Method Prep - SAT Writing and Language
Method Prep - SAT Writing and Language
This packet contains a series of crucial writing and language strategies, as well as
questions to reference in the Official Study Guide for the New SAT (2016 Edition).
Conclusion
When starting any writing question it is essential to identify the subject and the verb as quickly as
possible. From here you want to identify whether your subject is singular or plural.
Consider replacing the subject with a pronoun and check for subject-verb agreement.
If you are dealing with an entire group as your subject always treat it as a singular noun.
A majority of the errors on the writing section stem from some form of subject-verb agreement. This
is a very, very important skill to master!
Let’s take a look at one that can be changed by inserting a semi-colon: I ran down the block. The run only
took me twenty seconds.
Here’s the rewrite:
I ran down the block; it only took me twenty seconds.
Conclusion
The SAT will always have a question on combining sentences, perhaps even more than one, so be on the
lookout for ways to use this strategy!
Verb Tense
Once students have successfully identified the verb within
the sentence they are dissecting the next step is to ensure
that it agrees with the remainder of the sentence. One
manner in which the exam will test your knowledge of verb
agreement is by altering the tense of the verb.
Tense: refers to the time in which the action is occurring
Past
Present
Future
Note: When analyzing the tense of a verb it is important to note what aspects of the sentence you can
and cannot change to determine the “dominant tense”
For example: Consider the following sentence
As soon as the musicians arrived at the concert hall, they begin to rehearse immediately.
Because the question is drawing our attention to the verb “begin” we need to utilize another verb
within the sentence to identify the proper tense. In this instance the answer lies in the first portion
of the sentence where we see the verb “arrived.”
The fact that the verb “arrived” is in the past tense, and we cannot change it, the remaining verbs
must follow suit and be in the past tense as well.
The “Present Perfect Tense” sentence implies that these regulations have been attempted for the
last ten years and, more importantly, are continuing to be attempted.
The key addition to the “Present Perfect Tense” is the word “have.” Either “have” or “has” is
necessary in order to correctly utilize the present perfect tense. The nature of the subject as either
singular or plural will determine which word is appropriate.
Conclusion
When you look to determine which tense is appropriate in a given situation, there will often be key
words in the sentence that will give you important hints about which tense is necessary. For example,
key words and phrases such as “since” and “throughout” suggest a sentence that calls for the present
perfect tense because they are used in situations in which action that began in the past is being
continued in the present.
The issue with this particular sentence is the fact that two of our verbs, “running” and “swimming,” end
in “-ing;” whereas, “took a walk” does not.
In order to correct this sentence “took a walk” needs to become “walking.” This creates what we call
parallelism amongst the verbs.
Example:
Jonny was at once annoying because of his unpredictability, and his imagination was a delight.
On the new format for the SAT you will often see a question structured as shown above. If you see a
large portion of the sentence underlined this should be an indicator to you that you may need to look
for something beyond simple subject-verb agreement.
This particular question is a classic example of parallel sentence structure.
How to tell:
The phrase “at once” implies that we will be comparing multiple items. Anytime we are listing
multiple items we need to make sure of parallelism.
There are multiple adjectives associated with the same subject. Anytime we see this we need to
check for parallelism!
How to correct it:
When looking to correct issues with parallel sentence structure you want to try and make your
sentence essentially a repeating format
Look at the –ing, -ing, -ing example from earlier! All of our verbs follow the same formula
For this example:
Jonny was at once annoying because of his unpredictability, and delightful because of his imagination.
Look at how similar that sentence is to itself! We have an adjective followed by “because of his” and a
character trait. Then we have another adjective followed by “because of his” and another character
trait.
That is the core of parallel sentence structure. Always be on the lookout for agreement within a
sentence! Identifying your subject and your verb will always help you, but remember; sometimes you
will have to go beyond just the basics! This is a higher level skill and may take some time to recognize,
but it can gain you valuable points on the writing section.
#5 - Relevance Lesson
Making sure that content is relevant to the text is very important. It is obviously a waste of time and text
to state things that are unnecessary or completely unrelated. Anytime you see anything that seems out
of place, and you are given the option to remove it, do so. As long as there are no other grammatical
errors, simpler and more direct answer choices are ALWAYS better answer choices.
