By Zach Dean: Layover
By Zach Dean: Layover
by
Zach Dean
Madhouse Entertainment
Adam Kolbrenner
8484 Wilshire Blvd, #640
Beverly Hills, CA 90211
310-587-2200
UTA
9560 Wilshire Boulevard
Beverly Hills, CA 90212
310-248-5243
FADE IN:
A pale morning.
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CONVICT
(O.S)
You draw good.
CONVICT (CONT’D)
I said you draw good...
THERON
(without looking away from
the passing landscape)
I draw well.
CONVICT
(motioning to Theron’s
neck)
You do your own ink?
CONVICT (CONT’D)
I did mine. Check this out...
CONVICT (CONT’D)
Did that in the garage when I was
thirteen. My dad helped me.
THERON
(with tone)
Clearly your father was a great
man.
CONVICT
(with hate)
You know buddy, you should think
long and hard about the shit you do
before you do it.
THERON
I do. Believe me...
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DRIVER
What the hell? Is that a kid?
She shrugs.
4.
The Driver grabs his CB radio and calls back to the other
vehicles.
DRIVER (CONT’D)
(into CB Radio)
Convoy one to Convoy Two and Convoy
Three. We have an obstruction in
the road ahead. Probably nothing
but be advised, stay on alert and
standby.
VOICES OVER CB
Copy that, Convoy one.
DRIVER
Let’s go.
Engine idling, both officers step out of the SUV onto the
road.
FEMALE OFFICER
(calling out)
Hello? Is there someone under
there?
There’s no answer.
She walks past the snowman and reaches the sled. She turns it
over revealing AN EMPTY PINK CHILD’S COAT.
The Driver turns and stares into the Snowman’s black pinecone
eyes.
The Driver reaches out and pushes the snowman’s head off.
5.
Nothing.
He chuckles.
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As the BUS DRIVER grabs for the door release lever a BULLET
STRIKES THE BACK OF THE FEMALE OFFICER’S HEAD.
Her lifeless body slides down the outside of the bus door.
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The tall BLOND DRIVER of the rear SUV scrambles out of his
vehicle, raises a SHOTGUN, and braces himself behind the open
car door for a fire fight.
6.
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The bus door is pried open and the two armed Figures step up
onto the bus scanning the prisoners faces.
The two masked figures walk down the bus aisle stopping in
front of Theron.
THERON
Time?
FIGURE#2
Two minutes, eleven seconds...
THERON
Say hello to your Dad for me.
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A THIRD MASKED FIGURE opens the driver’s door and steps out
from behind the wheel of one of the Landrovers.
FIGURE#2
Four seconds...three, two, one...
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THE TRANSPORT BUS, THE SUVS, THE ENTIRE SWITCHBACK ROAD FOR A
HALF MILE SECTION ARE BURIED, WIPED AWAY, GONE...
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Figure#3 pulls off his mask. This is TOMMY. Also in his late
twenties, Tommy’s skin is pale and his stare is intense. On
Tommy’s neck is an ornate tattoo of a TEN OF SPADES.
JACK
(to Theron)
How’d we do, bro?
THERON
Whose idea was it to add the sled?
JACK
That was me. I thought it would,
you know, sell it more. I hope you
don’t mind.
Theron smiles.
THERON
A thing of beauty. Well done Jackie-
boy.
THERON (CONT’D)
This buys us a little time.
TOMMY
Welcome to freedom, sir.
Her breath is visible in the cold air. She KISSES HIM HARD on
the lips, then touches his chest as if making sure he’s real.
FIONA
(to Theron)
Twelve years...
THERON
We’ll make a time and place for
this, alright?
She nods.
THERON (CONT’D)
Come on, we’ve got a lot of work to
do.
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The wipers fight the rain as the yellow line blurs through
the windshield and becomes a single streak.
10.
She checks the rear view mirror. The cruisers are seconds
behind.
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Ahead in the distance, Nikki sees the cruiser parked off the
side of the road...
NIKKI
(to herself)
Shit.
She checks her seat belt, drains the end of the champagne
bottle and tosses it out the car window.
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11.
DOYLE
Pattie, you got oil?
PATTIE
What grade?
DOYLE
No, like, oil for cooking...
PATTIE
Cooking?
DOYLE
Baking.
PATTIE
(with a smile and look)
Baking?
Doyle nods.
PATTIE (CONT’D)
(chuckling)
Aisle four.
Doyle sets the items on the counter and checks the page.
PATTIE (CONT’D)
(ringing him up)
Work?
DOYLE
Yeah. Out on the highway. Probably
somebody outta’ gas. I got a can on
my truck. Why don’t you add a
gallon of unleaded to the bill.
12.
PATTIE
That happen often?
Doyle nods.
DOYLE
You’d be surprised how many
problems you can solve with a
couple gallons of gasoline.
The Trooper offers Doyle a smoke. It’s clear they know each
other, having worked the same stretches of highway.
DOYLE
Two years.
DOYLE
No.
DOYLE
(with a look)
She’s my daughter...
13.
DOYLE
I’d appreciate that.
DOYLE
No. Somewhere in there, she’s
scared enough.
DOYLE
You alright?
NIKKI
I’m fuckin’ fine...I’m just, I got
the spins.
DOYLE
You’re lucky to be alive.
NIKKI
Lucky? Take a good look. I look
lucky to you? You don’t understand
anything do you?
DOYLE
We’re more alike than you think.
You just have to...
14.
NIKKI
(interrupting)
I don’t have to do anything! Like
I’m gonna’ take advice from you? I
mean...just look at you.
The loaded tow truck drives down a long dirt drive and parks
in front of a dilapidated farm house.
There are no other houses for miles, just the highway in the
far distance.
For a moment, Doyle watches her sleep. Beyond the black nail
polish and leather and scraped-up head, he sees the little
girl he carried on his shoulders.
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The flashing yellow work lights of SNOW PLOWS AND OTHER HEAVY
MACHINERY fill the dark night.
Norris looks Vernon over. Vernon’s face looks tired but his
eyes flash with intensity.
Vernon drags hard on his cigarette, then flicks the butt off
into the darkness.
Norris is silent.
The two black LANDROVERS turn off a small two lane state road
onto a SAND TWO-TRACK leading off into the dark Nevada
desert.
Fiona and Theron are in the lead Landrover, Jack and Tommy
drive in the second vehicle behind them.
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THERON
Tommy looks like shit. Jack said he
was clean. He’s covering for him.
FIONA
They’ve been friends since jump
school.
THERON
Yeah, well it adds a variable.
Fiona nods and keeps her eyes on the road. She looks pensive.
THERON (CONT’D)
What’s on your mind?
FIONA
Nothing.
THERON
Speak.
FIONA
What do you want me to say? I don’t
like the next part of your plan.
