Class code: 223_71ENG210023_24
Student’s name: HUỲNH NGỌC PHƯƠNG TRINH
Peer editor’s name: : LÊ THỊ ANH THƯ
Date: 03/7/2023
WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON 7
Unit:
Topic:
Describe your favorite childhood memory.
1st draft
When I was a kid, I uesed to bathe in the rain and that is my favorite childhood
memory. On every summer vacation, my parents often take me back to my
hometown. I remember that time in outside was heaving rain and my brother
asked me “Do you want to bathe in the rain? ”. So, I reply “Yeah! I like it” and
then we played in the rain. In addition, I also invited a few kids in the village to
play with me and we played games like chase, hide and seek,…I feel very happy,
interesting because it was the first time I had bathe in the rain. In short, it's a very
special memory for me because now that I am an adult, so I can’t play as when I
was young.
Self-assessment (checklist)
Content Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Task Response
Is the paragraph at least 80 words? Y
Does the paragraph have a clear topic sentence
Y
that states the main ideas?
Does the paragraph have a concluding Y
sentence that rephrases the topic sentence,
summarizes main points, and/or gives the
writer's opinion?
Does the paragraph focus on describing people,
Y
objects, or places?
Coherence & Cohesion
Are there one topic sentence, at least two
supporting sentences, and one concluding Y
sentence in the paragraph?
Is there at least 1 transition word used to link
the sentences? (First of all, In addition, Also, In Y
conclusion, ...)?
Lexical Resource
Are there any spelling errors? Idk
Does the paragraph have descriptive details
(using adjectives, information related to five Y
senses, prepositional phrase)
Grammar Range and Accuracy
Are there any errors in verb tenses and subject-
Idk
verb agreement?
Do you capitalize the first letter of each
sentence and put punctuation marks at the end Y
of the sentence?
Peer assessment (checklist)
Content Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Task Response
Is the paragraph at least 80 words? Y
Does the paragraph have a clear topic sentence
Y
that states the main ideas?
Does the paragraph have a concluding Y
sentence that rephrases the topic sentence,
summarizes main points, and/or gives the
writer's opinion?
Does the paragraph focus on describing people,
Y
objects, or places?
Coherence & Cohesion
Are there one topic sentence, at least two
supporting sentences, and one concluding Y
sentence in the paragraph?
Is there at least 1 transition word used to link
the sentences? (First of all, In addition, Also, In Y
conclusion, ...)?
Lexical Resource
Are there any spelling errors? N
Does the paragraph have descriptive details
(using adjectives, information related to five Y
senses, prepositional phrase)
Grammar Range and Accuracy
Are there any errors in verb tenses and subject-
N
verb agreement?
Do you capitalize the first letter of each
sentence and put punctuation marks at the end Y
of the sentence?
Final version
When I was a kid, I uesed to bathe in the rain and that is my favorite childhood
memory. On every summer vacation, my parents often take me back to my
hometown. I remember that time in outside was heaving rain and my brother
asked me “Do you want to bathe in the rain? ”. So, I reply “Yeah! I like it” and
then we played in the rain. In addition, I also invited a few kids in the village to
play with me and we played games like chase, hide and seek,…I feel very happy,
interesting because it was the first time I had bathe in the rain. It's a very special
memory for me because now that I am an adult, so I can’t play as when I was
young.
Rubric for grading
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