#6 - Punctuation Lesson
Commas
The issue of comas is perhaps the most troublesome for
students. This section is meant to clear up some points about
commas.
Unsurprisingly, the children all enjoy when grandmother gives them candy.
2. To separate items in a list. Commas should be used to separate items on a list, as in the following.
The recipe calls for flour, sugar, salt, milk, eggs, and water.
You can take the word of phrase out of the sentence, and the sentence remains complete
You can put the word or phrase in parentheses, and the structure seems correct.
Bob, our sales manager, handles all high-priority deals on the company floor.
Joe Smith, a student athlete, earned a scholarship for great grades and athletic achievement.
The crowd cheered joyfully as the town president, a very popular man, rode down the street.
Notice that here, the non-essential clauses are all set off by two commas. Try taking them out to prove
to yourself that the sentences make sense without them.
4. To separate the first part of a continuing idea. When the first part of a sentence is the start of an
idea, the second is separated by a comma, as in the following.
The sun was shining, though there were some clouds in the sky.
He thinks we should’ve turned right, but I think we should have turned left.
Even though most of the wood had burned, the fireplace continued to give off plenty of heat.
Using too many commas or placing them incorrectly produces awkward pauses, sentence fragments, or
comma splices.
1. In the middle of an idea. Don’t break an idea in strange spots. In all of the following, note how the
sentences sound fine if the commas are removed.
She enjoyed the class, even though she didn’t understand all of the material.
2. Inside a non-essential clause. Don’t break up a non-essential clause. Don’t break up a non-
essential clause with unnecessary commas. In all of the following, note how the extra comma
makes the sentence sound choppy.
The Arctic, Portrayed as a barren, and depressing place, is actually full of natural beauty.
Tomorrow, as suggested, by the board, an open discussion about company policies will be held,
The men on the construction team, worn and weary, after the day’s work, returned home.
3. To separate independent clauses. Independent clauses are statements that don't depend on one
another. Think of them as a polar opposite of the “continuing idea” sentences discussed above.
Splitting them up with a comma creates a comma splice, as in the following. In every case, the piece
of separated by a, should be made into separate sentences, or is he at the very least with a
semicolon (;).
In the following passage, indicate whether the comma is acceptable or should be changed.
One morning,(1) I awoke to find a large box by the side of my bed. “This is odd,” I thought,(2) and I
jumped,(3) out of bed to open the box. I was excited,(4) to see what was inside the box,(5) I wondered
if it was a present from my brother. I took out a pair of scissors,(6) with the intention of cutting
carefully along the taped edges. When I looked inside the box,(7) I couldn’t believe my eyes: it was a
new video game system!
Solutions:
1. Correct: This comma is used to set off the introductory clause “One morning”
2. Correct: this comma is used to separate the first part of a continuing idea. Take it out, and the
sentence is a run-on.
3. Incorrect: this comma improperly breaks up the second idea of the sentence. The sentence sounds
fine without it.
4. Incorrect: this comma breaks up the first point of the sentence (“I was excited to see what was
inside the box…”)
5. Incorrect: this comma created a comma splice, because it separates two complete ideas (“I was
excited to see what was inside the box” and “I wondered if it was a present from my brother.”) A
comma should never be used to separate independent ideas. There should be a period or semicolon
here.
6. Incorrect: this comma created an unnecessary pause; the sentence sounds fine without it.
7. Correct: this comma properly sets off the introductory clause, “When I looked inside the box."
Semi-Colons
Put simply, semi-colons behave similarly to periods. Most students are aware that commas and periods
are not “interchangeable” punctuation marks, meaning that using a comma where a period belongs can
create a grammatical error called a comma splice that leads to a run-on sentence.
While there are small differences between periods and semi-colons, these small differences are not
tested on the SAT. For the purposes of success on the SAT, students should view a semi-colon as they
view a period: something that separates two independent clauses (complete sentences).
Example:
The bus got a flat tire and had to pull over, it took the tow truck over an hour to arrive.
