people who are disturbed by tall, and snoring visitors (30%
each) which is about 20% lesser than those who get irritated by use of mobile phones in
the theatre (just above 50%). Sneezing and bleeps accounts for 50% and 40% of the
irritants respectively.
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Do the previous assignments first.
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INTRODUCTION - 1
The tables present the sales of coffee and bananas, which are labelled as Fairtrade, in 1999
and 2004 in five European nations : the UK, Switzerland. Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.
Units are measured in million of euros.
INTRODUCTION - 2
The tables present the sales of coffee and bananas in millions of euros, which are labelled as
Fairtrade, in 1999 and 2004 in five European nations : the UK, Switzerland. Denmark, Belgium,
and Sweden. Units are measured in million of euros.
INTRODUCTION - 3
The tables present the sales of coffee and bananas in millions of euros, which are labelled as
Fairtrade, in five European nations in two separate years : 1999 and 2004.
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OVERALL ANALYSIS
Coffee
- Sales increased in all countries
- Sweden sold the least
Banana
- Sales increased except in Sweden and Denmark
- Switzerland sold the most in both years
Overall, sales of coffee increased in every country. Sweden experienced least
amount of sales compared to others in both years. In terms of bananas, except
in Sweden and Denmark, other countries experienced a rise in the sales;
Switzerland had the highest.
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1st Body Paragraph
In terms of coffee, sales increased by the same small amount in two countries :
1.8-2 million euros in Denmark, and 0.8-1 in Sweden. The increment was slightly
larger in Belgium, from 1 million to 1.7. In Switzerland, the sales doubled from 3 to
6 million euros. Finally, the figure for the UK comprised of 1.5 in 1999 which
witnessed a sharp rise to 20 in 2004.
2nd Body Paragraph
Regarding Bananas, it was Switzerland which stood out as buying far more
Fairtrade bananas than the other four countries. Swiss sales figures inclined
rapidly from 15 to 47 million euros across these five years, while Sweden and
Denmark showed a different pattern, with falls in banana sales from 1.8 to 1 and 2
to 0.9 million euros. However, the UK and Belgium sales grew gradually from 1
and 0.6 million euros to 5.5 and 4 respectively.
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LANGUAGE OF PROPORTION
Expenses of XYZ Institute in 1995
6%
19%
49%
31%
Furniture Salaries Others Resources
Note: Figures are randomly kept just for the purpose of
teaching, and thereby don’t account for 100% in total.
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Expenses of XYZ Institute in 1995 Expenses of XYZ Institute in 2005
11%
6%
19%
47%
49% 29%
31%
19%
Furniture Salaries Others Resources Furniture Salaries Others Resources
Just below a half of the expenses accounted for furniture in 1995 which dropped
dramatically to precisely 11% in 2005.
Just below a half of the expenses accounted for furniture in 1995; this dropped
Note: Figures are randomly kept just for the purpose of
teaching, and thereby don’t account for 100% in total.
dramatically to precisely 11% in 2005.
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Expenses of ABC Institute in 1995 Expenses of XYZ Institute in 1995
11%
6%
19%
47%
49% 29%
31%
19%
Furniture Salaries Others Resources Furniture Salaries Others Resources
Just below a half of the expenses accounted for furniture in 1995 in ABC
institute; this was about 40% higher than in XYZ institute, which was at 11%.
Note: Figures are randomly kept just for the purpose of
teaching, and thereby don’t account for 100% in total.
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49%
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PIE CHART : INTRODUCTION
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PIE CHART : OVERALL
- Look at the biggest and the smallest Category (OR)
- Look at the increasing or decreasing trend, if they exist.
NOTE : You cannot present specific data in Overall. Therefore, you cannot use
Language of Proportion in Overall.
1st method
Overall, teachers’ salaries comprised of the highest of school expenses every
year, whereas insurance saw the least expenditure.
Overall, teachers’ salaries made up the biggest part of the chart, whereas
insurance showed up as the least significant portion of the expenditure in every
year.
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PIE CHART : OVERALL
- Look at the biggest and the smallest Category (OR)
- Look at the increasing or decreasing trend, if they exist.
2nd method
Overall, expenditures on teachers’ salaries, insurance, and furniture and
equipment increased over the period, whereas the figure for other workers’
salaries and resources experienced a gradual drop.
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PIE CHART : OVERALL
Can you use Language of Change in this question ???
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PIE CHART : OVERALL
1st method
2005 2010
HIGHEST – Electronics and Appliances HIGHEST – Food and Beverages
LOWEST - video Games LOWEST - Home Furnishings
Overall, electronics and appliance made up the biggest part of the chart in 2005,
whereas video games contributed the least to the sales. In comparison, in 2010,
food and beverages experienced the major sales whereas the lowest portion
accounted for home furnishings.