We’re poking a sleeping wolf here.
It’s dangerous. I think we should
just leave tonight.
THERON
It’s eleven million dollars, Fiona.
19.
FIONA
I didn’t break you out for the
money.
Theron smiles.
THERON
Noted. Just do your part. It’ll all
play out. Trust me.
QUICK MONTAGE:
From her bedroom, Nikki walks into the kitchen rubbing her
eyes.
She has a name tag that reads: “HI, MY NAME IS NIKKI, HOW CAN
I SERVE YOU?”
Nikki opens the freezer and pulls out a bag of frozen corn
and presses it to her swollen forehead.
Doyle, her father, walks in the kitchen from the living room.
He has the BIRTHDAY CAKE in his hands. The candles are
burning.
DOYLE
Happy birthday, baby.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Have a seat.
20.
NIKKI
My shift starts in half an hour.
DOYLE
Come on, give me a minute. Have a
seat.
Doyle sets the cake on the table top and sits down across
from her.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
What do you want, Nikki?
NIKKI
What?
DOYLE
What do you want? It’s your
birthday. Wish for it and I’ll get
it for you. Just tell me what it
is.
Nikki looks her father. His eyes are tired. His thick beard
hides his face and makes him appear older than he is.
NIKKI
I want to leave.
DOYLE
Why?
NIKKI
I’m seventeen years old today and
I’ve never done anything. I’ve
never seen anything. It’s like you
keep me here and you don’t want me
to go places and you don’t want me
to date and you get weird every
time I talk about applying to
college. You don’t even want me to
use the internet.
DOYLE
Isn’t there something I could buy
you...a guitar or something...
NIKKI
A guitar? So I can write songs
about how unhappy I am?
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21.
NIKKI (CONT'D)
Dad, you brought me here when I was
like five. We’ve never had any
family over or anything. This
shitty house is all I know...
DOYLE
(cutting her off)
Then what do you want?
NIKKI
I WANNA’ LEAVE THIS FUCKING STATE!
I want to see things...
DOYLE
What do you want to see?
NIKKI
The ocean. I want to see the ocean.
I’ve never seen it.
Doyle pauses.
DOYLE
You saw it once. You were just too
little to remember.
NIKKI
Well that’s not really the point is
it, Dad?
Nikki turns to her birthday candles and BLOWS THEM OUT WITH
SPITE.
NIKKI (CONT’D)
I want to go see the ocean. That’s
my birthday wish. Can you do that
for me? Can you? Please?
DOYLE
No.
NIKKI
You’re nobody. You know that? A tow
truck driver in middle of fuckin’
nowhere.
22.
Doyle is silent.
NIKKI (CONT’D)
And I’m your loser kid. But I’m not
a coward like you, I’m gonna’ get
out of here, one way or another,
and I’m gonna’ be something.
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Doyle stands on the porch looking out across the vast sea of
wheat fields at the big-rig trucks passing on the distant
highway. He appears lost in thought.
Doyle kneels and PULLS OUT THE BOTTOM DRAWER OF HIS DRESSER
AND TURNS IT UPSIDE DOWN ON HIS BED.
VOICE
Yes.
DOYLE
This is Doyle Barron.
23.
VOICE
Access Code?
DOYLE
J-7-Z-5-1
VOICE
Is this an emergency? Has someone
recognized you?
DOYLE
No.
VOICE
Then what can I do for you?
DOYLE
I need to leave for a few days.
VOICE
For what purpose?
DOYLE
I need to take my daughter on a
trip. She’s...
VOICE
Where?
DOYLE
The west coast, California maybe.
VOICE
Absolutely not. It’s totally out of
the question.
DOYLE
There’s no latitude here?
VOICE
None. It’s your bed J7Z51, lay in
it.
DOYLE
(growing frustrated)
Hey, We’re not just a number, this
is our life...
Doyle swings the small safe door open to reveal a cigar box
with SMALL ROLL OF CASH.
DOYLE REACHES FOR THE CASH AND TAKES IT OUT. UNDERNEATH THE
ROLL IS AN OLD DOG-EARED PHOTOGRAPH. HE HESITATES, THEN PICKS
IT UP AND EXAMINES IT.
The automatic door chime rings as Doyle walks into the store.
SHE CLOSES THE VIEWER WINDOW OF THE COMPUTER she is using and
walks back behind the counter.
DOYLE
Let’s go.
NIKKI
What?
DOYLE
Let’s go.
NIKKI
Go where?
DOYLE
To the ocean.
NIKKI
What are you talking about?
DOYLE
I’m talking about you and me going
to California.
NIKKI
You said no...
DOYLE
I know, but I took a minute and
looked at what I’ve got saved and I
think we can do it.
NIKKI
When?
DOYLE
Whenever you want. It’s your
birthday present.
NIKKI
Tonight?
DOYLE
Sure. Why not. I’ll go to the
travel agency this afternoon.
NIKKI
You’re serious?
Doyle nods.
26.
NIKKI (CONT’D)
Don’t go to a travel agency. Nobody
does that anymore. I’ll take care
of it. I’ll buy tickets online.
It’ll be way cheaper.
NIKKI (CONT’D)
Or don’t you trust me?
DOYLE
I do..I would...but I always use
cash you know. I don’t have a
credit card. Don’t believe in
them...
NIKKI
(with a customer service
voice and smile )
Sir, would you like to purchase an
American Express gift card? You
choose the amount and they’re
accepted everywhere credit cards
are accepted.
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TWO BULKY MOVERS load the last of the boxes into the back of
a truck and pull down the door.
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Vernon sets the baseball card on the bed and answers his
phone.
MADELINE
Hi.
MADELINE (CONT’D)
The truck’s packed. I’m going now.
Vernon nods.
28.
MADELINE (CONT’D)
(referring to the
trophies)
You’re sure that’s all you want?
MADELINE (CONT’D)
I made you a lasagna. I put it in
the freezer. You can cook it
sometime.
MADELINE (CONT’D)
Or I could stay one more night if
you wanted me to cook it for you?
MADELINE
It’s funny, you’ve been so awful
for the last year, I thought this
would be easier, but it’s not. I
miss the man you were.
A tear streaks down her face. She turns, then looks back at
him.
MADELINE
You know what it’s been like for
me? It’s like you both died.
She leaves.
DOYLE
(referring to her bag)
That bag weighs as much as you do?
Why didn’t you just check it?
NIKKI
I read they make you pay for every
bag now. All the travel websites
say with the state of the airlines,
carry-on is the way to go.
DOYLE
You got the tickets?
NIKKI
Yeah. We have a layover in Las
Vegas, then on to...
DOYLE
(interrupting )
Las Vegas?
DOYLE (CONT’D)
We have a layover in Vegas?
