Descriptive writing
Descriptive writing is a style of writing that paints a vivid picture in
the reader’s mind by appealing to the senses.
Purpose of descriptive writing
1. To create a detailed mental image
2. To evoke emotions or moods
3. To engage the reader fully
Key features of descriptive writing
1. Sensory details: Sight, sound, smell, taste, touch
2. Figurative language: similes, metaphors, personification and
hyperbole
3. Precise Vocabulary: use specific vivid words (e.g. scarlet instead of
red)
4. Imagery: Create picture with words
Steps to write Descriptively
1. Choose a topic: a place, person, object or experience
2. Visualize and plan: Imagine the scene; jot down sensory details
3. Start with a strong hook: Example: “The crisp morning air was filled with
the sweet aroma of blooming jasmine.”
4. Develop the body: Include sensory and figurative details.
5. Conclude effectively: Summarize the mood or leave a lasting impression
Example of descriptive writing
1. Describing a place: The sun dipped below the horizon, spreading a fiery
orange glow across the tranquil sea, as the waves whispered secrets to the
sandy shore.
2. Describing a person: Her eyes sparkled like dew-kissed morning grass,
reflecting both curiosity and wisdom beyond her eyes.
3. Describing an event: The bustling market overflowed with vibrant colors,
from the deep yellow of sunflowers, as the chatter of vendors filled the air.
Common mistakes to avoid
1. Too many adjectives: Avoid overloading sentences with unnecessary
sentence with unnecessary modifiers
2. Clichés: Use fresh , original description
3. Lack of focus: Stick to one perspective or subject
4. Telling instead of showing: Instead of saying, “she was scared” show it,
“Her hands trembled, and her breath came in short, uneven gasps.”
Convert the following sentences into
descriptive sentences
• The sky was beautiful • He was angry
• The cake was delicious • The beach was quiet
• The park was empty • The flowers were colorful
• The dog ran quickly • She felt scared
• The room was messy • It was a cold day
Practice questions
1. Write a descriptive paragraph using the following sentence as thesis statement:
“My favorite coffee mug, with its chipped rim and warm earthy hues, holds memories of
quiet mornings and heartfelt conversations”
2. Write a descriptive paragraph using the following sentence as thesis statement:
“My best friend’s infectious laughter, sparkling eyes and boundless energy light up every
room she enters.”
