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Some people think adults should learn practical skills by themselves, while others believe

that learning from a teacher in a classroom is better. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
(2010 年 7 月 15 日 Some people think adults should learn practical skills by themselves,
while others think they should learn from teachers. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.)

A
1.individualized learning个性化学习,按自己的节奏和进度来,没有压力move at their own
pace
2.better command of 游刃有余,可以有更深的理解。因为自己学习就会不断的犯错误,自
我理解,印象深刻
B
1.学习效率更高。有人引导,老师会直接告诉他们正确的做法,少犯错误
2.增加学习的热情和乐趣。因为在班级内会有更多的竞争或者互动interaction,比如在蛋
糕课上……

在我看来,大家跟自己学还是老师学取决于how difficult it is。如果是一些简单的skills,


找本书或者看视频就可以了。如果是开车或者做木工,跟着老师学可以避免一些犯错的
风险,更加安全。

Two Questions=Report
出题方式:题目中给出一个社会现象,然后要求考生回答两个回答,这两个回答不是固
定的出题方式

1.原因分析+解决方案 4
2.原因分析+有何影响 2
3.原因分析+随机提问 1
4.导致问题+解决方案 1

Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but many people still continue with
unhealthy activities. What are the reasons and what can we do to change the situation?
打游戏 reward system,Highly addictive
生活成本的上升,living cost – work overtime

In some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life. What are
the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

生活成本的上升,养孩子的成本上升,年轻人的收入却没有明显的增长
女性地位的提高,女性工作减少生育意愿

In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why do you
think it is the case? How should children or teenagers be punished?

互联网给孩子们产生了很多不良影响,炫耀/美化校园暴力,shoplifting,
出生率的下降导致很多家庭家里只有一个小孩,导致父母宠溺他们be spoiled

Older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems
does this cause and what are the solutions?

老年人健康问题,过多劳动
年轻人失业率上升

写作结构安排:
1.只能改写原题+简单预告两个问题
2.分析两个原因/问题
3.提供解决方案(根据提问回答影响)
4.综上,总结核心段内容

分析原因的细节要求
1. 不能只局限在中国;
2. 客观的出发点 ( 要有证据,别感慨 ) ;
3.专属于report的原因段分析逻辑链条
开门见山给出一个原因,举例/this means that,as a result,引出题目现象

1.生活成本的上升 rising living costs


2.互联网的某一方面
3.广告的影响
4.科技的进步(某种科技)
5.人口增长
6.出生率下降
7.女性地位提高

Many people spend less time in their homes. What do you think are the reasons?
What effects does it have on individuals and society?

1.第一个原因是生活成本上升,这意味着adults要更努力工作挣钱,因此他们加班甚至兼
职而不是呆在家里
2.第二个原因是互联网提供了很多休闲娱乐信息,比如说社交平台推送人们热门的电影
,新开的餐厅,和有趣的演出,因此人们更有可能选择周末出去玩而不是呆在家里

解决方案的回答要求:
1.必须切实可行
2.有明确的执行者
3.不需要太多逻辑,只要详细描述解决问题
4.解决方案尽可能对应前面的原因,但不要求
5.奖励/惩罚/提高成本/投资建议/法律法规

There are many towns and cities designed and constructed in previous centuries, and they are
suitable for those times. What problem is caused by this today? How to solve this problem?

1.安全问题,那个时候使用木材居多,因为木材更容易获取,更适合当时的成本,而且当
时的楼层不需要太高。但是现在对居住环境要求高,而且需要安装电线等等,会有安全
隐患。
2.现在的城镇居住空间有限,which means可能会有更高的房租和房价。因为在两三百年
前,当时的工艺和住房需求导致房屋都是矮小的,然而人口爆发式的增长和城镇化的现
象,这些低矮的房屋是没有办法满足这些人口的涌入的,因此城市拥挤不堪。

保留原样的前提下,增加或减少原材料。比如北京的老房子会更换防火棉,冬天会加一
层保温材料。
建造卫星城市satellite city,在城市的外面,不远的地方建造一个新的CBD,central
business district,让居住环境和商业环境分开。

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is
the case? What can be done to attract local people?

1.博物馆和历史景点展现都是跟本地的历史文化相关的东西,本地人从小就接触到这些
东西,非常熟悉,即使不去也会很了解这些。然而外地人对这些并不了解,所以很有兴
趣。
2.里面的东西常年不变,本地人去过一次之后就不会想再次前往。而外地人没有去过,
所以他们会有更有更多的热情。

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural
areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might these problems be reduced?

