The document outlines various ways young people can protect and improve their local environment, such as recycling, using public transport, and planting trees. It emphasizes the importance of these actions for creating cleaner and more pleasant areas. Additionally, it provides guidance on structuring an essay, including tips for writing introductions, body paragraphs, and conclusions.
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The document outlines various ways young people can protect and improve their local environment, such as recycling, using public transport, and planting trees. It emphasizes the importance of these actions for creating cleaner and more pleasant areas. Additionally, it provides guidance on structuring an essay, including tips for writing introductions, body paragraphs, and conclusions.
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Essay (Part 1)
Test 1, Part 1, Question 1 (see task on page 17)
What can young people do to
help protect and improve their
local environment?
There are many things young people can do to
Some ofthese are recycling, using cars les
First of al, they can mate sure that ings such as
cycled. Amd they can pick up any litter they find
in the street and put it into a rubbich bin.
Secondly, nowadays the air is polluted because too
many people use cars, even to go very short disan
Young people can try to use public transport or walk
or cycle to their destinations instead. By doing this
\as and they would be able to enjy cleane
| Finally chey can help t0 make their lo
public parks or gardens. They can also plant tres
dp pep whe ttt to gra
All these actions will make their areas look cleaner
| ane more pleasant and also help save the world
er future if
young people do everything possible to hel
‘and improve their environment.
Introduction
think this topic is really
:
people say that
Linking ideas
Its true th
Itis often said that... . Howeve
Giving opinions
fe thought about this and | ha
come to the conclusion tha
While | agree there are son
advantages in ..., | can also see
everal disadvantages.
It seems to me that
|.am convinced that this ist
ight way to do it.
Conclusion
king all of this into account,
| beliew
Having presented allt
iments for and agains
‘seems clear to me that
Finally, | fal ve
carefully and ou
want to include in four or
five clear paragraphs. S
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together with some language
Jou may want to use. You will
slevant to the topic ant
complex sentences usi
inking word:
+ Remember that you are
presenting you
ind you need to
some reasons or evident
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and avoid the
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AashbnaunnnsEssay (Part 1)
| Pienning your essay |
‘Aim to write five paragraphs.
Paragraph 1
The introduction. Try to write two sentences to avoid a
single-sentence paragraph. The first sentence can be
a re-phrasing of the essay title. The second sentence
can be a very brief outline of the three main ideas you
are going to include,
Paragraph 2
Deal with the first note: recycling.
Each note will be just a few words long. The note on
its own will not give you sufficient material. Before
you start writing, take a few minutes to expand them,
Here's a way to do it
11 Write down the notes (including your own) and
draw three lines from each one. Now concentrate
on each note in turn. Try to think of three ideas
that can add content to that note. For example:
2 Choose the best ideas from your notes and
start writing.
Paragraph 3
Deal with the second note: cycling or walking instead
of using cars,
Paragraph 4
Deal with the third note (your own): planting trees.
Paragraph 5
The conclusion. Summarise your main opinions by
referring briefly to the points mentioned in paragraphs
2, 3 and 4, Try to write at least two sentences to avoid
a single-sentence paragrap
En
When you finish writing an essay, use this checklist.
Content
Have you covered the two notes given and one of
your own?
‘Communicative achievement
's your style correct for an essay, i. is it fairly
formal? Are your opinions easy to follow?
Organisation
Have you divided your writing into paragraphs, with
an introduction and a conclusion?
Language
Have you used:
* some complex sentences using linking words?
+ a variety of grammatical structures and tenses?
+ some interesting vocabulary?
WRITING FILE: ESSAYEmail (Part 2)
Test 4, Part 2, Question 2 (see task on page 18)
E
This is an example of a Par
in Part 2 can be formal or i
in ail. Remember that the email or letter
form:
That's great news! You and your fiend will
‘ould see the natlonal
ke District, which is about ten kilometre
4 away. In my opinion, it would be a good idea
: or you to hi ecause public ranspor
isnot very g ind | haven't got a
There is a god 1m full of great displays
about the history of my city, which is not ~
boring at alll There is also an old
can visit, which is very special
Fd love to join you, but it would only be
the weekend because | have to attend classe
ftom Monday to Friday and | get home
Do email me or phone if you need me to do
Looking forward to seeing you again
Best wishes
Informal openings
ack, Hello Ja
Welcoming a visitor
bikes be
Giving reasons why you can't
do somethingLetter (Part 2)
Test 2, Part 2, Question 3 (see task on page 41)
| Dear Ms Roddick
1am writing to apply for your drama summer course
which I saw advertised in the lacal newspaper. I am
‘sventy-four years old and I am seudying history of
«are at college. I would very much like to attend the
| drama course because I lo
acting and I an very
een to improve my skill I would love to work in
the theatre in the future
1 have had a passion for acting and dancing since
yas ten years old. I have some experience in act
in school plays and dancing in a local ballet group.