NIKKI
Yeah...so what? The direct flights
were super expensive. It’s only
like forty minutes.
DOYLE
(serious)
Give them to me.
NIKKI
What? Are we not going now? Is this
gonna’ to be your excuse? Because
the flight is too long...
30.
NIKKI (CONT’D)
Please don’t ruin this. Don’t bring
me all the way to the airport and
then take it away. I swear to god
I’ll never forgive you.
The red desert sun sets on LOST RIVER, a remote ghost town
deep in the Nevada desert.
The door to the old LOST RIVER SALOON creaks open. Jack, with
his M-4 rifle over his shoulder, steps down into the dusty
road and looks at the setting sun.
JACK
Sat-dish is up. Communications are
online. Perimeter’s secure. Fiona
made contact with our target, meets
at 0900 tomorrow.
Theron nods.
JACK (CONT’D)
I missed you, man.
THERON
(deadly serious)
Jack, I know he saved your ass in
Kandahar, but if Tommy fucks up
tomorrow, I’m gonna’ bleed him.
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Beside Doyle, Nikki stares out the jet window down at the
dark jagged landscape far below.
NIKKI
(to Doyle with excitement)
You see that? Way far off? Is that
Las Vegas?
DOYLE
(empty)
Yes, it is.
Doyle and Nikki RUSH off the arriving jet ramp and Doyle
scans a DEPARTURE MONITOR.
DOYLE
GATE 71. It’s right down that
corridor. Final boarding call.
Let’s go.
NIKKI
I have to go the bathroom.
DOYLE
You can go on the plane.
32.
NIKKI
What? No. It’ll just take a second.
It could be an hour before I get to
go on the plane.
DOYLE
It’s the final boarding call.
NIKKI
I gotta’ pee, just chill a second.
With her bulky carry-on over her shoulder, Nikki takes the
lid off the trash can and STASHES THE SMALLER BACKPACK
beneath the paper towels and refuse.
Doyle is waiting for her as she comes out of the rest room.
DOYLE
Let’s go.
GATE ATTENDANT
You know, we’re just about to close
the aircraft doors. (to Nikki)
Miss, your boarding pass?
NIKKI
Damn it...
DOYLE
What?
NIKKI
It’s on the sink in the bathroom.
33.
DOYLE
Are you kidding me?
NIKKI
It’ll just take a minute...
DOYLE
I’ll go with you.
GATE ATTENDANT
Sir, I’ve already scanned your
boarding pass. You must board the
plane. Don’t worry, I won’t let the
flight depart until she gets on.
NIKKI
It’s alright. Here take this
thing...
NIKKI (CONT'D)
I’ll move quicker.
Nikki turns and takes a few steps, then looks back at Doyle
for an instant...
NIKKI (CONT’D)
Dad...
DOYLE
Tell me on the flight. Hurry up.
Nikki nods and runs down the corridor towards the bathroom.
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With both carry-ons, Doyle BUMPS his way down the center
aisle getting DIRTY LOOKS from travelers ready to leave.
34.
CAPTAIN’S VOICE
(over intercom)
Alright folks, it looks like we are
waiting for one additional
passenger before we can pull away
from the gate.
Doyle takes the last remaining window seat and PEERS THROUGH
THE JET WINDOW BACK AT THE TERMINAL. The glass terminal
construction makes the gate area fully visible.
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She quickly removes her worn red baseball cap and sunglasses
from the bag. She puts them on, checks herself in the mirror,
takes a deep breath and exits.
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DOYLE’S POV THROUGH JET WINDOW: Seated, Doyle watches out the
jet window back at the gate looking for Nikki. SUDDENLY HE
SEES HER EMERGE FROM THE WOMEN’S ROOM IN HER RED CAP, GLANCE
AT THE GATE, THEN RUSH DOWN THE CORRIDOR IN THE OPPOSITE
DIRECTION.
DOYLE
(to himself)
No...
HE LOOKS CLOSELY and SEES THE SMALL BLACK BACKPACK OVER HER
SHOULDER. He looks at her bulky CARRY-ON BAG BESIDE HIM.
He UNZIPS her bag. It’s stuffed with TOILET PAPER ROLLS from
the women’s room. Also in the bag is a NOTE THAT READS:
35.
NIKKI (V.O.)(NOTE)
DAD, I FOUND MY MOM. WE’VE BECOME
FRIENDS ONLINE. I’M GOING TO STAY
WITH HER IN VEGAS FOR A LITTLE
WHILE SO WE HAVE A CHANCE AT
KNOWING EACH OTHER. DON’T WORRY. BE
HAPPY FOR ME. MAYBE THIS IS YOUR
CHANCE TO DO SOMETHING WITH YOUR
LIFE TOO. NIKKI...
DOYLE SURGES UP OUT OF HIS SEAT AND RUSHES TOWARDS THE FRONT
OF THE PLANE.
Doyle rushes off the plane and sprints up the jet-way ramp.
Just as Doyle reaches the door back into the gates the
hulking Gate Attendant STEPS IN BLOCKING THE DOOR. The man
outweighs Doyle by 80 pounds.
GATE ATTENDANT
Stop where you are, sir. The
airport police have been called, I
just need you to calmly wait here.
DOYLE
I’m only going to say this once,
get outta’ my way.
GATE ATTENDANT
Sir, you’re gonna’ have to go
through me...
Doyle steps over the gasping man and runs down the corridor.
MORE POLICE rush in on the far side of the room and close in
from both sides.
THE ALARM SOUNDS throughout the airport and THE CROWD PANICS.
A heavy set SECURITY OFFICER swings his BATON again but Doyle
blocks the BLOW with his forearm, twists the baton out of the
officer’s hand and PUNCHES THE WOODEN WEAPON INTO THE
OFFICER’S SOFT GUT. THE OFFICER GRUNTS AND FOLDS.
Norris nods.
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He looks both ways then JIMMIES THE LOCK on the back door of
the building and forces his way in...
With his teeth HE PULLS THE LID OFF THE SUPER GLUE.
Doyle then grabs the SCISSORS and begins CUTTING AWAY AT THE
MASS OF HIS THICK BEARD.
THE BLADE MOVES OVER SKIN. FOR THE FIRST TIME HIS FACE AND
NECK SLOWLY BECOME VISIBLE REVEALING: AN ORNATE ACE OF SPADES
PLAYING CARD TATTOOED ON HIS NECK.
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Doyle pulls HIS CELL PHONE FROM HIS POCKET AND HITS REDIAL.
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In her red ball cap and leather jacket Nikki stands on the
street looking up at the LUXOR, A MONOLITHIC BLACK PYRAMID
towering upwards before her. With her eyes she follows the
contours of the structure to its peak where a shaft of
blinding white light projects into the heavens.
She silences the ringer and erases his voice mail without
listening to it.
