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Between 1972 and 1992, the figure for ‘adult fiction’ rose from a fifth to a

quarter, while/whereas, the percentages of ‘biography’ and ‘others’


decreased by the same amount for each, 20% to 15% and 25% to 20%,
respectively.
Likewise/Similarly, …
Tripled
Three times higher than
, with ‘travel’ representing a miniscule minorty of a tenth.

(Ánh)
The given pie charts gives information about the percentage/distribution of
five categories of books: adult fiction, children’s fiction, biography, travel,
and others sold by a certain bookseller in the years 1972, 1992, and 2012.
Overall, the sales of adult fiction and children’s fiction experienced
significant increased between 1972 and 2012, while others almost dropped
slightly. Noticeably, the percentage of travel books rose dramatically from
15% to 18% between 1972 and 1992 before dropping 8% in 2012.

The figure for adults fiction books observed a dramatic rise from 20% in
1972 to exactly 25% in 1992. Likewise, there was a considerable rise in the
total number of children’s fiction books from 20% to just over a fifth. In
contrast, the data for biography books saw a gradually decline from 20% in
1972 to 15% in 1992.
Discourse markers: likewise, in contrast  Coherence and Cohesion

(Vy)
The given pie charts provide information about five different types of books
sold by a bookseller over the course of 40 years, commencing in 1972.
From an overall perspective, it is clearly obvious that the percentage of ‘adult
fiction’ and ‘children’s fiction’ saw an upward trend, while the opposite was
true for the others. Remarkedly, the figure for ‘adult fiction’ consistently
accounted the majority  plurality of the total kinds of books over the
featured years.
Type/kind/genre
The others = the remaining categories/genres
(Tâm)
The given pie charts provide a breakdown of five different kinds of books,
namely ‘adult fiction,’ ‘children’s fiction,’ ‘biography,’ ‘travel,’ and ‘others’
sold by a bookseller over the course of 40 years, commencing in 1972.
Overall, it is clearly obvious that most kinds of books experienced a
downward trajectory, with the exception of ‘adult fiction’ and ‘children’s
fiction’ throughout the period. Noticeably, the figure for ‘adult fiction’
outmarched ‘others’ over the timeline, being the first highest kind of books
that attracted buyer.
The proportion of ‘others’ accounted for a modest plurality 25% of total,
being the highest figure in 1972 before dropping by a tiny 5% of books in
1992. By contrast, while the figure for ‘travel’ was responsible for an
unimpressive minority 15% of books in 1972, it rose slightly to just over a
fifth in 1992. Whereas the percentage of ‘biography’ and ‘children’s fiction’
was at a fairly insubstantial minority 20% in 1972, the segment of
‘biography’ showed a margin decline to an unimpressive minority 15% in
1992 and ‘children’s fiction’ climb slightly to a mere minority 22% of books
in 1992.

The given pie charts provides a break down of five kinds of books sold by
a bookseller over the period of 40 years, commencing 1972.

Overall, it is clearly obvious that all datas decareased with varying degrees
over the period, excepting for the statistic of ‘adult’ & ‘childrend’s fiction’
demonstrated an upward trajectory. The figure for ‘others’ had 
recorded/demonstrated/represented highest data in 1972, while the data of
‘adult fiction’ recorded all-time high from 1992 to 2012.
The proportion of ‘adult fiction’, ‘childrend fiction’ & ‘biography’ accounted
for around two third of the books in 1972. There a was slight rise in the
proportion of ‘adult fiction’ from 20% to 25% between 1972 and 1992. A
marginal increase in the total number of ‘travel’ from 15% to 18%, whereas
the percentage of ‘childrend fiction’ saw a steadly from 20% to 22% from
1972 to 1992.
The precentage of ‘adult fiction’ accounted for around almost a half of the
production of five kinds books, being the highest figure in 2012, at
a substabtial minorities of 45%.

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