1.城市会人口爆炸,带来了一系列的压力。
2.耕地荒废可能会导致粮食价格上升。
3.留守儿童和空巢老人?

report 类型的介绍段 ( 从原文里找到新的主语 )

1) In many countries schools have severe problems with students’ behaviour. What do you
think are the causes? What solutions do you suggest?
• Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem in many countries.
I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this. Parents and schools should be
responsible for solving this problem. (提前总结型过渡 : 预告了原因和解
决)

2). Children and teenagers are committing more crimes than before. What do you think are
the causes? How should they be punished?
• The number of crimes committed by children and teenagers has been increasing. I think that
there could be several reasons why this is happening and that the younger criminals should be
punished depending on what they have done. (空话型过渡)
3). Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life
experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a
positive or negative development?
• Formal educational qualifications are believed to be more important than life experiences
and personality traits when a company is recruiting new staff. This criterion of choosing
employees can be explained by the following reasons and from my point of view, it is a
positive development for both job seekers and companies. (空话型过渡)

4). The average weight of citizens has been increasing in many countries. What do you think
are the causes? What solutions do you suggest?
• Many countries across the world are faced with the problem of obesity. I think that
unhealthy lifestyles of today’s people are the causes of this problem. (提前总结型过渡)

5). Children and teenagers are committing more crimes than before. What do you think are
the causes? How should they be punished?
• There has been an increase in the number of crimes committed by children and teenagers. I
think that the causes of teenagers committing more crimes are poor parenting and media
influence. (提前总结型过渡)

6). International travel sometimes makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What
do you think are the reasons? What can be done to increase understandings of tourists about
the country they visit.
• Sometimes, people who travel internationally have prejudice against the country they visit.
I think that tourists’ prejudice is mainly caused by cultural differences. (提前总结型过渡)

直接重复总结重复前面的内容
• In conclusion, unhealthy eating habits and sedentary lifestyle have caused the rise in
obesity. Solutions to this problem lie with the government which could take measures
mentioned above to improve the level of health among the general population.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

三种可能的个人观点
• 1. completely agree --- 顺着题目写咯 ( 出现的几率最低,因为题目中经常出现极端限定
词)
• 2. completely disagree--- 逐一反驳 ( 比较高的可能性,怼起来很爽。但是你的怼人能力
有限。 )
• 3. 一分为二地来看问题 ( 其实相当于部分赞同 partly agree ,但要求尽可能是一个明确
的个人观点,要求比较高的掌控力 )一分为二=细分型观点:取决于/虽然...但是...
• 1). 我认为题目中一部分对,另一部分错 ( 题目中必须出现 and 连接了两个部分 )
• 2). 题目说的太笼统,我认为应该分人或者分情况 ( 别乱用,一定要确保有明确的划分
标准 )

例题1:有人认为义务的社区服务应该被设定为高中生的必修课程内容,比如……,你是
否赞同此观点?

1.改写原题观点+我完全赞同此观点
2.强制参加对高中生身体健康有益处
3.various life skills。
4.强制参加在一定程度上减少青少年干坏事的机率。
5.综上

例题2:有人认为公司应该有相同数量的男女员工,你是否赞同此观点?
1.改写观点+我完全不赞同
2.这么做不公平
3.公司的效率降低
4.不现实unrealistic
5.综上

例题3:
有人认为商店和超市不应该卖那些被科技证明有害健康的食物和饮料,你是否赞同此
观点?
1.改写观点+我完全不赞同
2.虽然很多产品被证实有害,但是这种害处被夸大了exaggerated,因为科学实验往往在
比较极端的条件下进行
3.这个观点低估underestimate了这些产品的重要性:带来快乐+经济影响
例题4:有人认为21世纪的生活质量比前一个世纪好很多,你是否赞同此观点?
1.改写观点+在我看来,虽然很多方面的生活质量都有显著提升,但是环境和压力方面
人们遭受比上个世纪更大的问题
2.一方面,科技的进步带来了更好的生活: 食物/医疗/娱乐/交通
3.另一方面,如今的人们也遭受更大的问题来自环境和压力
4.综上

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?


1. 这是两面写作题
2. 必须分出多少/高低
3. 所以说这个题目基本等同于 discuss 的弱强写作结构,不要给自己增加负担觉得新学
了一种题目。

结构安排:
1. 引出争论 /背景句 + 给出明确的偏向( .....does more good than harm.)
2. 先写弱的一方(1 或 2 个分论点)
3. 再写强的一方(1 或 2 个分论点)
4. 一定通过对比得出结论:问题可以被解决 或者 好处是短暂的或者受益人不多 –高分
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