Class code:231_71ENG110013_80

Student’s name:Nguyễn Minh Hoàng

Peer editor’s name:Nguyễn Thu Hoài
Date: 26/10/2023

WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON 7

Unit:2
Topic:

Where do you think is the best place for street foods?

• 1st draft

OUTLINE
Topic sentence: The most popular street food among young people is Ho Thi Ky
Concluding sentence:In short,young people are passionate about eating street food because of
the variety of dishes,so Ho Thi Ky has become the most popular place for young people to
come and enjoy their food

• Self-assessment (checklist)
Sentences Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Does the topic sentence introduce the main idea of a
Y
paragraph?
Is the topic sentence NOT too specific or too
Y
general?
Does the topic sentence have a topic and (a)
Y
controlling idea(s)?
Is the concluding sentence the last sentence in the
Y
paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence restate the main idea
Y
of the paragraph?
 Does the concluding sentence give the writer’s final
Y
thought on the topic?
Does the concluding sentence have transitional
Y
words or phrases at the beginning?
Do the topic sentence and concluding sentence end
Y
with correct punctuation?

• Peer assessment (checklist)

Sentences Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Does the topic sentence introduce the main idea of a
Y
paragraph?
Is the topic sentence NOT too specific or too
Y
general?
Does the topic sentence have a topic and (a)
Y
controlling idea(s)?
Is the concluding sentence the last sentence in the
Y
paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence restate the main idea
Y
of the paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence give the writer’s final
Y
thought on the topic?
Does the concluding sentence have transitional
Y
words or phrases at the beginning?
Do the topic sentence and concluding sentence end
Y
with correct punctuation?

• Final version

OUTLINE
Topic sentence: The most popular street food among young people is Ho Thi Ky
Concluding sentence: In short,young people are passionate about eating street food,so Ho Thi
Ky has become the most popular place for young people to come and enjoy their food with a
variety of dishes.
Topic:

Write about a beautiful place in Vietnam.

• 1st draft

OUTLINE
Topic sentence: Da Nang is the dream kingdom of many people
Concluding sentence: In In brief, Da Nang has poetic looks combined with romance creating a
city visited by many tourists,a place filled with the most unique and wonderful dreamy
memories.

• Self-assessment (checklist)
Sentences Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Does the topic sentence introduce the main idea of a
Y
paragraph?
Is the topic sentence NOT too specific or too
Y
general?
Does the topic sentence have a topic and (a)
Y
controlling idea(s)?
Is the concluding sentence the last sentence in the
Y
paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence restate the main idea
Y
of the paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence give the writer’s final
Y
thought on the topic?
Does the concluding sentence have transitional
Y
words or phrases at the beginning?
 Do the topic sentence and concluding sentence end
Y
with correct punctuation?

• Peer assessment (checklist)

Sentences Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Does the topic sentence introduce the main idea of a
Y
paragraph?
Is the topic sentence NOT too specific or too
Y
general?
Does the topic sentence have a topic and (a)
Y
controlling idea(s)?
Is the concluding sentence the last sentence in the
Y
paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence restate the main idea
Y
of the paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence give the writer’s final
Y
thought on the topic?
Does the concluding sentence have transitional
Y
words or phrases at the beginning?
Do the topic sentence and concluding sentence end
Y
with correct punctuation?

• Final version

OUTLINE
Topic sentence: Da Nang is the dream kingdom of many people
Concluding sentence: In brief, Da Nang poetic looks combined with romance creating a city
visited by many tourists, a place filled with the most unique and wonderful dreamy memories
Topic:

Why do many people like spring?

• 1st draft

OUTLINE
Topic sentence:Spring is a beautiful time together that everyone likes the most
Concluding sentence:In conclusion, Spring allows us to reunite with family because this is the
moment when everyone eats meals and creats beautiful memories together.

• Self-assessment (checklist)
Sentences Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Does the topic sentence introduce the main idea of a
Y
paragraph?
Is the topic sentence NOT too specific or too
Y
general?
Does the topic sentence have a topic and (a)
Y
controlling idea(s)?
Is the concluding sentence the last sentence in the
Y
paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence restate the main idea
Y
of the paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence give the writer’s final
Y
thought on the topic?
 Does the concluding sentence have transitional
Y
words or phrases at the beginning?
Do the topic sentence and concluding sentence end
Y
with correct punctuation?

• Peer assessment (checklist)

Sentences Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Does the topic sentence introduce the main idea of a
Y
paragraph?
Is the topic sentence NOT too specific or too
Y
general?
Does the topic sentence have a topic and (a)
Y
controlling idea(s)?
Is the concluding sentence the last sentence in the
Y
paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence restate the main idea
Y
of the paragraph?
Does the concluding sentence give the writer’s final
Y
thought on the topic?
Does the concluding sentence have transitional
Y
words or phrases at the beginning?
Do the topic sentence and concluding sentence end
Y
with correct punctuation?

• Final version

OUTLINE
Topic sentence: Spring is a beautiful time together that everyone likes the most
Concluding sentence: In conclusion, Spring allows us to reunite with family because this is the
moment when everyone eats meals and creats beautiful memories together.