1 have always enjoyed performing in front of an
|] | audience. I attended two short drama schools in
| )%2206 and 2007: the first one was a contemporary
theatre one and the second was about seventeenth
century Italian drama,
I wou
ld be available every afiernoon and early
| seedines evenings from Monday to Friday At the moment
am doing some part-time work on Saturday
‘mornings, but I would be free the rest of the weekend,
look forward to hearing from you. «
Yours sincerely,
Alecia Brown
Talking about yourself
think | am the right person for
the summer job because :
think | have the knowledge and
experience that is needed for
n very reliable and I get on well
with people
Talking about your experience
have no experience of working
full-time but | have hac
| have helped to organise a
number of school events
lve always enjoyed working
on projects to do with
Talking about your availability
would be able to
start immediately
iday, but | would be
able to werk weekend shifts in
question carefully to
he level of formality of
the letter. Remember the task
5 not tell you that you have
to write a formal letter itis up
to you to decide,
* Underline the points in
Question and decide how many
Nd which point or points you
ude in each one.
Note dow
want to use for each pein
r example, why do you want
D do the course? Don't star
you have got
When you write about your
experience, give clear details and
nember you do not have
el the truth
NG Fiue: LevTeR = EEArticle (Part 2)
Test 1, Part 2, Question 4 (see task on page 18)
Have fun and learn
with ‘WordsMix’! «
1 Are you tired of computer games that are a waste 0
ine Theos un and it alo helps you enrich
ld highly recommend this game to other readers
brain but it is not full of complicated rules
+ id anyth
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Addressing the reader directly
Just think about it. You'll probabl
ate told that this is the best
t ut don’t agree, and
ety sure you don’
ike to rea ‘
then th
Recommending
There are a number o why
good f
sis the ideal... for young
enagers becou
| can’t think of any oth
hat is as entertaining as this
lan your article be 4
to write, Pay attention to whi
you are writing the article for
adevst ay need a
‘lourful language that you r
ant to use. Remember that
he purpose of your article i
ain the reader
+ Use interesting details, examples
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«Report (Part 2)
Test 2, Part 2, Question 2 (see task on Page 41)
Introducing the report
The aim of isto a
eaasula sels! In this rep
have been asked to write a repor
Report on the about
School Magazine [iets | Making recommendations
: W | parasraph I would suggest that
| Inshis poe wil summarise my clamates opinions J | cst, | teseamstome tte best
| and our suggestion: for improvements. | solutions
—— There are a few changes
The articles like to recommend
aoe bit Taking all this into account,
Banice |'| They were well written and om topics that interest the I suggest that
Everybody loved the article by the student |
wre || students Finishing the report
|_ who is back from a school exchange in France, She has In conclusion, | think that
| impined several students to try nect yer. To conclude, | would say that
| To sum up, think
‘The sports page The main conclusion of my report
is that
This was of great interest to all, particularly as some
Taking evenhing into accouny,
| ofthe school reams are doing very well Srudents liked concude that
the very entertaining football and hockey reports,
* Read the question carefully and
The school news page plan your report before you start
ee ee townie. Think ofthe format you
4+ is great to have forthcoming dates for school events} ate going to use and whether
you are going to use headings.
Decide how many headings or
as the need t0 move the IT room and the plan to paragraphs you will need and
i make a quick calculation of the
| number of words you ean use
pb | Under each
| How it could be improved + Ramesaber you huh ta vnrite
approximately 180 words,
50 don't get carried away
‘rips organized by the school. Some students suggested and vate too much under
ary one heading
and aio be old about future changesin the shoo, |
. |)
rganise a summer concert
There was a genenal request for more articles about the
that the magazine should include interviews with \
* Remember you have to show
a range of language, so use
| ntegesting vocabulary and write
conclude, IM say that students agree that this is full sentences, linking some of
your ideas to produce some
nex sentences
students from other countries who visit our town.
| @ great magazine and most of them would like to
contribute to it in future. Include a conclusion, even if it
J isshort
“Cc
ck that you have used a
smi-formal or formal style and
correct any informal language
you may have used.
WRITING FILE: REPORT Ta jReview (Part 2)
Test 1, Part 2, Question 3 (see task on page 18)
Introducing the plot
This. is about
Bary is about the life of eight | eee one
ours and spend a lt of time t | is. takes the reader into
| antasy world
seis ate Podieien woe A opinions
is outgoing and full of enshusiasm while
people, they ofien do crazy unpredictable things WJ | mera don’t think the female characte
that we would not do in real life and this is | s tue tol
Pee att les The storys so exciting you don't
swhat makes the series so enjoyable. For example Maay issn eichip
you can never guess who they will fall in . found the plot rather confusing
love wish! Recommending only for a
certain audience
love this series because itis full of humo this ben exslert..fer
and dram you get to laugh and also to cry teenagers, but | don’t thin
yon eur | would appeal to
I wing the in she character
fis. is ot
| relationships and I can almost believe they are {would ‘
friend Ewe
A 'd recommend it to people up to the age of 40 pres We (eras
the main characters. Once they have watched it
a fow times, I arm sure theyll find it very hard
}~-|-¥0" mis an episode! However, as the humour is} :
ted at the younger generation, older people |p 3
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might not find it so appealing. « ain | ou
to use varied
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