It’s late and only a few GUESTS pass through the lobby.
YOUNG RECEPTIONIST
Hello sir, welcome to Caesar’s
Palace. How may I help you?
“$300,000”
She walks into the office area abandoning the reception desk.
TYLER SOUTH
HEAD OF INTERNAL SECURITY, CONSULTANT
EXT #614 - SUB FLOOR 2 - ROOM S77 - RESTRICTED
TYLER SOUTH
(on Phone)
Surveillance.
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The Guard gives her a ‘WHO ME? WHAT DID I DO’ expression,
then grins and heads towards the MEN’S ROOM.
Doyle follows.
Doyle walks up to the sink next to the Guard and looks at him
in the mirror, catching the Guard’s eye.
44.
DOYLE
You know that girl’s job is hard
enough.
DOYLE
That’s how she makes money. She
shouldn’t have to catch shit from
you too.
DOYLE
I am, actually.
The Guard MAKES MOVE FOR HIS MACE CANISTER on his belt.
DOYLE JABS THE MAN HARD IN THE STOMACH, BUCKLING HIM, THEN
DRIVES HIS KNEE UP INTO THE GUARD’S CHIN TWICE, KNOCKING HIM
OUT COLD.
Doyle strips off the KO’ed Guard’s black SECURITY BLAZER AND
HIS SECURITY SWIPE CARD KEY.
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Opening the stairwell fire door a crack, Doyle peers out and
sees ROOM S77 DIRECTLY ACROSS THE CORRIDOR. A SIGN on the
door reads RESTRICTED AREA: LEVEL FOUR CLEARANCE REQUIRED.
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TYLER SOUTH
You go to fuckin’ Columbia?
46.
ARMED OFFICER
Milk in the lounge fridge was bad
so I had to go upstairs.
THE OFFICER HITS THE FLOOR FACE DOWN AND DOESN’T STIR.
TYLER SOUTH
Holy shit...
DOYLE
You’re a creature of habit
Tyler...same old shit?
TYLER SOUTH
Same old shit.
Doyle walks over and takes a seat across the control desk
from Tyler.
DOYLE
How you been, Tyler?
TYLER SOUTH
I guess I’ve seen better days.
Kelly and me divorced a couple
years ago. She took the kids back
to Boston. Things been kinda’
downhill since.
DOYLE
Sorry to hear that.
TYLER SOUTH
Well, you know....
47.
DOYLE
You’re the numbers man Tyler, what
odds would you give it?
TYLER SOUTH
In the old days...ten...maybe
twelve to one. It’s hard to say,
now.
DOYLE
Why’s that?
TYLER SOUTH
The stats are based on outdated
data. My level of influence on the
outcome is unknown. And lastly, you
know...people change, Doyle.
DOYLE
You sure about that?
TYLER SOUTH
Tell me what you want, Doyle.
Gimme’ a chance.
DOYLE
I want my daughter.
TYLER SOUTH
What?
DOYLE
My little girl. She’s seventeen,
and she’s in Vegas. I need to find
her.
48.
TYLER SOUTH
What can I do?
DOYLE
You’re wired into every casino and
hotel mainframe on the strip. You
know every time somebody orders
room service or puts a hundred
bucks in play. I want you to use
your access to help me find her.
Tyler nods.
TYLER SOUTH
You got a picture?
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TYLER SOUTH
Anything specific that might help
the search? Clothing?
DOYLE
A hat. A red ball cap.
TYLER SOUTH
How long ago would she have checked
in?
DOYLE
Within the last fours hours.
TYLER SOUTH
That will narrow it down.
49.
DOYLE
I quit drinkin’ twelve years
ago...right after Lindsay died.
TYLER SOUTH
Seems like that would make you
drink more.
DOYLE
Yeah, well, it was hard enough
sober.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
She didn’t need a drunk for a
father.
TYLER SOUTH
(sincere)
You know, I always liked her, your
wife I mean.
DOYLE
There’s somebody after my daughter,
pretending to be her mother.
TYLER SOUTH
(a look)
She doesn’t know she’s dead?
DOYLE
Lindsay and I had a deal. Either
one of us ended up killed, we’d
keep it from her until she was old
enough to understand.
TYLER SOUTH
It’s her mom...what did you say?
DOYLE
Nothing. I never talked about her.
Ever.
TYLER SOUTH
Jesus, Doyle...she’s seventeen.
When was she gonna’ to be old
enough?
DOYLE
(angry)
WHAT THE FUCK WAS I SUPPOSED TO
SAY? HER MOTHER WAS MURDERED? HER
PARENTS WERE CRIMINALS?
TYLER SOUTH
That her?
DOYLE
Yes...
TYLER SOUTH
Luxor. Checked in a 2:17AM. Room
1237.
51.
DOYLE PAUSES, THEN RACKS OPEN THE PISTOL ACTION AND EJECTS
THE UN-FIRED 9MM BULLET FROM THE CHAMBER.
Doyle PRESSES THE UN-FIRED BULLET INTO TYLER’S OPEN HAND AND
TOSSES THE 9MM PISTOL INTO THE TRASH CAN BESIDE THE DESK.
DOYLE
I say that’s the bullet that would
have killed you nine years ago.
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52.
DOYLE
(to the door)
Nikki? Nikki open the door.
DOYLE
(friendly)
Excuse me, ma'am?
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Sorry, I didn’t mean to scare you.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
I just locked myself out of my
room. Could you let me back in?
Room 1237.
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DOYLE
Gracias.
Doyle shuts the door and peers around the room the empty
room.
He opens the notebook and looks at the papers: They are hard
copies of email correspondence.
Fiona’s appearance has changed. She has dyed her hair dark
and done her makeup. She looks very much like the photograph
of Lindsay, Nikki’s deceased mother.
His eyes like black moons, he grinds his teeth and swallows
hard as the speed hits him.
BACK TO:
NIKKI
(laughing)
So he brought home this bra
(laughing) this gigantic friggin’
brown cross-your-heart bra, I mean
it was at least a C-cup, I was
eleven for god’s sake! And I was
supposed to go to this grade school
dance thing...
FIONA
Oh my god, you must have died!
(pause) I’m just so sorry I wasn’t
there to help you with that
stuff...
NIKKI
Well, we can go from here.
NIKKI (CONT’D)
I feel just a little funny, maybe
it’s the flight or something. I’m
gonna’ use the bathroom. I’ll be
right back.
Fiona nods.
FIONA
Okay.
FIONA (CONT’D)
(to Tommy)
He’s here in Vegas. Probably
looking for her as we speak.
FIONA (CONT’D)
It’s in her bloodstream, let’s get
her out of here as soon as she...
Suddenly the cafe door CHIMES open and TWO UNIFORMED POLICE
OFFICERS WALK INTO THE DINER. They look around the room, then
take a seat at the counter.
