4D Loom Video
Outreach Script
DISCLAIMER
This template can benefit greatly from any type of personalization,
humor, or wit.
Feel free to take each section of the template (Introduction, Value,
Call-to-Action),
And tweak them to fit best your offer and your prospects.
Script
Introduction
Hey <prospect’s name>,
So you don’t actually know me,
But my name is <your name>.
And I just wanted to make this really quick video to just go through your <what
you’re helping them with>,
And just giving you some feedback on it just because this is something that I do
often,
And I had some suggestions that I thought you might be able to get some value out
of.
Value
{Start going through the thing you plan to give them advice on}
Useful phrases:
1) “So one thing that I noticed is that <thing that could be improved> could be more
effective,
Just because in my past experience I found that <explain why what they’re doing
now might not be effective>.
So that could be something where you’re missing out on <result they want>”
Variables explained:
<result they want> -> This could be sales, leads, opt-ins, conversions, etc.
2) Another thing that I wanted to show you is <a suggestion>.
Now this might be something that you’re already familiar with,
But if not,
Then I thought that maybe I’d just bring it up to you because it’s something that
helped me a lot in my past.
So all the <suggestion> does is that <explain the suggestion and its benefits>.
Now it works because <explain why your suggestion works>,
And it’s something that helped me a lot too.
And also,
Other big influencers like <namedrop> actually use <your suggestion> and they get
tons of <results>.
So that could be something that could be worked on as well.
Variables explained:
<a suggestion> -> You can give it a name to make it more intriguing.
<namedrop> -> Other big influencers like Russell Brunson, Alex Hormozi, etc.
3) I actually had another example here of <a suggestion> that I’ve done for one of
my <practices / clients>,
And just looking at this,
<explain why your suggestion works>,
And in my experience,
I also found that <give another reason why your suggestion works>.
Variables explained:
<practices / clients> -> If you’ve written a free value previously for someone, you can
use them and the free value you did for the example (they don’t need to work with
you necessarily). You can namedrop the person you did free value for if they said that
they like it.
4) I think there was one last thing that I wanted to bring up to you.
So because I had some free time and this is something that I genuinely like to do,
I went ahead and got you something that I want to show you really quickly.
So this is <personalized value for the prospect made as an example>
As you can see, it has a <suggestion / improvement>,
So that instead of it being <pain point they previously faced>,
But seems more <effective in a certain way> than the previous version.
And then we also have <another suggestion / improvement>,
So that it <achieves a better result>,
And then another thing to <achieve a dream result>,
Is this part where <explain a third suggestion / improvement>,
So you can <avoid pain point>.
Variables explained:
<personalized value for the prospect made as an example> -> This could be an
email, caption, opt-in page, sales page headline rewrite, etc.
<pain point they previously faced> -> Example: So that instead of it being vague.
<effective in a certain way> -> For example: the headline seems more compelling.
Call-to-Action
So those are just some ideas,
I literally put them together in ten minutes,
And if you found any value in this, just let me know,
Because there are probably some other ways I could add some value to what you’re
doing,
And could potentially get you a better <dream result from the thing you help them
with>.
So if that’s something you’d be open to talk about,
Just let me know and we can have a quick conversation about it.
Alright <prospect’s name>,
That’s it for now,
And I’ll see you later, bye.
