Sonnet 55, "Not marble, nor the gilded monuments" by William Shakespeare, is a remarkable
testament to the enduring power of poetry, carefully crafted through its poetic diction. In this
sonnet, Shakespeare employs a range of linguistic and poetic devices to convey the theme of
immortalizingof love and beauty by the verse.
The poet in Sonnet 55: Not Marble, Nor The Gilded Monuments, says that his verse will survive
longer than the marble statues and the gold-plated monuments of the rich and powerful. With
the passage of time these monuments would wear a neglected look and unfaithful time would
take its toll and leave the monuments end. The word ‘marble’ in the above lines stands for the
ornate statues of the princes, that they get built to immortalize themselves. .Moreover, the use
of iambic pentameter and carefully crafted rhyme scheme enhances the musicality of the
sonnet. The employment of enjambment at the end of the first line adds to the rhythmic flow,
creating a sense of determination and curiosity in the poet's declaration of enduring love and
beauty
Alliteration between "not/nor" and "marble/monuments" (with internal /m/ and
/n/ consonance in the latter word, too), consonance on /l/, /d/, and /r/ sounds,
and assonant /o/ and /e/ vowels—all in the space of one line! This conspicuous sound
patterning mimics the arrogance of these egotistical rulers by being showy and attention-
seeking. Like a statue "gilded" with gold,
The second line also uses alliteration and consonance, with the loudest sound being the /p/ of
"princes" and "powerful rhyme." That strong /p/ lends drama to the contrast between
royalty/power on the one hand and poetry on the other. The way the second /p/ falls on
"powerful rhyme" seems to steal the power from "princes" and grant it to the poem itself,
highlighting where the real power lies.
It's worth noting that line 2 sees the first use of "live" of the poem (in "outlive"). There are three
or four of these in the sonnet depending on whether one counts the buried "live" in "oblivious"
(line 9). The mention of the word here starts to build a contrast between the living memory of
the speaker's beloved and the dead or soon-to-be-dead artifacts of long-gone "princes" (or
other powerful people).
The destructive wars’ chaotic effect would ruin the statues and monuments. However
‘your’ biography recorded in the poet’s verse would outlive and the ornate works of art and
architecture and both the god of war’s sword and the destructive power of war and time would
fail to fade your memory from the minds of people. In the above lines, the poet calls the wars
“wasteful’” with the alliteration of /w/ coonsonance.
because they cause widespread death and destruction.
. A parallel with the opening negative Not, nor places emphasis on what the sword and quick fire
cannot do.
A splendid line, each word a single syllable, the whole line a joy to read as the anaphora
(repeated word or phrase) of Nor Mars....nor war's is an echo almost of the battlefield. Again,
pure iambics with enjambment for good measure, smoothly taking the reader to the next line.
The allusion of the greek good “mars” First, the reference to Mars and the “war-torn field”
emphasizes the destructive forces of time and conflict, emphasizing the fleeting nature of
human achievement. By evoking images of war and destruction, Shakespeare highlights the
inevitable erosion caused by time, suggesting that even the strongest and most powerful human
creations are vulnerable to decay and oblivion andthe juxtaposing images of war and the
permanence of poetic poetry, Shakespeare emphasizes the enduring nature of art as a
counterforce against time and destruction.
In these lines, the poet says that despite death and the enemies’damge, you(the fair youth)
would continue to be praised and would live in the memory of people. Even generations to
come would remember you and thus you would live in people’s minds till doomsday .. In the
fourth line of this sonnet, the poet refers in this line calls time ‘sluttish’ as it a dirty ,
unturthtfulness woman , Just as a slut loses her charm and beauty with time, the princes and the
powerful people, who enjoy great privileges at one time lose them and are forgotten with the
passage of time, In contrast the fair youth will be in people’s mind as the speaker hifhtlight his
point by using of the hyperable in the way the speaker say “ending doom “ conveys the point of
view of the immortality of his lines as they will stant against death
Through these two lines, the poet says that on the day of judgment you would arise with the
rest of the souls from your grave. Till then you will stay alive in the poet’s works and in the
hearts of your admirers. The use of the word ‘this’ in the line ‘You live in this’, stands for the
poet’s verse that would keep his friend alive till the doomsday, whereas the use of the phrase
‘dwell in lover’s eyes’ means that even after ‘he’ is no more, he would live in the memory of his
admirers.
In the last line, alliteration in "live" and "lovers'" links the two words together, emphasizing that
as long as there are lovers in the world, this poem will be read, and the memory of the speaker's
lover will survive.