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She REACHES FOR THE FAUCET TO TURN OFF THE WATER BUT MISSES
IT COMPLETELY...
CUT TO:
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Nikki stumbles out of the women’s room. She’s dizzy and holds
on to the wall. She’s having trouble keeping her head up.
Fiona and Tommy are waiting for her outside the women’s room
door and each grab an arm.
56.
NIKKI
(weak)
Who are you?
NIKKI (CONT’D)
Mom...what’s happening? I don’t
feel good...
FIONA
(to Nikki)
Just shut the fuck up and walk.
As they half carry her to the diner door, Nikki looks back
and CATCHES THE EYE of one the Police Officers. She is unable
to speak, but THE FEAR IN HER EYES is evident.
FIONA
Let’s go!
FIONA (CONT’D)
(to Tommy)
What?
BACK TO:
POLICE OFFICER
Hey buddy, is she okay?
TOMMY GRABS NIKKI BY THE HAIR AND THROWS HER HEAD FIRST INTO
THE BACK SEAT OF THE LANDROVER.
DOYLE
NIKKI!
FIONA
(to Tommy)
Tommy, don’t kill him! We need him
for Christ’s sake!
POLICE OFFICER #2
(to Tommy)
DROP YOUR WEAPON!
58.
TOMMY SPINS AND AIMS. THE POLICEMAN#2 FIRES BUT RUSHES HIS
SHOT. THE BULLET GRAZES TOMMY’S FACE, SLICING OPEN HIS CHEEK.
TOMMY
Fuck!
FIONA
TOMMY, LET’S GO!
She sees Doyle emerge from behind the parked car and start
SPRINTING towards the Landrover. At twenty yards, Fiona can
see the resolve in Doyle’s eyes.
FIONA (CONT’D)
GET IN THE CAR, TOMMY!
TOMMY
Don’t tell me what to do, that
fucker shot me in the face!
TOMMY (CONT’D)
Bitch...
BACK TO:
59.
Tommy turns and sees DOYLE RUN INTO THE STREET AFTER THE
LANDROVER.
Tommy raises his pistol but Doyle SLAPS it out of his hand
and DRIVES A HARD FRONT KICK INTO TOMMY’S STOMACH, DRIVING
HIM BACKWARD ONTO THE PAVEMENT.
DOYLE
I’m only going to say this once
Tommy, where’s she taking her?
TOMMY
I’m not afraid of you.
DOYLE SEIZES Tommy’s wrist, twists it, and STRIKES the back
of his exposed elbow.
But Tommy instantly SCOOPS THE KNIFE OFF THE PAVEMENT with
his free hand and DRIVES THE BLADE INTO DOYLE’S HIP.
Doyle PULLS THE KNIFE FROM HIS HIP, POCKETS IT, and TAKES OFF
RUNNING AFTER HIM.
60.
Tommy scrambles up over the safety rail and LEAPS off the
overpass down ONTO THE ROOF of the passing bus.
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Hearing the LOUD IMPACT of Doyle and Tommy on the roof, the
BUS DRIVER, with a bus full of CHILDREN, takes his eyes off
the road to look up...
The Bus Driver glances back at the road ahead but it’s too
late to stop. He turns the wheel hard, trying to avoid
impact...
61.
The school bus veers sideways and CLIPS the rear panel of the
tanker truck hard, FLIPPING THE BUS on it’s side and HURLING
BOTH DOYLE AND TOMMY OFF THE BUS ROOF.
DOYLE
Jesus...
He runs to the rear of the bus and tries the emergency door.
IT WON’T BUDGE.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
(yelling into the bus)
Get away from the window!
Doyle DRIVES the iron rod into the window of the emergency
door. The glass CRACKS. He hits it again the glass SHATTERS.
62.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
(yelling into the bus)
Everybody out!
DOYLE (CONT’D)
(to the children)
Run to the lights! Run to the fire
trucks!
The last LITTLE BOY out points back inside the bus.
LITTLE BOY
(to Doyle, upset)
Ruby won’t wake up...
DOYLE
I’ll get her. Just go.
Doyle climbs up into the back of the bus and SEARCHES through
the seats. He finds a CURLY HEADED LITTLE GIRL, unconscious,
with cut on her forehead.
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Alive, Doyle falls to his knees and holds the little girl
tight...
FADE TO:
Doyle sits alone at the table. His body appears battered, his
face haggard. He is silent, lost in thought.
Vernon shuts the door behind him and takes a seat across the
table from Doyle.
Doyle is silent.
DOYLE
No. You can’t.
DOYLE
I did.
DOYLE
Where?
DOYLE
I have to get out of here.
DOYLE
(interrupting)
Listen to me, that girl is my
daughter. If they find out I’m in
police custody they’ll cut bait and
kill her. (growing upset) And that
can’t happen, you understand? She
can’t die. She’s the only thing
that matters in this world.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
(intense)
My child needs my help. You
understand what I’m saying?
DOYLE
They don’t fuckin’ want her. They
want me.
DOYLE
If this was about revenge I’d
already be dead.
DOYLE
I can’t tell you that. What I can
tell you is they’re gonna’ call me
at anytime and I have shit I have
to do before that happens. If you
want to catch Theron Turner, I’m
the only chance you’ve got. And I
can’t do it from in here.
BACK TO:
Doyle looks away from the distant helicopter and hurries off
down the street with a slight limp.
Blackness.
Confused, she tries to move her arms and legs, then suddenly
realizes she is COMPLETELY IMMOBILE.
67.
THERON
You want some water?
Theron kneels down into clear view and shakes a WATER BOTTLE
WITH A STRAW.
THERON (CONT’D)
You should stay hydrated.
THERON (CONT’D)
Good.
NIKKI
Who are you?
THERON
That doesn’t really matter, kid.
THERON (CONT’D)
This is your phone, right?
Nikki nods.
THERON (CONT’D)
I’m gonna’ send that to your, dad.
NIKKI
My dad? Why?
THERON
Because he’s got a whole lot of our
money. And we want it back.
NIKKI
You’ve got the wrong guy. My dad’s
a nobody. He doesn’t have any
money. He’s harmless.
Theron chuckles.
68.
THERON
Your father is a lot of things, but
harmless is not one of them.
(pause) Listen kid, I remember when
you were three years old. You
probably don’t remember, but once
in awhile, we used to do Legos
together.
THERON (CONT’D)
And I’ll probably be the one that
ends up killing you. So I just want
you to know it’s nothing personal.
Helicopter.
DOYLE
(to his wife)
I promise you...I will find her. I
will find our girl.
With his fingers Doyle digs in the soft soil beneath the
headstone, UNEARTHING A LITTLE METAL BOX BURIED FOR A DECADE.