In the case of this example, both of the clauses on either side of the comma are independent. This
means that they both function as full and complete sentences. The two clauses have been listed
below. Read them individually to tell that they are complete sentences.
Since both of these clauses are independent, it is improper to separate them with a comma. These two
clauses must, instead, be separated by a semi-colon or by a period. The corrected sentence is listed
below.
The bus got a flat tire and had to pull over; it took the tow truck over an hour to arrive.
Example: Driving down the street, the tree looked beautiful to me.
This sentence is incorrect because the opening clause (which is set apart from the sentence by a comma
and does not have a clear subject) is not followed by the subject of the clause. After reading “driving
down the street,” the first question we could ask is, “who was driving down the street?” The tree could
not have driven down the street; thus, we need to rearrange the sentence to make it clear and
correct. It should read: “Driving down the street, I saw a beautiful tree.” “I” is the subject of the
opening clause. Spotting these clauses and realizing that the subject of these clauses must immediately
follow can help you narrow down answer choices very quickly.
Note: Sometimes the makers of the test will try to trick you by including a possessive form of the
subject.
Example: After shopping at the mall, Theresa's shopping bags were full and her purse was empty.
This sentence is incorrect because it makes it sound as if the "shopping bags" were the ones shopping at
the mall. Instead, Theresa needs to be the subject. One helpful way to recognize this is that "Theresa's
shopping bags" can be re-worded as "the shopping bags of Theresa." This re-wording helps us see that
then the sentence would read: After shopping at the mall, the shopping bags of Theresa were full and
her purse was empty. The latter sentence is, of course, incorrect; the "shopping bags" were not
"shopping at the mall." The sentence should read: After shopping at the mall, Theresa had filled her
shopping bags and emptied her purse. This way the subject of the opening clause, "Theresa,"
immediately follows the opening clause.
In this case the pronoun “their” is plural and the subject “football
team” is singular. Remember that even though the football team is
made up of several players, the sentence is only discussing the single
team and not the many players. In this case you would need to change “their” to “its” to ensure proper
agreement.
Fortunately, the test occasionally leaves clues on the test to help you recognize when a sentence
exhibits disagreement. These are called “red flag” words because when you see them, they should put
up a red flag in your brain. Take the following example:
After it recruited many top athletes, the football team was ready for their game.
The two underlined pronouns both refer to the football team, but clearly disagree with each other. If
you ever see two disagreeing pronouns in a sentence, especially if one is underlined, you need to take a
hard look at the underlined pronoun to make sure that it exhibits proper agreement in the sentence.
Carla wants to ace all of the sections; to do well on it she has been taking many practice tests.
A. NO CHANGE
B. math
C. their challenges
D. them
The correct answer here is D, "them." The subject, "sections", is plural so the pronoun must be plural as
well. "Them" is a plural pronoun. "It" is a singular pronoun so Choice A can't be correct. By the way,
another word for the subject of a pronoun is "antecedent." A good strategy is to draw an arrow from the
pronoun to the proper antecedent (noun that comes before a pronoun) right on your test.
The following chart details a list of words to look out for called “Red Flag Words”. If you ever see these
words in an underlined portion on your test, make sure to realize that the SAT is most likely testing you
on pronoun use, and adjust your approach accordingly.
Remember that to identify a subject, ask yourself either of two questions: "What's being described?" or
"What's doing the verb?". The subject is always the thing being discussed or the thing doing the action
at a particular part of the sentence. Also note that subjects often appear before prepositions (of, for, in,
on, from). For example, consider the following sentence:
Here, the subject is "the number", (not "students"!) because it is the thing growing each year. Notice
how it appears before the preposition. This is a common occurrence, so look out for it! One technique to
use in this situation is to take everything from the preposition to the verb out of the sentence. Here,
that would transform the sentence to the following:
Because "number" is singular (if it were plural, it would be "numbers") it's now obvious that the "are"
should be changed to "is".
it, its
he, him, his
she, her, hers
they, them, their
I, me, one
The five swimmers had waited all season to shave their head for the championship meet.
