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| const abdulkareem = Person('Abdulkareem', 35, 'Riyadh', 'married', '3 children', 'construction worker', ['dates', 'smoke water pipe'] ); |
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In your constructor age is the third input while here you have 35 as second. Ordering matters for unnamed arguments.
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This is wrong, you're returning console.log() output which is empty. You should return the promise in getData.
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Remove this. you have another getData function
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This function is strange. You don't have a param url yet you use it in there. If you don't reuse this function you might as well just call what's inside it without defining it.
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why don't you use this function in the other examples or wasn't it not part of the homework?
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