We wipes the dirt off the rusted box and OPENS IT. He reaches
inside and pulls out a KEY TO A BANK VAULT BOX HANGING ON A
SILVER CHAIN.
He places the key around his neck and sets his wife’s
gravestone upright again and straightens her grave.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
I’ll see you soon.
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Doyle gets out of a TAXI CAB, pays the driver, and heads for
the PHONE BOOTH.
THERON
(on phone)
Where’s Tommy, Doyle?
DOYLE
(into phone)
Dead.
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A silence.
THERON
(into the phone)
Where’s our money?
DOYLE
(on phone)
Safety deposit. Main branch, Las
Vegas Central Bank.
THERON
(into the phone)
Ironic. (pause) In the ceiling of
the phonebooth you’ll find an
earpiece.
BACK TO:
71.
THERON
(on phone)
Be in front of the bank in one
hour. No bullshit Doyle. I’ll cut
her throat, just like your wife’s.
BACK TO:
THERON
(into phone)
You get that?
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FIONA
(to Theron on phone)
Affirmative.
THERON
(on car speaker phone)
Jack, when he walks out of that
bank, get a visual on the money,
then put a soft point in his brain.
Drop him right on the sidewalk.
JACK
With pleasure.
72.
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FIONA
(over earpiece)
You copy, Doyle?
DOYLE
Yes.
FIONA
Open your jacket. Lift your shirt.
FIONA (CONT’D)
Ankles...
JACK
(to Fiona over headset)
He’s clean.
DOYLE
(into earpiece)
What now?
FIONA
You follow directions exactly as I
say. Now go in the bank and get our
money. When you come out walk to
the southwest corner of the
intersection and wait. You’ll see
your daughter then. Understood?
DOYLE
Yes.
DEPOSITORY MANAGER
Hello again, Mr. Green. Did you
have more questions about your new
safety deposit boxes?
DOYLE
No questions. I just need to get
into them.
74.
DEPOSITORY MANAGER
Sure. Anything else?
DOYLE
Yeah, one other thing: I have
college savings account for my
daughter at one of your mid-west
branches. It has about twelve grand
in it. I need to withdraw ten-
thousand of that money. I need it
in cash in $100 bills, all in one
ten-thousand dollar banded bundle.
Can you do that while I’m in the
safety deposit room?
DEPOSITORY MANAGER
Of course.
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HE OPENS THE FIRST BOX: Inside are TWO OVERSIZED BLACK DUFFLE
BAGS WITH THE TAGS FROM A SPORTING GOOD STORE STILL ATTACHED.
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75.
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Doyle walks through the lobby with the two huge bags over his
shoulders.
DEPOSITORY MANAGER
Your receipt is inside. (pausing,
noticing his preoccupation) It’s a
relatively large withdrawal...is
everything alright Mr. Green?
DOYLE
I fear I’ve got a touch of Vegas
fever.
DEPOSITORY MANAGER
Good luck.
Doyle opens the envelope, unzips one of the duffle bags and
places the BUNDLE HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS ON THE TOP, then zips
the bag back up.
Doyle flips open his cell phone and pulls out VERNON’S
BUSINESS CARD.
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BACK TO:
DOYLE
(into phone)
I need your help. You still
following me around?
DOYLE
(into phone)
I don’t see it in my near future.
DOYLE
(into phone)
I can’t slow down. I’m not coming
to the station.
DOYLE
(into phone)
There’s a rest stop off I-15 a few
miles north of Vegas. Meet me on
the northbound side in one hour. I
won’t wait.
DOYLE
(into phone)
Check the rooftop across the
street, southeastern corner.
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DOYLE
(on phone)
A shooter.
DOYLE
(on phone)
Look again. He’s there.
Vernon PANS forward up the length of Jack’s body sees the tip
of the RIFLE BARREL peeking out from under the netting.
DOYLE
What do you say you have a word
with him so I can get outta’ here?
Doyle closes his cell phone, turns on his earpiece and puts
it back in his ear.
Doyle steps out of the bank holding the two huge duffle bags.
FIONA
(on earpiece)
Stop.
Doyle stops.
FIONA (CONT’D)
(on earpiece)
Let me see the money.
Doyle sets the bags down on the sidewalk and reaches for the
zipper on one of the bags.
BACK TO:
79.
BACK TO:
JACK
(to himself)
And that’s all folks...
The Pilot swings the aircraft in closer and hovers above the
building roof.
CUT TO:
FIONA
(to herself)
What the...
FIONA (CONT’D)
Shit!
DOYLE
Don’t move. Don’t even fuckin’
breathe.
Fiona freezes.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Where’s your weapon?
FIONA
Glove compartment.
With his free hand, Doyle opens the glove compartment and
pulls out Fiona’s SEMI-AUTOMATIC 9MM.
Doyle CHAMBER’S A ROUND into the 9MM and tosses the pellet
gun in the back seat.
DOYLE
Keep your mouth shut, start the
car, and drive.
CUT TO:
Vernon hits the street and looks both ways. He sees Jack
running west, SCALING THE FENCE OF AN ABANDONED CASINO/HOTEL
DEVELOPMENT THAT WENT BELLY UP.
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An unfinished hotel casino left for dead. DANGER and KEEP OUT
signs are everywhere.
The first few floors of the development are block walls and
concrete floors, the rest is just a rusted steel skeleton.
The hollow halls are dark and littered with squatter trash.
82.
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Jack climbs out of the elevator shaft and scrambles into the
dark.
BACK TO:
With his BACK TO THE ELEVATOR SHAFT, Vernon, peers around the
room, his eyes adjusting to the dark.
JACK
He’s dead or crippled. Either way,
we have to go.
FADE TO:
As Doyle grabs him before he falls, and helps him make his
way to the swing set. As Doyle sets him down in a swing
Vernon drops what looks like a SMALL RECTANGULAR CARD.
Without a word, Vernon takes the card out of Doyle’s hand and
grips it.
84.
DOYLE
Gagged in the trunk of the
landrover.
Doyle nods.
DOYLE
About ten minutes ago.
DOYLE
I have a diverse skill set.
DOYLE
They won’t kill her as long as they
believe I have the money.
Doyle pauses.
DOYLE
There is no money. I don’t have it.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
You’re gonna’ die without a
hospital.
DOYLE
She’s my little girl.
There’s a silence.
DOYLE
Let me be clear...I’m not arresting
anyone.
FADE TO:
WITH THE RED SUN AT HIS BACK, DOYLE STANDS ON A ROCKY RIDGE
beside the entrance of the old silver mine LOOKING DOWN ON
THE GHOST TOWN OF LOST RIVER.
CUT TO:
86.
NIKKI
(hoarse)
Who is that?
THERON
(without taking his eyes
off Doyle’s silhouette)
That...is your father.
