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Lecture - 2 - Essay - Class Notes

The document discusses the SDG Approach for essay writing, emphasizing its effectiveness in creating multi-dimensional essays based on the 17 Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs). It outlines a structured essay format that includes various topics such as poverty reduction, hunger, health, and gender equality, with examples of government schemes. Additionally, it introduces a Sectoral Approach for organizing content across different sectors and presents a separate essay structure on the philosophy of wantlessness versus materialism.

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Lecture - 2 - Essay - Class Notes

The document discusses the SDG Approach for essay writing, emphasizing its effectiveness in creating multi-dimensional essays based on the 17 Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs). It outlines a structured essay format that includes various topics such as poverty reduction, hunger, health, and gender equality, with examples of government schemes. Additionally, it introduces a Sectoral Approach for organizing content across different sectors and presents a separate essay structure on the philosophy of wantlessness versus materialism.

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​(ESSAY)​

​SDG APPROACH​
​SDG​​Approach​ ​is​​very​​effective​​but​​seldom​​used​​approach​​for​​essay​​writing.​​I​​used​​this​​approach​​in​​2017​
​ ains and learnt and applied it all by myself.​
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​There are 17 SDGs:​
​●​ ​No Poverty​
​●​ ​Zero Hunger​
​●​ ​Good Health and Well-being​
​●​ ​Quality Education​
​●​ ​Gender Equality​
​●​ ​Clean Water and Sanitation​
​●​ ​Affordable and Clean Energy​
​●​ ​Decent Work and Economic Growth​
​●​ ​Industry, Innovation, and Infrastructure​
​●​ ​Reduced Inequalities​
​●​ ​Sustainable Cities and Communities​
​●​ ​Responsible Consumption and Production​
​●​ ​Climate Action​
​●​ ​Life Below Water​
​●​ ​Life On Land​
​●​ ​Peace, Justice and Strong Institutions​
​●​ ​Partnerships for the Goals​
​As​​explained​​in​​class-1,​​we​​need​​to​​write​​6​​pages​​of​​main​​essay​​body​​in​​a​​10-page​​essay​​with​​each​​of​​the​
​6​ ​pages​ ​having​ ​3​ ​sub-dimensions​ ​or​ ​paragraphs.​ ​17​ ​SDGs​ ​can​ ​hence​ ​help​ ​in​ ​writing​ ​a​ ​good​
​multi-dimensional essay with 3 dimensions/paragraphs per page.​
​Or,​​you​​can​​discuss​​only​​6-7​​SDGs​​and​​write​​one​​page​​on​​each​​depending​​on​​how​​easily​​you​​can​​meet​​the​
​demand of the topic.​
​Also,​​need​​not​​worry​​about​​trying​​to​​force​​a​​connector​​driven​​flow​​here​​as​​on​​the​​first​​page​​itself,​​we​​will​
​convey​​our​​approach​​to​​the​​examiner​​and​​hence​​examiner​​will​​be​​aware​​of​​what​​is​​going​​to​​follow​​‘X’​
​paragraph.​
​(ESSAY)​

​CSM 2017 – Destiny of a nation is shaped in its classrooms​


​Structure​
​Introduction:​
​●​ ​ verview on importance of education for a country​
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​●​ ​Brief about structure of essay​
​●​ ​Historical view of education and destiny of nation​
​Poverty Reduction:​
​●​ H​ ow education can reduce poverty?​
​●​ ​Example​ ​of​ ​government’s​ ​scheme​ ​in​ ​field​ ​of​ ​education​ ​that​ ​is​ ​tackling​ ​poverty​ ​as​ ​well​ ​and​
​shaping destiny of nation​
​Hunger Reduction:​
​●​ H​ ow education can reduce hunger?​
​●​ ​Example​​of​​government’s​​scheme​​in​​field​​of​​education​​that​​is​​tackling​​hunger​​as​​well​​and​​shaping​
​destiny of nation​
​Health and Wellness:​
​●​ H​ ow education can promote health?​
​●​ ​Example​​of​​government’s​​scheme​​in​​field​​of​​education​​that​​is​​tackling​​health​​issues​​as​​well​​and​
​shaping destiny of nation​
​Quality Education:​
​●​ H​ ow classrooms can promote quality education?​
​●​ ​Example of government’s scheme in field of promoting education that shaped destiny of nation​
​Gender Equality:​
​●​ H​ ow classrooms can promote gender equality?​
​●​ ​Example​​of​​government’s​​scheme​​in​​field​​of​​education​​that​​is​​tackling​​gender​​inequality​​as​​well​
​and shaping destiny of nation​
​Sanitation:​
​●​ H​ ow classrooms can promote sanitation?​
​●​ ​Example​​of​​government’s​​scheme​​in​​field​​of​​education​​that​​is​​promoting​​cleanliness​​as​​well​​and​
​shaping destiny of nation​
​Ethical and Moral Values:​
​●​ ​How classrooms can instill values?​
​(ESSAY)​

