FINDING AND FIXING
MISPLACED AND DANGLING
MODIFIERS
Understand the problem.
Think of modifiers as arrows and the words that they describe as bull's-eyes. For
clear, logical sentences, writers aim modifiers so that they strike as close to the
intended targets as possible.
Read this example:
Sneering with superiority, Roland drank iced tea from a crystal glass
that sparkled in the afternoon sun.
Sneering with superiority, a participle phrase, describes Roland, the noun right
after it. That sparkled in the afternoon sun, a relative clause, describes glass, the
noun in front.
R ECOGNIZING M ISPLACED M ODIFIER S
When a writer's aim is off and too much distance separates the modifier from its
target, a misplaced modifier is the result.
Consider this example:
Sucking warm water from a rubber hose , envious looks were
shot Roland's way as the other picnickers quenched their own
thirst.
Sucking warm water from a rubber hose, a participle phrase, should
describe picnickers, but since that noun is so far away, the phrase seems to be
modifying envious looks, which don't have mouths that can drink from a hose!
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R ECOGNIZING D ANGLING M ODIFIERS
If the sentence fails to include a target, the modifier is dangling.
Read this example:
With a sigh of pleasure , consumption of cucumber sandwiches
commenced.
We assume that Roland is the one sighing with pleasure and eating cucumber
sandwiches, but notice that he is not in the sentence, so we cannot tell for sure!
Know the solution.
Misplaced and dangling modifiers make sentences awkward and inelegant. They keep
sentences from expressing clear, straightforward ideas. When you discover a
misplaced or dangling modifier in a sentence, you will need to rearrange and/or
revise the sentence parts to untangle the idea the sentence wants to express.
F IXING M ISPLACED M ODIFIERS
Rearranging sentence parts will often fix a misplaced modifier. Remember that
most modifiers come as close to their targets as possible.
Here is the original error:
Sucking warm water from a rubber hose , envious looks were
shot Roland's way as the other picnickers quenched their own
thirst.
If we move things around, the modifier hits the right target:
Sucking warm water from a rubber hose , the other picnickers
quenched their own thirst as they shot envious looks Roland's
way.
Now we have picnickers drinking from the rubber hose, which is clear and
logical!
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F IXING D ANGLING M ODIFIERS
To fix a dangling modifier, you will need to add a target to the sentence and then
tweak the remaining words to make sense.
Here is the original error without a logical target:
With a sigh of pleasure , consumption of cucumber sandwiches
commenced.
Notice that the addition of a target makes the sentence clear:
With a sigh of pleasure, Roland began to consume cucumber
sandwiches.
After Roland sighed with pleasure , he began to consume
cucumber sandwiches.
Now we know who got to eat that delicious snack!
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