VIẾT SÁNG TẠO
Trình bày số liệu mà ko sứ dụng the number/amount/percentage of
The number of people in these countries who watch tennis on TV is 25.9
million.
Cách 1: Đẩy số liệu lên đầu làm chủ ngữ
25.9 million people watch tennis on TV.
Cách 2: Dùng “There …”
There are 25.9 million people watching tennis on TV.
Cách 3: Khác
Viewership (levels) for tennis average 25.0 million
Tennis attracts 25.9 million viewers
Exercise 1:
1. 4 million people visited HN in 2017.
There were 4 million visitors in HN in 2017.
HN welcomed 4 million in 2017.
The year 2017 recorded 4 million people visiting HN.
Tourist arrivals/visitor numbers in HN reached/stood at/ totalled/averaged 4
million in 2017.
2. The number of animals living in Ba Vi National Park is 15000.
15000 animals are living in Ba Vi National Park.
There are 15000 animals living in Ba Vi National Park.
Ba Vi National Park is the habitat/home of 15000 animals.
Ba Vi National Park is home to 15000 animals.
The animal population in Ba Vi National Park averages/totals 15000.
Animal numbers in Ba Vi National Park total 15000.
3. $150 was spent on food monthly by each Vnmese household.
A typical VNmese household spent an average of $150 on food each month.
The food bill for a typical VNmese household averaged $150 per month.
4. 26% was Dak Lak’s coffee production last year.
Dak Lak accounted for 26% of the total/national coffee production last year.
Dak Lak’s coffee yield/output constituted 26% of the total production last
year.
The coffee yield in Dak Lak last year averaged 26%.
Dak Lak yielded 26% of the total coffee production last year.
5. 5% was the unemployment rate in the USA in 2010.
5% of the US population was unemployed/jobless in 2010.
5% of Americans were unemployed/jobless in 2010.
There were 5% of Americans unemployed in 2010.
The year 2010 recorded a 5% unemployment rate in the USA.
The unemployment rate in the USA reached 5% in 2010.
6. 63% was the participation rate of those who exercised regularly.
There were 63% of the total participants exercising regularly.
The participation rate of those who exercised regularly was 63%.
63% of participants exercised regularly.
LINE GRAPH
1. Introduction: paraphrase -> What, Where, When
2. Overview:
+ Trend
+ Compare
+ Speed
+ Other
3. Body:
A. By B. By
categories timeline
Nhiều/ít đường Ít đường (3-4)
Độ to Xu hướng
Body 1: To - Body 1: điểm đầu. + điểm
Body 2: Nhỏ Increase/Decrease giữa
Body 2: điểm cuối
Từng Body:
+ Mô tả to nhất trước
+ Viết sáng tạo câu đầu tiên
+ Số: đầu, cuối, đỉnh, đáy, vượt mặt
1. Subject + Verb + Adv
The price Increased dramatically: gia tăng mạnh
- increase = rise = grow = go up: tăng
- decrease = drop = fall = go down = decline: giảm
- Lưu ý: luôn dùng động từ trên ở dạng chủ động. Các động từ này mang
nghĩa trung tính (không biết tăng mạnh hay nhẹ nên cần trạng từ)
- dramatically = considerably = sharply = steeply = substantially =
significantly =
exponentially: mạnh
- slightly = marginally = slowly = gradually = steadily: nhẹ, từ tư
2. Subject + Verb (mạnh)
The price shot up: giá tăng mạnh
- shoot up = rocket: tăng mạnh
- plunge = tumble: giảm mạnh
- Lưu ý: bản thân các động từ này đã có sắc thái mạnh, không cần thêm
trạng từ.
3. There was a/an + Adj + N in Subject
There was a dramatic increase in the price.
- dramatic = considerable = sharp = steep = substantial = significant
- an increase = a rise
- a decrease = a fall = a drop = a decline
4. Subject saw a/an + Adj + N
The price saw a sharp increase.
- see = witness = experience = undergo
5. Đạt đỉnh
to peak at + number = to reach a peak of + number = to hit a high of +
number = to
reach an all-time high of + number = to reach a record high of + number
6. Đạt đáy:
to hit a low of + number = to reach the lowest point of + number = to reach
an all-time
low of + number
7. Tăng gấp hai lần:
to double = to increase twofold
Chú ý: DOUBLE là Verb, phân biệt với BE DOUBLE (determiner) nghĩa là lớn
gấp 2 lần.
8. Tăng gấp n lần:
to increase nfold (n = three, four, ...)
9. Giảm một nửa:
to halve = to decrease by half = to decrease by 50%
10. Tăng giảm thêm 1 phần đặc biệt:
to increase / decrease by + phân số
VD: to increase by two-thirds: tăng thêm 2/3
to increase by half: tăng 1,5 lần (tăng thêm 0,5)
11. To mirror the climb
Dùng khi A tăng, và B cũng có xu hướng tương tự, tăng thêm một phần gần
gần như
vậy
VD: The rate of young adults in Japan went up slightly from 7% to 10%
between 2000 and
2005. 34 - 39-year-olds generally mirrored this climb, rising from 20% to 24%
over the period.
CẤU TRÚC NÂNG CAO CHO TREND
1. While A became more popular over the period, B became less popular.
→ While A become more popuar, B SHOWED THE REVERSE / OPPOSITE
TREND.
* từ popular tùy context phù hợp mới sử dụng.
2. All of the countries in question produced more films over the years.
→ All of the countries in question produced more films over the years, with
film output
in country A GROWING AT A (MUCH) HIGHER RATE.
→ The number of films made in these countries showed AN INCREASE OF
VARYING DEGREES, with the most significant change seen in the figure for
country A
* trong hoàn cảnh xu hướng của tất cả các đối tượng đều giống nhau, nên đề
cập tới đối
tượng có biến động nhiều nhất (ví dụ 1) để cập các đối tượng tăng không
đồng đều (ví dụ
2)
3. A surpassed / outstripped B to become the most popular destination.
→ A SUPPLANTED B AS THE PREDOMINANT destination.
→ By the end of the period, A HAD SURPASSED B to become the most
popular
destination.
* Trong nhiều bài, việc vượt mặt nhau xảy ra ở giữa giai đoạn và kéo dài đến
cuối, chúng
ta nên dùng thì quá khứ hoàn thành để tăng điểm Grammar.
Exercise 2
The line graph details how many foreign tourists visited three types of
destinations in a particular country in Europe from 1987 to 2007. Overall,
more people visited these attractions over the period, with the most
pronounced rise recorded in the coast and the lakes. Another remarkable
feature is that coastal areas were the most popular for most of the period,
except for 2002 when the lakes suddenly ranked first.
Body 1:
Looking at the chart in detail, 40000 foreigners visited coastal areas in 1987,
which was exactly/precisely four times as high as visitor numbers in the
lakes. Afterwards, the figure for the former decreased slightly to 35000 in
1992 and then made a strong recovery before rising moderately to a peak of
75000 in 2007. By contrast, the data for the latter increased at steady
intervals and soared to reach an all-time high of 75000 in 2002 when this
destination ranked first/dominated briefly/temporarily. It quickly lost its
popularity, ending the period at 50000 individuals.
Regarding the mountains, exactly 20000 visitors arrived here in 1987,
making it the second-most popular destination. In the next
