MR.
SHY’S
1119/2 WRITING WORKSHOP
MODULE
2024 Edition
2024 Edition
Name: Class:
Nuts and Bolts for Writing Paper
Terms Used
SQ TS CD CO CS
Specific Question Topic Sentence Concrete Details Commentary Concluding Sentence
3 Elements = (I) + (II) + (III)
Marking Paper 2
Communicative
Content Achievement Organisation Language
Content Vocab
Fulfill Q’s Cohesive devices
(less common lexis)
(answer SQ, use TS) requirement Paragraphs
Elaboration Grammar
Easy to understand Complex sentences
(use CD) Format
5 marks 5 marks 5 marks 5 marks
Marks are awarded
from 0 to 5 for each
criterion. Yet marking
3 parts x 20 marks level is different
60 marks according to the parts.
Part1 (A2-B1)
Part 2 (B1-B2)
Part 3 (B2-C1)
C1 B2 B1 A2 A1
49-60 37-48 25-36 13-24 1-12
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Moga Jadi Tiket Berjumpa Wildan Wildan Syurga Ayah dan Ibu
. M1 . Mister Shy
ENGLISH CLASS
PART 1 : INFORMAL EMAIL
You received an email from your pen pal, Saef, who went to a Task Analysis
festival.
1. Who Greeting
Hi, Check In
2. What
specific
I’ve just visited a food festival in my country and it was fantastic!
I heard that your country is famous for food too. I’d like to know
about one. What is it called? What are the ingredients needed 3. Request Respond
and what else can I add to make it better?
I’ll be waiting for your reply.
4. SQ1
Bye!
TS (Answer)
Saef
5. SQ2 +
CD (Elaboration)
6. SQ3
Now write an email to your friend in about 80 words. * Request = invitation = wishes
Write your answer below.
Greeting
General
Check In
Para
1 Specific
Check In
Respond
SQ1 - TS
SQ1 - CD
SQ2 - TS
Para
2 SQ2 - CD
SQ3 - TS
SQ3 - CD
Check Out
Para
3
Name
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PART 2 : GUIDED WRITING
Your class members has been discussing what they use the internet
Task Analysis
for and your teacher has asked you to write an essay about the topic
1. Theme
In your essay you should write about: Para 1
2. SQ1
how frequent you use the internet
why is the internet important 3. SQ2 Para 2
how the internet can be a distraction
4. SQ3 Para 3
TS – use to search TS – concern :
Intro information incorrectly used
idea not alien
CD – a lot of
information on the CD – surf social Con – Have both
Theme + why is the how can the
internet media for to long adv. and disadv.
If you often TS – use internet internet be a
Con Must learn how
use the everyday important distraction
CO – English : look for to use it wisely
internet CD – FB / Tiktok
translations
CD – provides CS – must know
CS – True the internet
help for study how to use the
is important
internet
Level : Intermediate
Para / Item Type Sentence
Intro
Theme
Intro TS
If you often SQ1
use the
internet CD
SQ1
TS
SQ2
CD
Why is the
SQ2
Body internet
Para 1 important CO
SQ2
CS
SQ2
TS
SQ3
CD
Body How can ... SQ3
Para 2 distraction CO
SQ3
CS
SQ3
Con Conclusion Con
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ENGLISH CLASS
PART : EXTENDED WRITING - ARTICLE
Task Analysis
Articles Wanted on Shopping!
1. Theme Para 1
Write to us about online shopping in the 21st century.
2. SQ1 Para 2
Tell us the reasons why people shop online. We also want to know the
advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. The best article will 3. SQ2 Para 3
be published in next month's magazine.
4. SQ3 Para 4
TS – Convenient and TS – saving time TS – untrustworthy
Intro –have cheaper +safer products + frauds be more
different cautious
opinions CD – thousands of CD – possibilities
CD – shop from
products of getting cheated
Reasons home + avoid public
Theme Advan. Disad. CO – sell low Conc.
why CO – Lazada and
SHoppee qualities products
CO – COVID 19
some enjoy + deceive do not
alarming rate
some customers fall prey
despise CS – prefer shop
online than the old way CS – buy from
CS – why take risk?
trusted sellers
Title : Level : Intermediate
Para / Item Type Sentence
Intro Online
Intro
shopping
TS
SQ1
Reasons CD
Body SQ1
why people
Para
shop online
1 CO
SQ1
CS
SQ1
TS
SQ2
CD
Body SQ2
Advantages
Para
of online CO
2
shopping SQ2
CS
SQ2
TS
SQ3
CD
Body Disadv. of SQ3
Para 3 online
CO
shopping SQ3
CS
SQ3
Con Conclusion End
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PART 3 : EXTENDED WRITING [REVIEW]
Task Analysis
We Welcome Your Reviews!
1. Theme
Have you watched any interesting movies lately? Para 1
Submit your movie review to us. 2. SQ1
Tell us what you enjoyed about the movie and how it is different from
other movies. Would you recommend the movie to your friends> Why? 3. SQ2 Para 2
4. SQ3 Para 3
Opi – perfect
Intro –Avatar – TS – Fantasy creature TS – CGI effect choice +
The Ways of something
Water different
CD – Makes CD – amazing
James Cameron what you Rec – my friends
interesting / unique visual effect
enjoyed how the movie the movie is
Intro recomm fantastic
about the is different CO – make
Details – movie CO – Jake changes
from human to avatar interesting
released in End – must
costumes
2023 watch for
Cost $350 – CS – really fantasy movie
CS – added value
400 millions amazing loves
Avatar -The Ways of Water : A Review Level : Intermediate
Para / Item Type Sentence
Intro
Intro
Introduce Topic
the movie
Details
TS
SQ1
What you CD SQ1
Body
enjoyed
Para
about the CO
1
movie? SQ1
CS
SQ1
TS
SQ2
CD
Body SQ2
How the
Para
movie is CO
2
different? SQ2
CS
SQ2
Opi
Would you
Rec. recommend Rec
to friends /
why?
End
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PART 3 : EXTENDED WRITING [REPORT]
You recently took part in a volunteering project held by a local council. As a
Task Analysis
member of a uniformed body, you are required to write a report to your
teacher advisor.
1. Theme
Report Para 1
2. SQ1
Please write a report by including the following information
The objectives of the project
3. SQ2 Para 2
The activities done in the project
What can be improved for future project 4. SQ3 Para 3
TS – raise awareness Rec - Suggest
Intro – Go Green TS – Tree planting
about caring the more
Volunteering Project + beach clean up
environment + appropriate
encourage go green venues
CD – took place
Topic - Objectives CD – common around beach
practices – plant trees Reason -
Intro Activities objectives activities recomm Encourage
Recommendations recycle
CO – venue plays more
an important role participants
CO – importance to
Data Collection - care for environment
Observing E.R- Attract
CS – participants more
interview CS – all about
consider venue participants
environment
Report :
Level : Intermediate
Written by :
Para / item Type Sentence
Intro
Intro
Intro Topic
Data
Collection
TS
SQ1
The
objectives CD
Body Para SQ1
of the
1
project CO
SQ1
CS
SQ1
TS
SQ2
The CD
Body Para activities SQ2
2 done in the CO
project SQ2
CS
SQ2
What can Rec
be
Ending improved Reason
for future
project Expected
Result
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