NIKKI
(with a glimmer)
Dad...
JACK
(to Theron)
What now?
THERON
(to Jack)
He’ll want to make an exchange.
THERON (CONT’D)
(to Norris)
Dig her out.
THERON
Cop, if I were you, I’d keep myself
useful.
87.
A hundred yards from the edge of the Ghost Town, Doyle parks
the Landrover and shuts off the engine.
He sees the HOLE IN THE STREET where Nikki had been buried.
CUT TO:
THERON
You want to play a hand?
DOYLE
Where’s my daughter, Theron?
THERON
Outside.
CUT TO:
THERON
(yelling to Norris)
Bring out the girl...
Down the dusty street, Norris walks Nikki out from behind an
old mortar and stone foundation.
NIKKI
(her voice hoarse)
Dad!
THERON
What did you have in mind here,
Doyle?
DOYLE
A gentlemen’s agreement. The money
is out of the equation. An even
trade, your girl...for mine. We all
walk away. We all live.
THERON
She gave up our position. Failed
her objective. Failed me...
THEN HE DRAWS THE PISTOL FROM HIS BELT SHOOTS FIONA SQUARE IN
THE HEAD.
THERON (CONT’D)
(to Doyle)
The money has returned to the
equation. What’s plan B?
DOYLE
It’s inside the old mine on the
ridge. The whole shaft is wired to
detonate in (checking his watch)
four and a half minutes.
THERON
(testing)
Wired with what?
DOYLE
The six bricks of Composition-4 I
found in trunk of her Landrover.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Let my daughter go. When she
reaches the Landrover at the edge
of town, I’ll text in the disarming
code.
THERON
And if I refuse? And we wait and
see what happens in four minutes?
90.
DOYLE
Then the money is gone, everybody
loses, and there was no fuckin’
point to any of this.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Make a decision, we’re running out
of time.
THERON
(to Norris)
Let her go.
NIKKI
Dad...
DOYLE
(to Nikki)
The keys are in it Nikki. Now go,
you hear me? Get behind the wheel,
drive away, and never look back.
NIKKI
(tears welling)
Dad...I...
DOYLE
(stern)
GO!
Nikki cries as she RUNS as fast as she can out of the Ghost
town.
Doyle watches like he’s watching her run for the very first
time...or like the very last.
With tears streaming down her face she looks back at the
abandoned town, at her father standing in the street facing
down killers...
BACK TO:
THERON
Enter the code.
Doyle sees the Landrover start to pull away into the open
desert.
THERON (CONT’D)
Enter the code, Doyle...
Doyle enters a text into the cheap Radio Shack phone and
holds his thumb over the send button.
THERON (CONT’D)
SEND THE FUCKIN’ TEXT DOYLE!
“KILL THEM”
BACK TO:
THE SHAPED CHARGE THRUSTS A SHOCK WAVE DOWN THE CENTER OF THE
GHOST TOWN, LEVELING THE WINDMILL, RIPPING SIDING OFF THE OLD
BUILDINGS, AND BRUTALLY HURLING EVERYONE, INCLUDING DOYLE, TO
THE GROUND.
CUT TO:
NIKKI
(to herself)
Oh my god...dad.
BACK TO:
Doyle raises both pistols and OPENS FIRE, rounds ripping into
the old wood building.
DOYLE
NO...NIKKI...NO...
Doyle rises to his feet, and walks like a man possessed out
into the center of the street trying to divert attention from
the approaching Landrover.
Jack steps out from behind a building and takes aim. Just as
he’s about to SHOOT Doyle in the back A BULLET STRIKES JACK
IN THE COLLARBONE.
Doyle FIRES BOTH PISTOLS, CUTTING JACK DOWN INTO THE DIRT
with a volley of shots. One of Doyle’s pistols clicks ‘empty’
and he tosses it aside.
Theron steps out of the saloon door with gun raised and
fires.
Seeing the Landrover entering the town, Theron turns and aims
his pistol at Nikki behind the windshield of the advancing
vehicle. It clear he wants Doyle to watch him shoot her.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
NO...
WITH HIS GOOD HAND, LIKE AN OLD WEST GUNFIGHTER, DOYLE SCOOPS
HIS PISTOL OUT OF THE DIRT AND SHOOTS FROM THE HIP.
NIKKI
Oh my god, Dad...
DOYLE
MOVE OVER!
Nikki leaps into the passenger seat and Doyle gets behind the
wheel.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
GET YOUR HEAD DOWN!
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Give me your belt!
95.
NIKKI
My what?
DOYLE
YOUR BELT. TAKE OFF YOUR BELT!
Nikki unties her purple cloth belt and pulls it free of her
Jean loops.
Gripping the steering wheel with his good hand, Doyle holds
up his mangled knuckles.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Wrap it around my hand, tight.
Nikki starts to wrap the belt around and around his bloody
fist.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Tighter. Put pressure right on the
exit wound.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Good. Now, tie it off.
She cinches the ends of the cloth belt tight and ties the
cloth belt in a square knot.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Good.
The vehicle turns south paralleling the DEEP GORGE cut by the
rushing LOST RIVER.
BACK TO:
DOYLE
Fuck...
NIKKI
What is it?
DOYLE
(all business)
Just keep your head down and do
exactly what I say, when I say to
do it. Understand?
Nikki nods.
CUT TO:
The landrover races along the edge of the Lost River gorge
leaving a dust trail in it’s wake.
CUT TO:
His shirt is saturated with blood and with every breath there
is a wheezing sound.
BACK TO:
Nikki looks back through the shattered rear window and sees
the helicopter gaining ground fast.
NIKKI
Dad, what’s he doing?
DOYLE
Put on your seat belt and unroll
your window.
NIKKI
Why?
DOYLE
Do it.
Nikki Fastens her seat belt and unrolls the passenger window.
Doyle hits the button with his elbow unrolling his window.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
(all business)
Listen very carefully, when we hit
the water the first thing that will
happen is our air bags will deploy.
They open hard so close your eyes
right before impact. After we hit
unhook your seat belt. With the
windows open, the car will fill
with water fast. Don’t even try to
open your door until the car is
full. The water will equalize the
pressure and they’ll open easy.
Then just fight for the surface.
You understand?
Nikki nods.
CUT TO:
Their seat belts bite hard as the AIR BAGS EXPLODE OPEN.
Nikki gasps as icy water rushes in, rising around her chest.
DOYLE
NOT YET...
Nikki and Doyle each take in a HUGE BREATH as the water rises
over their faces.
UNDERWATER - CONTINUOUS
Doyle pushes open his door and swims free of the car.
He fights upward.
CUT TO:
DOYLE
(calling out)
NIKKI! NIKKI!
