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Jennifer Notes

The notes provide feedback for Jennifer's performance, emphasizing the need for more emotional expression and physicality, particularly in her interactions with John. Specific suggestions include exaggerating emotions, improving stage directions, and delivering lines with spontaneity rather than rehearsed precision. Overall, the focus is on enhancing her character portrayal through dynamic gestures and vocal delivery.

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Jennifer Notes

The notes provide feedback for Jennifer's performance, emphasizing the need for more emotional expression and physicality, particularly in her interactions with John. Specific suggestions include exaggerating emotions, improving stage directions, and delivering lines with spontaneity rather than rehearsed precision. Overall, the focus is on enhancing her character portrayal through dynamic gestures and vocal delivery.

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NOTES : Jennifer #3

General Notes:

◼ WRONG EMPHASIS in areas and areas needing emphasis aren’t getting


emphasis.
◼ TOUCH John be more physical with him, flirtatious behavior missing.
◼ Polishing up one Stage directions and smoothing out getting off and on
table.
◼ DRAMATIZE AND EXAGGERATE EVERYTHING. If you grabbing Tristan
please GRAB him, if you comforting Tristan be assuring not uninterested.
◼ We lose you in terms of speech and emotions, sometimes you bland
sometimes your voice gets more emotionless or you slowly lower you
voice however this isn’t a constant issue.
◼ USE YOUR HAIRRRRRRRR! Twirl it around be Flirtatious, emotion change
very quickly from in-love to disgust. Have extreme emotion changes by
exaggerating.
◼ It all sounds to rehearsed stop trying to remember your lines in your
head and wait for the cut off, just say immediately like you do not care
when you hear the last cue word, don’t let him finished pause and then
say.

Lines:

JENNIFER. Hello, My name is Jen, always a Bridesmaid,


never a Bride.
JOHN. Hi, I’m- (NO PAUSE JUST IMMEDIATELY GO
OVER HIM WHEN YOU HERE HI-)
JENNIFER. I’m looking for the perfect guy. You look like
the perfect guy. Someone who’s everything I’m looking for.
You know, you really are my type. (All of it sounding like its
in one breathe.)
JENNIFER. OH! I love animals.(you sound like your just
trying to get rid of him, Be more happy about loving more
animals by maybe making crazy emphasis and gestures by
“I love” EG maybe bringing your hands to you heart.)
JENNIFER. Except dogs, I can’t stand dogs.(delivery is
Amazing, now use your arms get chills or just so so
disgusted where your face and neck and extreme or like
you want to vomit. Make sure its just 100x extreme when
it comes to visually saying the line.)
JENNIFER. Some people hate cats, but I think they’re
Fantastic! ( Say the some people hate cats but say it like its
the so unbelievable you cant believe it like if someone told
you they related to a mars alien.)
JENNIFER. Oh no, you’re not one of those people who
make animals your whole life are you?(Pause small
Pause)
You don’t have one of those (Make air quotes while
mocking and make these air quotes extreme with your
hands everywhere very exaggerated.) “ I don’t need people
because I have a pet” complexes?

JENNIFER. Sorry(Pause get up and start walking away


so disgusted like you been vomited on and need to leave
rn.), I don’t date needy guys.(sassy and so uninterested
with some a huge eye roll.)
(Bell.)

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