The related words in this sentence, which happen to disagree, are “swimmers” (plural) and “head”
(singular). Once this relationship is identified it is easy to see the error. This sentence states that all five
swimmers share the same single head. This is, of course, not the case, and thus to achieve proper
number agreement, we would need to replace “head” with “heads”. Read the sentence through with
the replaced word and listen to the difference. Once you are able to master recognition of this error,
which you can learn by taking the quiz below, you will be able to easily move through these problems on
test day.
It is important to remember that this applies to related pieces of sentences only. Do not go so far as to
think that if you see one plural noun/pronoun/verb in a sentence that all other nouns/pronouns/verbs
need to be plural as well. Only related words need to follow this rule. This relationship can clearly be
seen in the example below and the following quiz questions.
Ever since they can remember, the two friends have aspired to be a professional football player.
A) NO CHANGE
The correct answer here is D. The sentence states that the two friends (plural) have aspired to be a
professional football player (singular). Since the two friends cannot be a single football player, we need
to change “a professional football player” to “professional football players”. This explanation for why
answer choice D is correct explains the error in answer choice A. Additionally, answer choices B and C
can be eliminated because of redundancy.
Note: This can be tricky because we know that the writer means the works of Shakespeare and not
Shakespeare himself, but read on a literal level, the comparison is incorrect and must be fixed.
How do we fix it?
I much prefer Star Wars to Shakespeare plays.
Now the writer has made it clear that s/he is talking about Shakespeare’s plays and not Shakespeare
himself.
Let’s look at another incorrect comparison:
I much preferred Max’s portrait to Kim.
You might’ve already spotted the problem. This sentence is comparing a portrait to a person. Adding
and apostrophes at the end of Kim would solve this problem nicely:
I much preferred Max’s portrait to Kim’s.
Here’s one last incorrect comparison, a type the test has used many times in the past:
The philosophers of the 1800s are much more interesting than today.
Did you spot the error? You’re probably catching on now, but if not, you soon will. The error here is that
the philosophers of the 1800s are being compared to a time period: today. The sentence should make it
clear that the philosophers of the 1800s are being compared to the philosophers of today. Here’s a
better version of that sentence:
The philosophers of the 1800s are much more interesting than the philosophers of today.
There we go! The incorrect comparison has been nicely fixed. Keep an eye out for sentences like this on
the SAT. At times, you’ll be asked to figure out which rewrite does the best job of fixing the error while
at other times you will only have to spot it. Either way, by now you will probably find these questions
much easier.
Remember: mastering just a few grammar topics can result in huge score differences.
A superlative is used when we are comparing more than two nouns, or all nouns in a particular
group. As in:
Between Mike, Steve, and I, Mike is the tallest.
Steve is the fastest person on the soccer team.
My grass is the greenest of all.
NOTICE: The comparative verbs all end in –er whereas all of the superlative adjectives end in –est. This
is one way of distinguishing between comparative and superlative adjectives. There are several other
methods that are equally important discussed below.
Practice Questions
Despite all of the research and opinions, the committee was still at odds over how to finance the new
museum. Ultimately, the committee members decided that the major banking firm offered the better
(1) option because of their ability to help facilitate the contracting as well. When all of the risks and
rewards were analyzed across all of their options the committee came to the conclusion that because
the major banking firm was more (2) experienced than their closest competitor it was worth the
additional cost to acquire their services. At the end of the day they were in a good (3) situation than
when they started the meeting.
1. A) better
B) good
C) best
D) more intelligent
2. A) more
B) most
C) as
D) equally
3. A) good
B) best
C) bad
D) better
Answers:
Question 1 is choice C because we are comparing the banking firm to ALL of its competitors so we need
the superlative form of the adjective.
A is incorrect because better is the comparative form of the adjective.
Question 2 is choice A because we are comparing the firm to one other competitor. As such we need a
comparative form of the adjective.
B is incorrect because most is the superlative form of the adjective.
C is incorrect because as is neither used as a comparative nor a superlative.
D is incorrect because equally would be grammatically incorrect within the context of the
sentence.
