Class code:231_71ENG210023_77
Student’s name: LÂM HUỲNH TRÂM
Peer editor’s name:PHẠM TRẦN QUỲNH ANH
Date:25/10/2023
WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON 7
Unit:
Topic: A place of summer holiday
1st draft
Write your response (draft version) here
Self-assessment (checklist)
Content Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Task Response
Is the paragraph at least 80 words? Yes
Does the paragraph have a clear topic
Yes
sentence that states the main ideas?
Does the paragraph have a concluding
sentence that rephrases the topic sentence,
Yes
summarizes main points, and/or gives the
writer's opinion?
Does the paragraph focus on describing
yes
people, objects, or places?
Coherence & Cohesion
Are there one topic sentence, at least two
supporting sentences, and one concluding yes
sentence in the paragraph?
Is there at least 1 transition word used to link Yes
the sentences? (First of all, In addition, Also, In
conclusion, ...)?
Lexical Resource
Are there any spelling errors? Yes
Does the paragraph have descriptive details
(using adjectives, information related to five Yes
senses, prepositional phrase)
Grammar Range and Accuracy
Are there any errors in verb tenses and
No
subject-verb agreement?
Do you capitalize the first letter of each
sentence and put punctuation marks at the end Yes
of the sentence?
Peer assessment (checklist)
Content Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Task Response
Is the paragraph at least 80 words? Yes
Does the paragraph have a clear topic
Yes
sentence that states the main ideas?
Does the paragraph have a concluding
sentence that rephrases the topic sentence,
Yes
summarizes main points, and/or gives the
writer's opinion?
Does the paragraph focus on describing
Yes
people, objects, or places?
Coherence & Cohesion
Are there one topic sentence, at least two
supporting sentences, and one concluding Yes
sentence in the paragraph?
Is there at least 1 transition word used to link Yes
the sentences? (First of all, In addition, Also, In
conclusion, ...)?
Lexical Resource
Are there any spelling errors? Yes
Does the paragraph have descriptive details
(using adjectives, information related to five Yes
senses, prepositional phrase)
Grammar Range and Accuracy
Are there any errors in verb tenses and
No
subject-verb agreement?
Do you capitalize the first letter of each
sentence and put punctuation marks at the end Yes
of the sentence?
Final version
In summer holiday ,i usually go to beach
example :VungTau beach ,PhuQuoc island,LySon island,but i like
most is QuyNhon city.First of all we can weather in there very sunny
and hot but i don’t care about this,the reason i want to go to there
beacause it has a beautiful nature,blue sea suitable for relax ,play
and see some marine species in there.I feel very
comfortable ,happy,enjoy and the special i like here is a landscape,i
hope i have a lot of free time for i can go to there.It is a wonderful
place,which is suitable for children and audult to go.
Rubric for grading
WRITING RUBRIC.xlsx
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