DOYLE (CONT’D)
SWIM BABY! KICK YOUR LEGS! YOU’VE
GOT TO SWIM!
99.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
You’ve got to do it yourself now.
You understand?
For a moment they are silent, letting the warmth come back
into their limbs.
NIKKI
I’ve never seen you without your
beard.
DOYLE
And?
NIKKI
You look good...I mean, if you
weren’t so fucked up.
100.
Doyle smiles.
NIKKI (CONT’D)
Who are you?
DOYLE
I’m your Dad.
NIKKI
That’s not good enough. You have to
tell me.
DOYLE
I remember Nikki...right after you
were born...and we, your mom and I,
were scared because they gave her,
(trying to recall) I can’t remember
what you call it but they numbed
her spine for the birth, and it was
taking too much time for your mom
to get feeling back in her legs, so
the doctors were running tests on
her...anyway, they wrapped you in
this little pink blanket and they
handed you to me to hold.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
I couldn’t believe it...that they
let me hold you, this perfect
little baby in my hands...hands
that had done such bad things. I’ve
never been so scared in my life.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
You know, Nikki, how you always
complained that I was trying to
hide you from the world? To protect
you from it?
NIKKI
Yes.
DOYLE
I wasn’t trying to protect you from
the world. I was trying to protect
you from me.
101.
NIKKI
Do you think he left?
DOYLE
No.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
That bird came all the way from
Vegas and he’s been circling the
canyon for an hour. He’s low on
fuel. He knows we’re here
somewhere. He’ll land and wait me
out.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
Clean, through and through.
Doyle picks up a the flaming twig out of the fire and blows
out the flames, leaving the tip a smoking red ember.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
(to Nikki)
You might want to look away.
He takes handfuls of wet dark river clay from cave floor and
rubs them on his face, chest, back, and feet camouflaging his
white skin dark as the night.
Next he opens the action on his pistol, ejects the clip and
checks for ammunition. The magazine is empty. He tosses the
handgun aside.
NIKKI
You’re going after him?
Doyle nods.
DOYLE
If I’m not back by dawn, follow the
river downstream. It’ll get hot.
The river water isn’t great but it
will keep you alive. There’s a
bridge and road about ten miles
south.
DOYLE (CONT’D)
I need to give you something.
Doyle places THE VAULT BOX KEY from her mother’s grave in
Nikki’s hand.
NIKKI
What’s this?
DOYLE
That’s yours.
CUT TO:
The moon hangs high over the desert. The sound of the rushing
river fills the air.
SUDDENLY THE ROCK GIVES OUT FROM UNDER HIS FEET AND PLUMMETS
FORTY FEET DOWN TO THE RUSHING WATER BELOW.
A few feet from the idle aircraft he sees the RING OF LIGHT
from a campfire.
CUT TO:
CUT TO:
THERON
(calling out)
Doyle?
Theron coughs.
THERON (CONT’D)
(calling out)
Come on, man. Let’s do it face to
face.
104.
THERON (CONT’D)
You climb that wall, Doyle?
Doyle nods.
THERON (CONT’D)
Tough motherfucker...
THERON (CONT’D)
You remember that night, Doyle?
THERON (CONT'D)
The five of us in that bombed out
mosque, anti-aircraft guns cutting
up the sky. Couldn’t move, couldn’t
make a sound, boxed in. (pause) So
we played cards...and you drew a
natural Royal in spades. And we
knew instantly, with absolute
clarity, that we were gonna’ live.
THERON (CONT’D)
We were good men then.
Doyle NODS.
THERON (CONT’D)
I can hear death, Doyle...out there
in the darkness, laughing at me.
I’m not gonna’ see the sun again.
Theron TOSSES HIS SKETCH BOOK INTO THE FIRE, FOR AN INSTANT
WATCHING HIS ARTWORK, THE IMAGES OF HIS LIFE, OF FIONA,
CURLING IN THE FLAMES.
THERON (CONT’D)
I got a request...
THERON (CONT’D)
(his eyes on the flames )
Let me do it myself, alright?
Doyle pauses, then stands and takes one last look at Theron.
Doyle stands at the edge of the gorge and looks up and the
breathtaking moon, the radiant stars, the sound of the
rushing river, and somewhere behind him, A SHOT RINGS OUT as
Theron takes his own life.
FADE TO:
Wind blows in her hair as she breathes in the salty free air.
Nikki turns and walks towards a huge white BANK beyond the
beach promenade.
One the wall behind the desk reads THE INTERNATIONAL BANK OF
THE CAYMAN ISLANDS.
NIKKI
It’s my father’s key...
106.
The woman examines the key and enters the engraved number
into her computer. She scans the computer screen as she
talks.
BANK MANAGER
Ms. Barron, this is your key. You
are the only name on the account.
And according to our records, you
just recently celebrated your
seventeenth birthday. Is that
correct?
NIKKI
Yes.
BANK MANAGER
Then you now have full, exclusive
privileges regarding the vault box.
Your parents opened this account as
a trust when you were four years
old and paid the annual premiums
through (pausing to read) the year
2020.
NIKKI
What do you mean exclusive? What
about my parents?
BANK MANAGER
I mean even if they had wanted to
access these accounts, that
wouldn’t have been possible. It’s
not the way the account was
originally created. They were very
specific about it.
NIKKI
So what now?
BANK MANAGER
Well, would you like to access your
vault box?
NIKKI
Yeah. Do I have to like...sign
something?
BANK MANAGER
Since you were so young when the
account was originated, a signature
would not be a valid form of
identification.
(MORE)
107.
NIKKI
Sure. But...a comparison with what?
BANK MANAGER
I’ll show you.
The woman PIVOTS THE DESK TOP COMPUTER MONITOR so Nikki can
see it. Nikki leans forward in her chair and looks at the
screen.
CUT TO:
She slides her key into a recessed lock in the wall and turns
it. She hears the lock release. She slowly PULLS OPEN THE
VAULT DRAWER.
DOYLE
Hey, Nick.
108.
She looks back and see her father standing in a loose white
shirt and linen pants. His fist and shoulder are bandaged,
but he looks worlds better than when we last saw him.
NIKKI
Hey.
DOYLE
I just wanted to check on you, make
sure you’re okay.
NIKKI
Yeah. I’m okay.
Doyle nods.
DOYLE
I’ll leave you be, then.
NIKKI
Maybe after dinner we can take a
walk or something?
Doyle turns.
DOYLE
I’ll count on it.
NIKKI
And Dad...
DOYLE
Yeah?
NIKKI
Thanks for my birthday wish.
Nikki watches him go, then looks back at the sea. She rips
open the envelope and begins to read...
LINDSAY (V.O.)
Dear Nicole, this is your mom, and
there is so much that needs to be
said, but the first thing I need to
say is that I love you...
FADE OUT.
THE END.