Question 3 is choice D because we need a comparative form of the adjective. The sentence is comparing
two situations.
Choice A is incorrect because it is the regular form of the adjective.
Choice B is incorrect because best is the superlative form of the adjective.
Choice C is incorrect because bad is the regular form of the adjective.
Along these lines, the SAT tests eliminating redundancy, or saying the same thing twice. Sometimes, it’s
not entirely obvious that anything is incorrect with the sentence. The tipoff: all of the answers will say
the same thing, and one will be short and sweet - this is probably the correct one.
The following examples demonstrate the kinds of things you’ll need to look out for.
Having come to the realization that he was tired, Jim decided against going to see the film.
A. NO CHANGE
B. Realizing with full knowledge
C. Having realizing
D. Realizing
Solution:
Choice D is correct. The sentence is trying to describe that Jim realized that he was tired, so he decided
against seeing the movie. There’s no reason not to have just the word “Realizing” at the beginning.
Choice B is too wordy and redundant; when one realizes, it is already implied that one has knowledge of
the situation. Lastly choice C sounds awkward.
Some redundancies feature straight definitions of words that need not be defined. The following
example demonstrates this case. Notice how all of the answer choices in this next example say
essentially the same thing, but one answer is nice and short.
Example 2. Redundancy.
In the old days, coin counters must have seen their jobs as tedious and exceptionally boring.
A. NO CHANGE
B. tedious
C. tedious and very repetitive
D. tedious and never-ending
Solution:
Choice B is correct. The word “tedious” means “boring, repetitive, and monotonous.” The original
phrasing and other choices repeat the definition without providing new or useful information.
The Rule: Anytime that you notice that a pronoun's function is being
tested, make sure to truly analyze the pronoun to determine if it is being
used properly.
Remember: Anytime that a pronoun is used, and it is unclear as to what noun the pronoun is referring,
you have to replace that pronoun with the specific noun. Otherwise there would be no way to be sure
what the author is talking about!
Take a look at a couple of examples below to get comfortable with this concept before attempting the
quiz.
Sarah and Karen were enjoying the hike up the mountain until she felt ill and they had to turn back for
home.
Why? Because it is unclear as to whether the pronoun “she” is referring to Sarah or Karen. Since we do
not know for sure who fell ill, we cannot use the pronoun and must either put "Karen" or "Sarah" in its
place.
Example: The company president and her coworker Linda both received credit for the completion of the
project despite the fact that she did all of the work.
Why? Because it is unclear as to whether the pronoun “she” is referring to the company president or to
her coworker Linda. Since we do not know for sure who did all of the work for the project, we cannot
use the pronoun and must either put "the president" or "Linda" in its place.
What’s wrong? The second sentence sounds ridiculous. Clearly the first sentence is written correctly
while the second one has a very glaring error. In this case the pronoun "I" is the correct pronoun to use
for the given sentence.
What's wrong? Again, the second sentence sounds horribly wrong. Notice that in this case, the
pronoun "me" is correct given the sentence.
These examples have clearly shown that there are occasions when the pronoun "I" is appropriate and
others in which the pronoun "me" is appropriate. This fact extends to all sentences, even ones that
have compound subjects like "my friend and I" and "my friend and me".
It may surprise you to hear that under certain circumstances the phrase "my friend and me" can be
correct! Yes, you read that correctly...it is not ALWAYS appropriate to say "my friend and I".
While both examples may sound fine, the second of the two is actually incorrect. The way to tell is to
eliminate the "my friend and" part of the sentence. When that is done, both sentences look like:
Now that we have done this, it is clear that the second sentence needs to change. By eliminating the
"my friend and" part of the sentence, you will always be able to find the appropriate agreement and
master this skill on the test.
Students are often tested on when to use "who" and when to use "whom." Here is an example:
A. NO CHANGE
B. whom
C. to whom
The correct answer is B. A good strategy is to change the sentence around: Would a person say "She
will be seeing him" or would a person say "She will be seeing he"? Obviously, in this case, a person
would say "She will be seeing him." Wherever you can substitute "him", the answer will be "whom."
Wherever you can substitute "he", the answer will be "who.”