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PIE CHART : OVERALL
Can you use Language of Change in this question ???
2nd method
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INTRODUCTION
The first pie chart gives information about an average Australian household
energy consumption, while the second chart presents how much greenhouse gas
was emitted from the use of the energy.
OVERALL – 1
Overall, heating made up the biggest portion of the first chart, whereas cooling
showed up as the least significant part. Regarding the second chart, water
heating contributed to the highest greenhouse gas emissions; cooling witnessed
the lowest emissions rate.
OVERALL – 2
Overall, heating used the highest energy, whereas cooling consumed the lowest;
cooling also contributed to the smallest portion in emitting greenhouse gas.
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Energy is mostly consumed by heating (42%) and water heating, at nearly a third
of the total consumption (30%), while cooling and lighting comprise of a small
portion of the chart, at 2% and 4% respectively. Other appliances account for
more than a tenth of the energy use (15%) which is 6% more compared to
refrigeration, at precisely 7%.
Just below a third of the total greenhouse gas is emitted by water heating,
which is the biggest emitter among others in the chart. Other appliances, the
second-highest, constitute nearly 30%, while cooling witnesses a small fraction
of emissions (3%). This is 5% lesser than lighting, at 8%. In contrast, more than
a tenth of the gas is emitted by heating and refrigeration each (15% and 14%
respectively).
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Assignment - 6
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ASK : Can I use Language of Change ?
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PIE CHART : INTRODUCTION
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HINT : Use arrows on your questions to indicate the change.
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HINT : Use arrows on your questions to indicate the change.
The pie charts demonstrate …
Overall, it can be seen that the sales of fiction (adult and children’s)
rocketed, whereas the sale of other categories of books, including travel
and biography, experienced a decrease over the period.
Children’s fiction, adult fiction, and biography stood at 20% each in 1972.
The sale of Children’s Fiction witnessed a gradual rise by 5% in 2012, before
reaching 22% in 1992. Similarly, the figure for adult books saw over a
twofold increase ( 45% in 2012). Biography sales dropped slowly to well
under the fifth (15%) in 1992, which further declined to less than 10% at the
end of the period.
In contrast, travel books saw an erratic pattern of sales throughout the
period. There was a steady inclination in its demand in 1992 reaching just
below a fifth of the total sales, which was a 3% increase from the beginning
of the period. The proportion, although, dropped to precisely a tenth at the
end. Books on other categories witnessed a gradual fall from a fourth of the
sales in 1972 to 20% and 12% in 1992 and 2012 respectively.
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HINT : Use arrows on your questions to indicate the change.
Assignment - 7
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The bar chart outlines how many Japanese travelled overseas from 1985 to 1995,
while the line graph gives the information about the percentages of these tourists
who visited Australia in particular.
Overall, Japanese tourists who travelled different countries increased
dramatically in a decade and their visit to Australia also showed a significant rise
throughout the period.
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The bar chart outlines how many Japanese travelled overseas from 1985 to 1995,
while the line graph gives the information about the percentages of these tourists
who visited Australia in particular.
Overall, Japanese tourists who travelled different countries increased
dramatically in a decade and their visit to Australia also showed a significant rise
throughout the period.
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The bar chart outlines how many Japanese travelled overseas from 1985 to 1995,
while the line graph gives the information about the percentages of these tourists
who visited Australia in particular.
Overall, Japanese tourists who travelled different countries increased
dramatically in a decade and their visit to Australia also showed a significant rise
throughout the period.
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Assignment - 8
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The pie chart details the initial occupations of Anthropology students after
graduation and the table records their salaries following 5 years of work in
various sectors.
Overall, most graduates took full-time positions, while those who did a part time
work and also postgraduate study made up the least fraction of the chart. In
terms of table, most of the highest-paid graduates belonged to government
sector, followed by freelance consultants.
Just above a half of the graduates were employed full-time, compared to 15% for
part-time. 12% remained unemployed, which was 7% higher than those who did
part-time work and post graduate study. The proportion of the students
categorized as unknown and full-time postgraduate study remained just below a
tenth, at 8% each.
Regarding the table, freelance consultants were overwhelmingly employed in the
upper pay scales at 40% in both $75,000 – $99,999 and $100,000+, with just
20% making between $25,000 and $74,999. Government employees displayed a
broadly similar pattern with identical figures at the two lowest pay bands, 30% in
the $75,000 to $99,999 range, and 50% earning over a hundred thousand dollars
a year. Private industry salaries diverged generally with 10% in the lowest
income range, a striking 35% earning $50,000 to $74,999, while 25% and 30%
of graduates made $75,000 – $99,999 and $100,000+, respectively.
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