​●​ ​How values shape destiny of nation?​


​International Aspect:​
​●​ ​How classrooms in other countries have shaped their destiny​
​Other necessities:​
​●​ I​ s classroom everything?​
​●​ ​What else is needed to shape destiny of nation​
​Conclusion​
​Connectors for Transitions Between Dimensions​
​●​ ​Poverty​ ​to​ ​Hunger:​ ​"While​ ​education​ ​directly​ ​impacts​ ​poverty​ ​reduction​ ​by​ ​enhancing​
e​ mployability,​ ​it​ ​also​ ​plays​ ​a​​crucial​​role​​in​​addressing​​hunger.​​Educated​​individuals​​are​​more​
​likely to access better job opportunities, leading to improved food security for their families."​
​●​ ​Hunger​ ​to​ ​Health:​ ​"Reducing​​hunger​​through​​education​​not​​only​​ensures​​better​​nutrition​​but​
​also​​contributes​​to​​overall​​health​​and​​wellness.​​Knowledge​​about​​proper​​nutrition​​and​​healthy​
​lifestyles can significantly reduce health issues."​
​●​ ​Health​​to​​Education:​​"Promoting​​health​​through​​education​​directly​​correlates​​with​​the​​quality​​of​
​education.​​Healthy​​students​​are​​more​​attentive​​and​​perform​​better​​academically,​​reinforcing​​the​
​cycle of educational and health benefits."​
​●​ ​Education​ ​to​ ​Gender​ ​Equality:​ ​"Ensuring​ ​quality​ ​education​ ​is​ ​a​ ​stepping​ ​stone​ ​to​ ​achieving​
​gender​​equality.​​Classrooms​​that​​provide​​equal​​opportunities​​and​​encourage​​participation​​from​
​all genders help break down stereotypes and promote equality."​
​●​ ​Gender​ ​Equality​ ​to​ ​Sanitation:​ ​"Promoting​​gender​​equality​​in​​classrooms​​also​​highlights​​the​
​need​​for​​proper​​sanitation​​facilities,​​especially​​for​​girls.​​Ensuring​​clean​​and​​accessible​​sanitation​
​is vital for maintaining attendance and promoting health."​

​SECTORAL APPROACH​
I​ n​​this​​approach​​different​​sectors​​such​​as​​education,​​health,​​technology,​​business,​​journalism,​​media,​
​space, cyber, agriculture etc. can be used to write multi-dimensional essay.​
​You​​should​​categorize​​them​​as​​per​​GS​​paper​​wise​​so​​that​​there​​is​​flow​​in​​your​​sectors/dimensions.​​For​
​example:​
​GS-1:​
​●​ ​Art and culture​
​(ESSAY)​

​●​ R​ eligion​
​●​ ​Design and architecture​
​GS-2:​
​●​ H​ ealth​
​●​ ​Legal​
​●​ ​Education​
​●​ ​Geopolitics​
​●​ ​Sports​
​●​ ​Media​
​●​ ​Journalism​
​GS-3:​
​●​ E​ conomic​
​●​ ​Business​
​●​ ​Science-technology​
​●​ ​Security​
​●​ ​Cyber​
​●​ ​Space​
​●​ ​Agriculture​
​●​ ​Communication​
​●​ ​Industry​
​(ESSAY)​

​CSM 2021 - Philosophy of wantlessness is Utopian, while materialism is a chimera​


​Structure​
​Introduction​
​●​ D​ efinition of wantlessness and materialism​
​●​ ​Brief explanation of why finding a balance between the two is important​
​●​ ​Thesis statement​
​Explain both parts of the quote with examples​
​●​ E​ xplanation​ ​of​ ​the​ ​pros​ ​and​ ​cons​ ​of​ ​each​ ​philosophy​ ​with​ ​respect​ ​to​ ​multiple​ ​dimensions​
​(Wantlessness:​ ​history,​ ​businesses,​ ​education,​ ​sports,​ ​ethics​ ​and​ ​psychology​ ​&​ ​Materialism:​
​personal development, society, justice, environment and technology):​
​●​ ​Examples to illustrate the benefits and drawbacks of wantlessness and materialism​
​Finding a balance between wantlessness and materialism​
​●​ E​ xplanation of why it is important to find a middle ground​
​●​ ​Three points on how to achieve balance:​
​○​ ​Cultivate gratitude​
​○​ ​Prioritize needs over wants​
​○​ ​Practice mindful consumption​
​Benefits of finding a middle ground​
​●​ ​Three benefits of achieving balance:​
​○​ ​Increased well-being and happiness​
​○​ ​More sustainable lifestyle choices​
​○​ ​Greater sense of purpose and meaning in life​
​Conclusion​
​●​ R​ estate the thesis​
​●​ ​Recap of the key points made in the essay​
​●​ ​Final thoughts on the importance of finding a balance between wantlessness and materialism.​
​(ESSAY)​

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